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Redlined

Postby .-- . . -... » Fri May 29, 2015 7:06 am

-BASIC REDLINE-
-Slightly to Way Sharper Toe Points
-Fifth/Forth (Fifth as of my dogs) Toes On The Inside
-Rounder (and possibly shorter) Snout/Muzzle
-More Pointy, and Depending on the character/Canine, Could be Shorter
-Sharper points in certain areas on the back legs

-WHATS WRONG WITH YOUR SKETCH-
-Fifth/Forth Toe on the Left Leg is on the Outside
-Too slim/thin/skinny
-Chestless
-Right Front Leg at an Awkward angle

-WHAT I HAVE TO SAY-
-Your Sketch was very nice, very detailed and very well done, but some things were off
-I love its fluffyness owo
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Re: Redlined

Postby Kodian » Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:24 am

Thanks! Although, that thing on the left front paw isn't a toe, I know it's supposed to be on the inside. It's, uh, a bone I guess. But, thanks, again! I tent to making my characters awfully skinny. Don't know why, though. And I have a problem with back legs <.< they don't like me.

The reason the front right leg is at a weird angle is because, for some reason, when I was looking at canine skeletons, I thought they had one more bone in the leg, then they actually have. I corrected myself, though!

I'm gonna make another lineart soon, to see my progress!
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