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Train in the Sunrise by Dogfish

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Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Tue Feb 14, 2012 3:34 pm

The paint on the side of the train says 'Dog' and the other one says 'Fish'. Well, it was drawn with a mouse and I'm very unhappy with it. Anything I can improve on?

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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:40 am

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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Mewgrizz » Wed Feb 15, 2012 3:20 am

Lol. Graffiti on the train. XD This is awesome
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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:07 am

Thank you! Any crit?
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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Cocobean987 » Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:09 am

I like the train. You should do more with the backround.
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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:03 am

I added an oasis.
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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:07 pm

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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Cocobean987 » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:24 pm

that looks better. You could add some clouds. i have a tutorial. XD
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Re: Train in the Sunrise

Postby Dogfish » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:47 pm

I'm sure a tutorial would be helpful. Do deserts often have clouds?
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Postby Dogfish » Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:49 pm

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