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Fail grass in sunlight by opti-mism

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Fail grass in sunlight

Postby opti-mism » Mon Jul 09, 2012 10:55 am

Trying to get better at creating grass, i would LOVE constructive criticism, and such. :3
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby Blitz Sykes » Mon Jul 09, 2012 10:55 am

you dont need to get better, its great! :3
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby opti-mism » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:01 am

Aw, thanks. :3 I'm trying to figure out how to make it more realistic though, my goal is to make it to intermediate someday. XD
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby Kangarose » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:10 am

This is amazing - almost like something you'd see in intermediate. ^^
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby .Phoenix. » Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:40 am

The only advice I can give you is to make those white dots more................. shiny. Maybe like dew. I think that you are almost ready to go into intermediate! Awesome pic!
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby opti-mism » Mon Jul 09, 2012 12:35 pm

Thank you guys so much! I might try to improve a bit before i try for intermediate, i don't think im ready yet, i've tried recently and it was moved to beginner. :3 So, i shall try your suggestions, and shall definately make the dots more shiny. XD
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby maggzilla » Mon Jul 09, 2012 12:53 pm

this is really pretty ;o;
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Re: Fail grass in sunlight

Postby opti-mism » Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:37 pm

Alright guys, how's that? I made the dots shiney. XD


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