Entry #1- Critiques Appreciated by Lilysplash

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Entry #1- Critiques Appreciated

Postby Lilysplash » Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:40 am

WiP:
Fur
Fish
Tail
Done! ^^
Took about an hour to color in; the timer may have been left running a bit as I multi-tasked. XD
The kanji on her fan is "hana", Japanese for "blossom" or "flower". It is written in the same way for Chinese. Chinese really helps when learning Japanese! X3
Meh. It's only mediocre. >.< Critiques are appreciated!

~Lilysplash
Last edited by Lilysplash on Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:45 am, edited 1 time in total.
~❀ℒiℓyѕρℓaѕℎ, also known as ℱantaisiℯღ and ❦ℒaℯℓia
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ღMy Dяℯαm: {ღ} {ღ} True love...
ღDяℯαmiℯs: 2010 Valentine's PPS Malk Dog, Warrior Cats
ღAcℎiℯvℯd Dяℯαmiℯs:Image (Thank you, SilverFang 14!)Image (Thank you, Kipasaurus and Dreamie Dashers!!!) Image (Thank you, Rathian and Dreamie Seekers!)
Always, always looking for Warrior cats!
I am a Gifting Weasel Hero! (Though not very good at it.) I have bombed 22 people and have received 22 wonderful, generous bombs! So the cycle goes, making everyone happy! c: I also greatly thank anyone that gave me a dreamie!
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Re: WiP- Entry #1

Postby Lilysplash » Mon Oct 07, 2013 4:06 am

Finished fur. Tail is WiP.
~❀ℒiℓyѕρℓaѕℎ, also known as ℱantaisiℯღ and ❦ℒaℯℓia
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Konagona ni Ai, my lovely little one.

ღMy Dяℯαm: {ღ} {ღ} True love...
ღDяℯαmiℯs: 2010 Valentine's PPS Malk Dog, Warrior Cats
ღAcℎiℯvℯd Dяℯαmiℯs:Image (Thank you, SilverFang 14!)Image (Thank you, Kipasaurus and Dreamie Dashers!!!) Image (Thank you, Rathian and Dreamie Seekers!)
Always, always looking for Warrior cats!
I am a Gifting Weasel Hero! (Though not very good at it.) I have bombed 22 people and have received 22 wonderful, generous bombs! So the cycle goes, making everyone happy! c: I also greatly thank anyone that gave me a dreamie!
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Re: WiP- Entry #1

Postby Lilysplash » Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:43 am

Done! <3
Ah. Very mediocre. >.<
~❀ℒiℓyѕρℓaѕℎ, also known as ℱantaisiℯღ and ❦ℒaℯℓia
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Konagona ni Ai, my lovely little one.

ღMy Dяℯαm: {ღ} {ღ} True love...
ღDяℯαmiℯs: 2010 Valentine's PPS Malk Dog, Warrior Cats
ღAcℎiℯvℯd Dяℯαmiℯs:Image (Thank you, SilverFang 14!)Image (Thank you, Kipasaurus and Dreamie Dashers!!!) Image (Thank you, Rathian and Dreamie Seekers!)
Always, always looking for Warrior cats!
I am a Gifting Weasel Hero! (Though not very good at it.) I have bombed 22 people and have received 22 wonderful, generous bombs! So the cycle goes, making everyone happy! c: I also greatly thank anyone that gave me a dreamie!
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Re: Entry #1- Critiques Appreciated

Postby Puffee » Tue Oct 08, 2013 11:31 pm

    I like the base colour, but I think you used just a bit too many colours. To be quite honest, there's not really much that sparks my interest in this design. It just doesn't really, 'flow', if you know what I mean. The design isn't very original, and is basically just drawing over the lines and adding a few swirls. Something a bit more complex and flow-y. The koi's kinda cute though. o3o

    I'm really sorry of this hurts your feelings or anything, just giving you my honest opinion. I know that I appreciate honesty. <3
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Re: Entry #1- Critiques Appreciated

Postby jax. » Tue Oct 08, 2013 11:36 pm

I absolutely love this drawing! If you were going for a "calm" look that is not exactly what this drawing is.... it is more like "PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTY!" just giving my opinion! it is still beautiful tho :3
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Re: Entry #1- Critiques Appreciated

Postby Lilysplash » Wed Oct 09, 2013 1:08 am

Yeah, I know what you mean. XD
I lost muse halfway and started thinking about my other KKI design. X3
I appreciate your honesty, though!

And thanks, smoshycat! X3
I was going for an energetic, almost party-like feel!
~❀ℒiℓyѕρℓaѕℎ, also known as ℱantaisiℯღ and ❦ℒaℯℓia
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Konagona ni Ai, my lovely little one.

ღMy Dяℯαm: {ღ} {ღ} True love...
ღDяℯαmiℯs: 2010 Valentine's PPS Malk Dog, Warrior Cats
ღAcℎiℯvℯd Dяℯαmiℯs:Image (Thank you, SilverFang 14!)Image (Thank you, Kipasaurus and Dreamie Dashers!!!) Image (Thank you, Rathian and Dreamie Seekers!)
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