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first entry

Postby woolly » Fri Aug 14, 2015 7:51 am

    c:

    I'd like some critique shady <3
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Re: first entry

Postby ShadyBro » Fri Aug 14, 2015 10:47 am

Psh you should be the one critiqing me babes XD Ill try to nit pick here and come up with something anyways

- That eye is amazing. Like, seriously gorgeous everything.

- Blending. Rabbits have hella colors in one pelt, and they all fade and blend together beautifully. Adding some more shades to the nose, inner ears, and white parts could give them more dimension.

- The noses on rabbits actually arent as pronounced as they are on other animals. In fact, the base coat usually blends into it so all you see as far as coloration is their little nostrils. While Fae's have thicker noses and therefore a bit more color to them, they still blend in quite a bit. Bunny nose <3

- The tail could use either more blending or more white, depending on the design idea. Generally the tips of the tail would be white as well with a white undercoat type pattern. THis may or may not have been an excuse to look up pictures of cute lil bunny butts.

Either way, you barely even had to try out, youre totally in hun XD
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Re: first entry

Postby woolly » Fri Aug 14, 2015 11:00 am

    Thanks for the tips! I'll apply them to the adopts I make :D and yay thank you!!<3 I'm super excited for the event and I was curious about the items you were adding onto Eevix until I realized it was the choices you have set up over at the other thread cx
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Re: first entry

Postby ShadyBro » Fri Aug 14, 2015 11:09 am

Heh yeah I figured I would get some practice in and put up some examples before the event started ^^ Youre welcome to do the same if you feel like making yourself a custom c;
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