[Midnight Mare]

"My Heart Beats No Longer"

Congratulations Zenstar!!

Username: Zenstar
Name: My Heart Beats No Longer (Her name before she died was My Heart Beats For You, her nickname, alive and dead, is Heart)
Gender: Mare
Is it undead?: Yes. I dont have enough undead characters.
If so, how did it die, what is it's purpose:

Heart pranced nervously through the woods, her senses strained for any and every sign of pursuit. Something was unbearably wrong with the forest. She whipped her head to the side, her heart racing. She glimpsed a faint outline stalking her through the trees, The wind whistled through the branches, stripped bare in the clutch of winter. Her heart slammed into her throat as she caught the unmistakable stench of decaying meat. Wasting no more time, she bolted, tearing through the trees with the wind whipping her mane and tail behind her. She could hear the pounding of muffled paws crunching through the snow. She streaked through the trees and reached the edge. She had forgotten where she had been, but it was to late to turn back now. She had forgotten in her terror that she was near the ancient volcano. The ground was suddenly stripped of trees, replaced with flat, sloping stone instead. Her hooves thundered over the rocky slope, heading ever closer to the top. She risked a glance behind her, and she nearly lost her footing. What she saw was no real creature. It had the shape and stature of a wolf, but had the long thin head of something closer to a dragon. But the oddest and scariest factor was the flesh falling from its body, leaving bones open to the sky. She ran harder, hoping to escape the nightmare, but a place deep in her told her she'd never escape this. The top was tantalizingly close, and she fueled her pounding hooves with every scrap of energy she could muster. She exploded up over the rim, and skidded onto a platform that stretched over the pit of bubbling magma below. She turned around and her breathing hitched up another notch as the reek clung to her nostrils. The creature was advancing slowly, apparently wary of the lava. Every step it advanced, she took a step in retreat. When she reached the end of the ledge, she stopped. She could go no farther. It was be eaten or roasted. She didn't like her options, but she really had no choice. She was pulling up the courage to jump over the beast, when suddenly, a sickening crack rang through the crisp winter air. The platform under her feet gave a horrifying lurch as the world was turned upside down. Heart let out a shriek as the platform gave way beneath her hooves. She stared down as the lava came closer, and closer, and closer, until it filled her vision, before she hit the top. There was a single, horrifying split second of agony that burned. It burned like never before, and she wanted to scream again, but her body was not hers any longer. Then everything went black.

Time passed. She wasn't sure how much. Her world was that of darkness and agony. It felt like eternity, or was it a second? Time lost all meaning, and she only wished it to end. When she finally had the strength to open her eyes, the world was blinding. After being immersed in darkness for so long, the light was as bad as the spasms of agony that lanced up her spine. When the pain finally subsided, and the light no longer blinded her, she stood on shaky feet. Her first thought had been please make it end please make it end please make it end. but now, memories crept back into her battered mind, and she snatched at them. She had fallen into a volcano. For a second, shock immobilized her, and then how am I even standing here? She gave herself a quick check, then had to do a double take when her eyes slid over her haunches. Her hind legs were on fire! For a second a frantic panic seized her, before she realized it was harmless. Other than the fire, the only thing that seemed changed was her once-brown coat was now the color of the lava that had taken her life. Realization struck her like the blow of a hammer, before a new light came into her eyes. An evil grin slowly stretched the corners of her muzzle up, and she gave a horse bark of laughter. "An undead beast killed me, and now I am undead. The fool gave me a second life when it chased me into the pit!" She stood up fully, her neck arched in the frigid morning air. She stood like that for several minutes, before rearing so suddenly and leaping into the air. She was a being of magic as much as undead now, so she could do almost anything now. She crashed to the ground, her hooves hammering it. It cracked under the pressure. Another twisted grin split Heart's face. She turned her head to the rising sun. "Oh, I shall have my revenge now!" She then vanished in a flash of crimson light, a cackle ringing out like thunder.

And this, is where My Heart Beats For You's story ends, but another, greater one rises up from the ashes. My Heart No Longer Beat is out for revenge, and nothing, save for another death, will keep it from her. I guess I need to RP her then XD

Other?: She really is cool.

