[Cydonia]

I redlined it for you ^-^
Head Angle was too showy, unless you wanted the arabian halter kind of posture it should point down slightly. Look at this picture:

They can see alot more when they head is at an angle
Neck was good in depth and length, but you need to add a throat-latch. It's a thin piece of skin that gives a clear look to where the neck starts. Ears were a little thick, but not to bad. Eye needed to be higher up.
Hope I helped!

[My Immortal]

You did! thanks!