[Mimi-911]

This is for DragonGirl c: I jotted down a few notes also, in case you wanted written also. I can't trust my handwriting x3



■ Your body was too long, and the butt [strange as this may sound. lol] curves into the tail. There is no 'line' per se that seperates the body or tail.
■ Speaking of the tail, it is more smooth than jagged; though it might be fluffy, the tail falls naturall onto the actual muscle, rather than sticking up everywhere.
■ The ears are more upright than the position they were in.
■ The neck and chest of the wolf are course, rough and fluffy. This is the part that you can make fluffy and people can say is legit. o3o Generally you can't see the actual shoulder on the back part, but you can see it on the neck area.
■ The slope on the face is less defined. And there should be an eyebrow there but I forgot to put it in xDD
■ In comparison to the wolf itself, the muzzle should be thicker. ouo
■ The dew claw is generally somewhat visible on both front legs. They don't have one on the back legs.
■ If you need help with paws, I can draw a closer view of one xDD

[Dragon Fox]

No, thank you! I love it!

[Mimi-911]

No problem! I hope to see many improved drawings of yours c:

[Dragon Fox]

c(: