First of all, I really love the hair and the smoothness of it- how you drew the lines and how neat it is. Kudos on the last entry's hair aswell, really sweet looking and the ombre is very neat.
The design is quite unique and the color pallete you really compliments each other in their own way. Though, I do find the 'glow' of the markings to be not very 'clean' so say it more simply. It just looks out of place especially with the theme that you went with. Experimenting and finding a design style is good, however.
The shine doesn't- shine, so I do think you can improve on that. It's quite the mix too- trying challeging yourself by making simple shines that matches your art. I do think that keeping things simple but unique in it's own way would be your style- but hey, don't let me tell you how to live your life.
costal cowgirl / law student / CS member since 2012 01/2022 UPDATE ---> I've chosen to leave the character community however, I am keeping my closed species adopts as they mean quite a lot to me I'm here now mostly for events