[Lovely Dreamer]

Sorry it took so long to post, my computer's being stupid and glitchy.

[mercury.]

Don't worry about it.
Some friendly critic:
The markings seem a bit random in some places
The colors are a bit too bright. (Pink is fine when you add grey to it or only use pastel (which you did for the base))

Otherwise, good job. I like the marking on the flank C:

[Lovely Dreamer]

is this better?

[mercury.]

Better, but still a bit bright. C: