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Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus. by *Comet*

Artist *Comet* [gallery]
Time spent 4 hours, 39 minutes
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Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus.

Postby *Comet* » Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:32 am

Please look at the "colored in" version before critiquing please. :3 I re-sized the muzzles. :3
Timer `LIES, but not by a lot. X.x

This is Lihmeth's Aether. Cadmus is totally irked by his sons "rude" showing off (but like he doesn't do it him self. xD).
Crit appreciated. C8

Please fill out the critique form please. :3 It's just an "easy" way to give me feed back on my art. <3 Please be truthful and tell it to me like it is. I want to improve. You don't have to answer all the questions, or all of them for that matter. It's simply something you can do if you have the time and if you feel like helping a younger artist. xp
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[b]Is my drawing intermediate worth?:[/b]
[b]Why or why not?:[/b]
[b]what did I do absolutely wrong?:[/b]
[b]What did I not do so well on?:[/b]
[b]What could I fix to make it look better?:[/b]
[b]Do you have any tips for me?:[/b]
[b]Anything else you'd like to point out?:[/b]


Thank you for looking!
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I'm would really appreciate constructive crit from more experienced members(PM to me please!).

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Re: Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus. WIP!

Postby *Comet* » Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:15 pm

Finished Cadmus... C8
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I'm drowning in school so that's part of my reason for going for a while. I'll be back in December then gone again after. I will probably randomly appear places(ninja like. 0,o).

Only taking art request through PM(Do NOT PM me with an art request unless you have late 09-08 rares/Vrares! Those are the only pets I'll accept for art.)Please PM me for examples. Also please note I have not posted any art on CS for 1-2 months so my art HAS improved since the art I'll show you. x3

I'm would really appreciate constructive crit from more experienced members(PM to me please!).

I'm not collecting pets. Only gaining them to spend on art! 8D

Thanks for reading my sig. ~<3
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Re: Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus. WIP!

Postby *Comet* » Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:07 pm

Grass is finished for the most part. :3
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I'm drowning in school so that's part of my reason for going for a while. I'll be back in December then gone again after. I will probably randomly appear places(ninja like. 0,o).

Only taking art request through PM(Do NOT PM me with an art request unless you have late 09-08 rares/Vrares! Those are the only pets I'll accept for art.)Please PM me for examples. Also please note I have not posted any art on CS for 1-2 months so my art HAS improved since the art I'll show you. x3

I'm would really appreciate constructive crit from more experienced members(PM to me please!).

I'm not collecting pets. Only gaining them to spend on art! 8D

Thanks for reading my sig. ~<3
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Re: Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus. WIP!

Postby obsceneSymphony » Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:53 am

Is my drawing intermediate worth?: Yep!
Why or why not?: There's lots of detail and shading o3o
what did I do absolutely wrong?: nothing
What did I not do so well on?: the mane and tail shouldn't just cut off, there should be some strands wisping out, and the muzzle should be a bit smaller than where the face starts.
What could I fix to make it look better?: ^
Do you have any tips for me?: No, I'm not as good.
Anything else you'd like to point out?: Nope.
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Re: Lihmeths Aether &Cadmus. WIP!

Postby *Comet* » Fri Nov 12, 2010 4:07 am

Okay, thank you so much!
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I'm drowning in school so that's part of my reason for going for a while. I'll be back in December then gone again after. I will probably randomly appear places(ninja like. 0,o).

Only taking art request through PM(Do NOT PM me with an art request unless you have late 09-08 rares/Vrares! Those are the only pets I'll accept for art.)Please PM me for examples. Also please note I have not posted any art on CS for 1-2 months so my art HAS improved since the art I'll show you. x3

I'm would really appreciate constructive crit from more experienced members(PM to me please!).

I'm not collecting pets. Only gaining them to spend on art! 8D

Thanks for reading my sig. ~<3
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