by defiance. » Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:21 am
This is my first entry for the VHR artist competition. Timer is not accurate in this case :3 Not my best work this time around, but I plan on making at least another entry to round it off. The sire is a black tobiano (homozygous tobiano, heterozygous red factor, homozygous agouti), the dam was supposed to be a chestnut with two white socks and blaze (heterozygous agouti, homozygous red factor, homozygous silver) and last but not least the little filly is a chestnut tobiano (ee/aa/nZ/nT genetics)
I would love some feedback for future entries, though this definitely isn't my best work <3
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by puckish » Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:07 am
Looks great! All I can say is, the more familiar you get with Oekaki, the easier drawing on it will be. Two little points for future reference:
- It looks like you accidentally removed the mare mane and tail shading layer
- Looking up horse markings (especially paint markings) is very helpful for me!
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by defiance. » Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:18 am
Hufflepuff_Horses wrote:Looks great! All I can say is, the more familiar you get with Oekaki, the easier drawing on it will be. Two little points for future reference:
- It looks like you accidentally removed the mare mane and tail shading layer
- Looking up horse markings (especially paint markings) is very helpful for me!
Thank you for the feedback :3 I wasn't very happy with the stallion paint--he came out looking more like a cow to me xD
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by puckish » Sat Jan 17, 2015 1:10 pm
Risk. wrote:Hufflepuff_Horses wrote:Looks great! All I can say is, the more familiar you get with Oekaki, the easier drawing on it will be. Two little points for future reference:
- It looks like you accidentally removed the mare mane and tail shading layer
- Looking up horse markings (especially paint markings) is very helpful for me!
Thank you for the feedback :3 I wasn't very happy with the stallion paint--he came out looking more like a cow to me xD
Haha, well, black-and-white paints will do that

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