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My gallery · by **Rated R** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 9:31 am

i attempted my very first lineless piece of work.
it's still a tentative work in progress, though most is done.
reference picture: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/ ... 38babm.jpg
i'd love any critique, seeing as it's my first lineless, and i took forever on it <3 thank you loads!

My gallery · by **yesterday.** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 9:46 am

Wow, very nice!

My gallery · by **Rated R** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:29 pm

thank you so much <3

My gallery · by **saorsa** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:42 pm

Much better than what I can do ^

Only one thing sticks out; the jaw looks very pointy, I think if you round it out a bit it will look great(:

My gallery · by **Rated R** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:48 pm

thank you so much for your advice s k y y! i'll definitely fix that when i get the chance!
and you're a wonderful artist <3

My gallery · by **rax** » Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:54 pm

It looks really really nice!! I wouldn't have been able to tell it was your first lineless c:

One suggestion I have is to put a small, white shine mark on the eye to give it a shiner appearance.

Like this picture, a small white dot near the top will help the eye stand out more ^^

My gallery · by **Rated R** » Wed Feb 26, 2014 12:54 pm

thanks for your advice too, Rax! hopefully i did it right- i can't tell xD

My gallery · by **rax** » Wed Feb 26, 2014 1:27 pm

Yep, looks even better now!! Happy to help

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