[rem sleep]

Andromeda x Itsuki

I rolled 4 x 11 so Andromeda x Itsuki

Kit 1 - Lava Skies
shine edit [standard]
hair edit [common]
tail edit [common]
long fur [common]
colored sclera [common]
pupil edit [uncommon]
munchkinism [rare]

Kit 2 - Silver + Gold
shine edit [standard]
back mane [common]
hair edit [common]
tail edit [common]
long fur [common]
pupil edit [uncommon]
ear edit [uncommon]

[WanSham]

////bless these kids
holy boio
The only thing I can think of is that the right child's braid, pony-tail thing's end is a bit cut off?
other than that these be some 20/10 kids wOO

[Rakkun]

Goodness your babes are A++ <3

[nebulavery]

I'm nitpicking bc these kits are stunning but here's what hits me as having room for improvement:

• I'm not really sure where the grey on the right kit came from??? Andromeda has maybe a slight bit of grey if you squint but Itsuki has none at all
• The left kit's design resembles Andromeda's a little too closely, I think because they both have munchkinism and the Poofy Sassy Chest - if the designs + most of the edits (exept for the munchkinism, schlera, ears, + back mane) were switched, that'd help (and it'd help the lava kit's eye stand out more)
• I'm not seeing a whole lot of Itsuki in either of the kits - Itsuki's most distinctive feature (to me, anyways) is their loose + flowy hair, and both of the kits' hair is all one big mass
• The kink in the left kit's tail is a little unnatural looking???

Mmm okay praises now because I am in love with these kiddos:

• Your edits are super smooth and flow well with the design
• Hoo boy I can't stop staring at the hair highlights, they look so good
• The colors are well-chosen and don't look cobbled together
• These kits aren't flat looking but also don't look super blendy and that's a hard balance to strike
• The flat color parts of the design fit well with the gradient bits

anyways 10/10 would stare at intently for ten minutes again

[rem sleep]

@nebulavery -- dude I totally see where you're coming from!! I tried to smooth out that kink in the left's tail but it didn't seem to want to adjust itself. //D Also, the grey is color blending actually! ; v ; A lot of plumerian/sima artists use blending to get more variety in kits so they don't take too strongly after their parents, after doing the left kit I was scared the right would either take too strongly after Andromeda again or too much after Itsuki.. also the reason for the hair 'mass' is primarily because I tried to do the flowy hair thing... and ended up with this anyway. //D

also random fun fact but believe it or not Itsuki's back marking is that dark color on the left kit, oops.

thank you for the feedback! :0c

I'm unsure how the braid-ponytail thinger is off tho I'd need advice on how to fix that one. //D I may try to re-do the tail later? ; c ; it still bugs me.