#1 entry LOC by Youngalita

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#1 entry LOC

Postby Youngalita » Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:03 am

I really like this one.
I should probably go back and add a few things.
Plus I love the lines!
suggestions and Opinions are welcome



Even I don't consistently play
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place in my heart.
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Postby nebulavery » Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:30 am

Ooh, gorgeous! Love the glowy effects. The main blue of the body strikes me as looking a bit flat, maybe because the lion isn't shaded, so maybe blending a few similar (slightly darker and lighter, don't mess with the hue) blue tones would give it some dimension? Coloring the lines would also look lovely- it'd add to the lovely glow of your markings to have a lighter tone near them instead of just an unbroken black. Last piece of advice, I promise- using a more contrasting color than just a pale pink would do the nose and paw pads some good. Maybe a goldish yellow? (It'd make the eyes pop too if you so desired.) Overall you've got a wonderful design here!
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Postby Youngalita » Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:59 am

howlingattheceiling wrote:Ooh, gorgeous! Love the glowy effects. The main blue of the body strikes me as looking a bit flat, maybe because the lion isn't shaded, so maybe blending a few similar (slightly darker and lighter, don't mess with the hue) blue tones would give it some dimension? Coloring the lines would also look lovely- it'd add to the lovely glow of your markings to have a lighter tone near them instead of just an unbroken black. Last piece of advice, I promise- using a more contrasting color than just a pale pink would do the nose and paw pads some good. Maybe a goldish yellow? (It'd make the eyes pop too if you so desired.) Overall you've got a wonderful design here!

Thank you so so Much for the advice!
I'm looking forward to using this to improve my designs!
Thank You Once Again! :thumbup:



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Postby nebulavery » Mon Jun 29, 2015 1:11 pm

No problem, glad to offer advice! (Loving the gold eye- it really makes a lovely focal point, though now that I see it on the nose I'm thinking maybe just a dark blue for it so there's not competing focal points. Idk, it looks lovely though- you could even make the tail orb gold if you wanted.)
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Postby Youngalita » Mon Jun 29, 2015 2:05 pm

howlingattheceiling wrote:No problem, glad to offer advice! (Loving the gold eye- it really makes a lovely focal point, though now that I see it on the nose I'm thinking maybe just a dark blue for it so there's not competing focal points. Idk, it looks lovely though- you could even make the tail orb gold if you wanted.)

You're right now that I'm looking at it from a far I just want to look at the nose. It takes the dramatic effect away from the eyes.



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