[Midnight Mare]

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[WolfStory23]

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Username: Zenstar
Name: My Heart Beats No Longer (Her name before she died was My Heart Beats For You, her nickname, alive and dead, is Heart)
Gender: Mare
Is it undead?: Yes. I dont have enough undead characters.
If so, how did it die, what is it's purpose:

Heart pranced nervously through the woods, her senses strained for any and every sign of pursuit. Something was unbearably wrong with the forest. She whipped her head to the side, her heart racing. She glimpsed a faint outline stalking her through the trees, The wind whistled through the branches, stripped bare in the clutch of winter. Her heart slammed into her throat as she caught the unmistakable stench of decaying meat. Wasting no more time, she bolted, tearing through the trees with the wind whipping her mane and tail behind her. She could hear the pounding of muffled paws crunching through the snow. She streaked through the trees and reached the edge. She had forgotten where she had been, but it was to late to turn back now. She had forgotten in her terror that she was near the ancient volcano. The ground was suddenly stripped of trees, replaced with flat, sloping stone instead. Her hooves thundered over the rocky slope, heading ever closer to the top. She risked a glance behind her, and she nearly lost her footing. What she saw was no real creature. It had the shape and stature of a wolf, but had the long thin head of something closer to a dragon. But the oddest and scariest factor was the flesh falling from its body, leaving bones open to the sky. She ran harder, hoping to escape the nightmare, but a place deep in her told her she'd never escape this. The top was tantalizingly close, and she fueled her pounding hooves with every scrap of energy she could muster. She exploded up over the rim, and skidded onto a platform that stretched over the pit of bubbling magma below. She turned around and her breathing hitched up another notch as the reek clung to her nostrils. The creature was advancing slowly, apparently wary of the lava. Every step it advanced, she took a step in retreat. When she reached the end of the ledge, she stopped. She could go no farther. It was be eaten or roasted. She didn't like her options, but she really had no choice. She was pulling up the courage to jump over the beast, when suddenly, a sickening crack rang through the crisp winter air. The platform under her feet gave a horrifying lurch as the world was turned upside down. Heart let out a shriek as the platform gave way beneath her hooves. She stared down as the lava came closer, and closer, and closer, until it filled her vision, before she hit the top. There was a single, horrifying split second of agony that burned. It burned like never before, and she wanted to scream again, but her body was not hers any longer. Then everything went black.

Time passed. She wasn't sure how much. Her world was that of darkness and agony. It felt like eternity, or was it a second? Time lost all meaning, and she only wished it to end. When she finally had the strength to open her eyes, the world was blinding. After being immersed in darkness for so long, the light was as bad as the spasms of agony that lanced up her spine. When the pain finally subsided, and the light no longer blinded her, she stood on shaky feet. Her first thought had been please make it end please make it end please make it end. but now, memories crept back into her battered mind, and she snatched at them. She had fallen into a volcano. For a second, shock immobilized her, and then how am I even standing here? She gave herself a quick check, then had to do a double take when her eyes slid over her haunches. Her hind legs were on fire! For a second a frantic panic seized her, before she realized it was harmless. Other than the fire, the only thing that seemed changed was her once-brown coat was now the color of the lava that had taken her life. Realization struck her like the blow of a hammer, before a new light came into her eyes. An evil grin slowly stretched the corners of her muzzle up, and she gave a horse bark of laughter. "An undead beast killed me, and now I am undead. The fool gave me a second life when it chased me into the pit!" She stood up fully, her neck arched in the frigid morning air. She stood like that for several minutes, before rearing so suddenly and leaping into the air. She was a being of magic as much as undead now, so she could do almost anything now. She crashed to the ground, her hooves hammering it. It cracked under the pressure. Another twisted grin split Heart's face. She turned her head to the rising sun. "Oh, I shall have my revenge now!" She then vanished in a flash of crimson light, a cackle ringing out like thunder.

And this, is where My Heart Beats For You's story ends, but another, greater one rises up from the ashes. My Heart No Longer Beat is out for revenge, and nothing, save for another death, will keep it from her. I guess I need to RP her then XD

Other?: She really is cool.

[WolfStory23]

cool story, you should write a story about her if you win her

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Christmas passed.......

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Im bored, so im going to doodle him/her, but if i dont win, art will go to the winner ^^

[Midnight Mare]

I am sorry!! I forgot about this EE, I've been so busy this season, Happy new year!! I will anounce in next post (not much of a contest though)