I really liked it, as you see! However, I shifted the angle of the head a bit, changed the wing slightly, and just made the lines less like a sketch, I suppose. But fabulous work, I love it! Tip though, make the feathers somewhere in between round and pointy. I feel like I shouldn't judge this piece though, its far better than I could draw!
quitting cs soon, as soon as I get all my characters rehomed C: