Demonic by WolfBite9998

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Demonic

Postby WolfBite9998 » Thu Dec 20, 2012 2:26 pm

Random demonic wolf :/ critic please!
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Re: Demonic

Postby Rotten » Thu Dec 20, 2012 2:46 pm

This is really good. Your anatomy is very nice and accurate and the feeling of a demonic vicious creature is portrayed quite well here. However, the mouth looks a bit odd. I recommend studying a little more when it comes to the jaw and how it opens and such. Also a little more of a red highlight on his fur would be nice and the background and the wolf's color doesn't match too well, though the red highlight does make it much easier. Perhaps a little lighter. Remember to never use true black or white in a picture. Some more detail in the eyes and some detailed shading would be nice too. All in all, it's a very good pic and you have the talent to go far. I give it a 7 out of 10. :3
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Re: Demonic

Postby WolfBite9998 » Thu Dec 20, 2012 2:55 pm

Thank you soooo much!I will try my best to improve,although this is a color in.I just used a smokey black because I learned the hard way not to use pure white or black :3
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Re: Demonic

Postby Rotten » Thu Dec 20, 2012 3:18 pm

That's good. Just note me whenver you want some critic. I love watching people imporve XD

Oh and I see. It makes sense ^^ I go to an art school and I got scolded for useing pure black and white. That's how I learned XD
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