[Rated R]

i attempted my very first lineless piece of work.
it's still a tentative work in progress, though most is done.
reference picture: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/ ... 38babm.jpg
i'd love any critique, seeing as it's my first lineless, and i took forever on it <3 thank you loads!

[yesterday.]

Wow, very nice!

[Rated R]

thank you so much <3

[saorsa]

Much better than what I can do ^

Only one thing sticks out; the jaw looks very pointy, I think if you round it out a bit it will look great(:

[Rated R]

thank you so much for your advice s k y y! i'll definitely fix that when i get the chance!
and you're a wonderful artist <3

[rax]

It looks really really nice!! I wouldn't have been able to tell it was your first lineless c:

One suggestion I have is to put a small, white shine mark on the eye to give it a shiner appearance.



Like this picture, a small white dot near the top will help the eye stand out more ^^

[Rated R]

thanks for your advice too, Rax! hopefully i did it right- i can't tell xD

[rax]

Yep, looks even better now!! Happy to help