[dawnclaw1232]

xD okay, at first, this was a test for water, then i kind of got into drawing so i just drew the reflection of trees, some rocks, and a cat ( Flamepool) sticking their paws in the water. anyway, its winter in this scene so the water is freezing cold and Dawnclaw challenged her sister to put her paws in the lake ( if this was a book i would have her fall in and Dawnclaw would have to save her... actually i might add that :3).

timer: Correct
Used: Computer
Characters: Flamepool, check out her Account! ( you can slightly see dawnclaw's shadow)
I take requests and commisions.
commissions accur if you want me to draw 4 or more characters.

OKE SO heres what i did for the story that i was going to add, this is what i have in mind
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Dawnclaw laughed as she saw her sister wink with shock and her fur fluff up.
"T-Told you i could do it! you owe me a mouse!" She croaked.
"Ya, well you-"
Dawnclaw froze as she heard a yelp followed by a splash, she turned and to her horrer saw the drifting shape of her sister under the water.
She let out a wail of horrer and without hesitation leaped in to save her sister.
The freezing water wirled around her, she felt her eyes freeze open as she paddled.
She lurched to the top gasping for air, but it seemed harder to suck it in.
'If i don't get out of here soon i'm going to die!' she thought with terror.
she dived under again and saw the shape of her wavy sister drifting. Her eyes were full of terror.
she plunged down and hooked her jaws onto the orange and lighter orange striped she cat by the scruff paddling up.
She could feel her muscles slowing and her brain slowly drifting to sleep, but she still fought.

She hauled herself up on the rocks with all of her remaining strainght and dragged up her sister, colapsing to the ground, she couphed out a pool of freezing water, and realized her sister wasn't breathing.

She pounced on her chest and did it three more times till she backed up and sat down.
A tear streamed down her face then suddenly, a couph interrupted her griefing.

"Flamepool!" she yelped!
"Okay, nevermind, y-you don't owe me the mouse anymore...."

Dawnclaw couldn't help it, she burst into laughing.
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Did you guys like it?

[bantry bay]

Teach me your watery ways.

[dawnclaw1232]

xD it looked real before i added the trees

[dawnclaw1232]

OKE SO heres what i did for the story that i was going to add, this is what i have in mind
........................................................................................................................................................
Dawnclaw laughed as she saw her sister wink with shock and her fur fluff up.
"T-Told you i could do it! you owe me a mouse!" She croaked.
"Ya, well you-"
Dawnclaw froze as she heard a yelp followed by a splash, she turned and to her horrer saw the drifting shape of her sister under the water.
She let out a wail of horrer and without hesitation leaped in to save her sister.
The freezing water wirled around her, she felt her eyes freeze open as she paddled.
She lurched to the top gasping for air, but it seemed harder to suck it in.
'If i don't get out of here soon i'm going to die!' she thought with terror.
she dived under again and saw the shape of her wavy sister drifting. Her eyes were full of terror.
she plunged down and hooked her jaws onto the orange and lighter orange striped she cat by the scruff paddling up.
She could feel her muscles slowing and her brain slowly drifting to sleep, but she still fought.

She hauled herself up on the rocks with all of her remaining strainght and dragged up her sister, colapsing to the ground, she couphed out a pool of freezing water, and realized her sister wasn't breathing.

She pounced on her chest and did it three more times till she backed up and sat down.
A tear streamed down her face then suddenly, a couph interrupted her griefing.

"Flamepool!" she yelped!
"Okay, nevermind, y-you don't owe me the mouse anymore...."

Dawnclaw couldn't help it, she burst into laughing.
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Did you guys like it?

[Blazefire0525]

Hah! I liked the ending of the story! And good work, too! I kinda see Dawnclaw's reflection, and the trees weren't messy at all..! (they were perfect )

[dawnclaw1232]

thanks!

[dawnclaw1232]

:3 I want to edit it and make it so you can see dawnclaw, but that would be pointless and take forever, should I just redo the whole thing?

[Blazefire0525]

Well, that's all up to you, and I will agree with any of your decisions. Your choice, good luck :3

[dawnclaw1232]

xD this picture looks terrible compared to my new ones