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Please look at the "colored in" version before critiquing please. :3 I re-sized the muzzles. :3
Timer `LIES, but not by a lot. X.x

This is Lihmeth's Aether. Cadmus is totally irked by his sons "rude" showing off (but like he doesn't do it him self. xD).
Crit appreciated. C8

Please fill out the critique form please. :3 It's just an "easy" way to give me feed back on my art. <3 Please be truthful and tell it to me like it is. I want to improve. You don't have to answer all the questions, or all of them for that matter. It's simply something you can do if you have the time and if you feel like helping a younger artist. xp

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[b]Is my drawing intermediate worth?:[/b]
[b]Why or why not?:[/b]
[b]what did I do absolutely wrong?:[/b]
[b]What did I not do so well on?:[/b]
[b]What could I fix to make it look better?:[/b]
[b]Do you have any tips for me?:[/b]
[b]Anything else you'd like to point out?:[/b]


Thank you for looking!

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Finished Cadmus... C8

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Grass is finished for the most part. :3

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Is my drawing intermediate worth?: Yep!
Why or why not?: There's lots of detail and shading o3o
what did I do absolutely wrong?: nothing
What did I not do so well on?: the mane and tail shouldn't just cut off, there should be some strands wisping out, and the muzzle should be a bit smaller than where the face starts.
What could I fix to make it look better?: ^
Do you have any tips for me?: No, I'm not as good.
Anything else you'd like to point out?: Nope.

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Okay, thank you so much!