Red lined <3 by orpheus.

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Red lined <3

Postby orpheus. » Sat May 11, 2013 10:40 am

Hope it helps, and some tips would be
- Thinner muzzle and smoother, flatter forehead. The nose should also be lower, and smaller, the mouth very near to it.
- Not so bendy legs, although, yes, cats are flexible they can't flop backwards like that.
- Ears should be closer together, cat should be plumper.
- Your hind leg was great (the one on the ground) but you have to raise the other leg slightly higher and have not as large of a joint/flab (it should also connect just before and below the tail.)
- The eye (I'm crappy with eyes but yeah, just some advice) should be closer to the muzzle and a lot smaller. Also, the tail is connected to the spine, so there should be no line before it.

Don't forget to add some parts of fluff ^u^
Anyway, your basic sketch was fine. Looking at references helps a bunch.
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𝑊𝐸'𝐿𝐿 𝑁𝐸𝑉𝐸𝑅 𝐺𝐸𝑇 𝑇𝑂 𝐻𝐸𝐴𝑉𝐸𝑁 𝑂𝑁 𝐴 𝑁𝐼𝐺𝐻𝑇 𝐿𝐼𝐾𝐸 𝑇𝐻𝐼𝑆.

those nights when your friends are gone,
when you're holding on for someone to leave with

those nights when you crave someone
to be there at dawn, to wake with, 'cause aren't we all just
looking for a little bit of hope these days?

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Re: Red lined <3

Postby NanaChicken » Sat May 11, 2013 10:40 pm

wow buddeh this is perfect! c:
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Re: Red lined <3

Postby orpheus. » Sun May 12, 2013 2:04 am

Nah. But thank you. ^u^
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𝑊𝐸'𝐿𝐿 𝑁𝐸𝑉𝐸𝑅 𝐺𝐸𝑇 𝑇𝑂 𝐻𝐸𝐴𝑉𝐸𝑁 𝑂𝑁 𝐴 𝑁𝐼𝐺𝐻𝑇 𝐿𝐼𝐾𝐸 𝑇𝐻𝐼𝑆.

those nights when your friends are gone,
when you're holding on for someone to leave with

those nights when you crave someone
to be there at dawn, to wake with, 'cause aren't we all just
looking for a little bit of hope these days?

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Re: Red lined <3

Postby NanaChicken » Sun May 12, 2013 2:09 am

go on facebook please..>->
yes it is!! c:
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