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Finished version

Postby vav. » Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:46 am

So i re-did this. Added a gear, swirls and light pink music notes
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Re: Finished version

Postby 11greentea » Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:24 pm

i know i am not demzee-demon but i have a few little comments to make
-i LOVE the swirls but the ones on the but is a little messy try using the smoothing 'tool' i makes curved lines look better
-and the music notes are cute!
-but the gear is a little sketchy try making it more pronounced (shading edges and center) and have the lines more defined!
HOPE YOU FIND THIS HELPFUL! :mrgreen:
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Re: Finished version

Postby vav. » Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:35 pm

thanks! I don't mind getting help. THank you for the comment.
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Re: Finished version

Postby d.zee » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:42 am

11greenteapurple wrote:-but the gear is a little sketchy try making it more pronounced (shading edges and center) and have the lines more defined!

The shading you did gave it a little more depth, I like that, although I thought it was okay before hand. =p

Anyway, I think the design looks more evened out now that you have added the gear + design on the rear. There isn't anything obvious that screams at me to have you change or fix, but I will think about it. If I think of something I'll let you know. =3
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Re: Finished version

Postby 11greentea » Tue Apr 03, 2012 1:28 pm

yeahs it awesome specially gear, sometimes we all need some advice, even the best of us.
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hope you do well
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