[Penultima]

Listen to the sunset,
Hear its silent sigh
As it falls down the horisen
Warning, the moon is nigh

Listen to the sunset
Hear its silent threat
That darkness will be upon us
It makes everyone upset

Listen to the sunset
The vanity of its words
How beautiful this sunset is
With its colour, and birds

Listen to the sunset
See its pretty hue
But I can't enjoy the sunset
If I am not with you

All the pretty colours are meaningless
So are the birds, and the sounds
Because it all means nothing to me
If you are not around

Just remember this though,
Promise you won't forget,
Even if you're far away,
We'll be watching the same sunset

So listen to the sunset
Enjoy its beauty true
When you see it, think of me
And I will think of you

[Oh Happiness....]

wow this is so pretty!!!!!!!!1!!!!! i hope it gets featured!!

[Roonil Wazlib]

OMG this is amazing! I love the sunset colors and everything about it!
Beautiful poem, too <3

[Toadalicious]

I absolutely love this<333 The colors of the dusk are beautiful. (: I love how the horse and rider really seem like companions, too -- not just some random pair slapped together by fate. You did a wonderful, wonderful job.

[Penultima]

Thanks everyone! I'm glad you all like it

[AutumnTail]

I love this SO much!
Especially the colors of the sunset...

[Cryaotic]

Pretty

[Penultima]

Thanks! Edited slightly.

[Penultima]

Wow, 22 votes already! Thanks everyone!

[sorcererofwords]

this is amazing.I hope you get a feature.