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End date : May 30th
Another Kiamara adopt for everybody - this time a child of my newest couple Eluvian and Lutfi. Please make sure you read the backstory VERY carefully - inaccurate histories and such will not rank very high. Please also note any WIP forms will also not count. I will not judge less than three complete forms. Extensions are available upon request provided the end date is within three days and the requester has some of the form completed. I will not extend for people just joining the competition.
Form
Skeleton form - this is an impress me. I will give pointers on what attracts me and what does not.
Boosts for a form
Stories (I LOVE reading a ton. So please go nuts)
Strong relationships (well thought out, descriptive relationships. I know i probably wont get to rp with you, but I'd like to know how they fit in with the family.)
Balance of art and writing (I like art, but keep in mind I also love writing. Try to keep it balanced - a bunch of art will not garuntee you a win).
Family art (its super cute)
Asking questions (I like to see you genuinely care about being accurate. Not so much a form booster but it makes me pleased to know you're putting a lot of thought in to it)
Non-boosts (I don't like as much/doesn't affect my opinion
Little to no writing (I like description - give me a lot to read not just single words and stuff unless its like name and gender and such).
Inaccurate histories (these kias have a story - your kia should fit in with it. I don't like when things don't make sense)
Inaccurate relationships (Don't put my kias OOC. It bugs me - ask questions if you need help developing)
Incomplete forms/WIP (I don't care if none of the forms are fully complete, I WILL NOT AWARD THIS KIA TO AN INCOMPLETE FORM. I will disband the competition if none of the forms meet the minimum criteria - no art will be kept by me either as this is not me trying to scam people out of art. I expect you to at least meet the minimum).
Skeleton form - this is an impress me. I will give pointers on what attracts me and what does not.
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Name:
Gender:
Personality:
History:
Relationships:
Art : (min 2)
Boosts for a form
Stories (I LOVE reading a ton. So please go nuts)
Strong relationships (well thought out, descriptive relationships. I know i probably wont get to rp with you, but I'd like to know how they fit in with the family.)
Balance of art and writing (I like art, but keep in mind I also love writing. Try to keep it balanced - a bunch of art will not garuntee you a win).
Family art (its super cute)
Asking questions (I like to see you genuinely care about being accurate. Not so much a form booster but it makes me pleased to know you're putting a lot of thought in to it)
Non-boosts (I don't like as much/doesn't affect my opinion
Little to no writing (I like description - give me a lot to read not just single words and stuff unless its like name and gender and such).
Inaccurate histories (these kias have a story - your kia should fit in with it. I don't like when things don't make sense)
Inaccurate relationships (Don't put my kias OOC. It bugs me - ask questions if you need help developing)
Incomplete forms/WIP (I don't care if none of the forms are fully complete, I WILL NOT AWARD THIS KIA TO AN INCOMPLETE FORM. I will disband the competition if none of the forms meet the minimum criteria - no art will be kept by me either as this is not me trying to scam people out of art. I expect you to at least meet the minimum).
Parent's Backstory
Lutfi is a impoverished, practically illiterate sheep farmer who is completely mute. He cannot speak, but has a herding stick with tiny bells he uses to convey certain emotions. He was born poor and has always been poor - but does not mind as he is quite happy. He's not a very bright man and has been tricked a lot but tries his hardest to help when he can. He owns a special black sheep by the name of Pippin and always brings him around. His eyes are constantly closed to keep sand out of his eyes - he doesn't understand the concept of goggles. He's very handy and strong and quite large, but again, cannot read and do most simple academics. His farm resides in Aswan, Egypt and the only language he fully understands is arabic. He knows a bit of english, but not too much. He is visited quite a bit by the local schoolchildren who play with his sheep herd and teach him what they learned at school.
Eluvian lives with him after they got married - she was originally apart of a wealthy family. Her childhood was incredibly rough and a part of her family is...well awful - so she had her aunt Zaira bring her to Aswan where she met Lutfi and fell in love. She can speak, but rarely does and is considered mute in a way. When she does speak she stutters a lot and has a hard time completing sentences due to intense anxiety. Most of her emotions are conveyed through her facial expressions, the few words she chooses to say, and writing. She understands basic arabic and full english.
Lutfi and Eluvian both live together and tend to the sheep -though neither can talk they understand each other perfectly. Lutfi is happy to have a family in his life again after his unraveled - and Eluvian is happy to live a life where she is mostly stress free.
There is also the family 'goat' which is actually Milo - an incredibly lazy kia who Lutfi mistook for a goat and decided to let the man continue mistaking him for a goat in order to get free food. Eluvian knows he is not a kia, but chooses not to address it as Lutfi is not worried. What your kia thinks of the goat-kia is up to you.
Their home is very small - the floor is literally just the rocky, sandy ground so Eluvian spends a while sweeping out the excess sand. They have mostly crates for furniture and all share a single living space with mats they can move around to sleep in. The windows are basically holes with drapes over them. They are a very poor family.
Lutfi is a impoverished, practically illiterate sheep farmer who is completely mute. He cannot speak, but has a herding stick with tiny bells he uses to convey certain emotions. He was born poor and has always been poor - but does not mind as he is quite happy. He's not a very bright man and has been tricked a lot but tries his hardest to help when he can. He owns a special black sheep by the name of Pippin and always brings him around. His eyes are constantly closed to keep sand out of his eyes - he doesn't understand the concept of goggles. He's very handy and strong and quite large, but again, cannot read and do most simple academics. His farm resides in Aswan, Egypt and the only language he fully understands is arabic. He knows a bit of english, but not too much. He is visited quite a bit by the local schoolchildren who play with his sheep herd and teach him what they learned at school.
Eluvian lives with him after they got married - she was originally apart of a wealthy family. Her childhood was incredibly rough and a part of her family is...well awful - so she had her aunt Zaira bring her to Aswan where she met Lutfi and fell in love. She can speak, but rarely does and is considered mute in a way. When she does speak she stutters a lot and has a hard time completing sentences due to intense anxiety. Most of her emotions are conveyed through her facial expressions, the few words she chooses to say, and writing. She understands basic arabic and full english.
Lutfi and Eluvian both live together and tend to the sheep -though neither can talk they understand each other perfectly. Lutfi is happy to have a family in his life again after his unraveled - and Eluvian is happy to live a life where she is mostly stress free.
There is also the family 'goat' which is actually Milo - an incredibly lazy kia who Lutfi mistook for a goat and decided to let the man continue mistaking him for a goat in order to get free food. Eluvian knows he is not a kia, but chooses not to address it as Lutfi is not worried. What your kia thinks of the goat-kia is up to you.
Their home is very small - the floor is literally just the rocky, sandy ground so Eluvian spends a while sweeping out the excess sand. They have mostly crates for furniture and all share a single living space with mats they can move around to sleep in. The windows are basically holes with drapes over them. They are a very poor family.