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by anxious ghost » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:33 pm
dove. wrote:I'll have to go to bed soon most likely.
the life of a minor.
anyways, what should I do it I'm being to nice to my characters?
Kill one of 'em.
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by L.V.L » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:33 pm
dove. wrote:I'm writing a story, and I feel like i'm being to nice to my characters
What type of story is it? I could go from there on how to perfectly ruin your characters happiness.

And I should be going to bed also. It's 10:33 and I have to wake up at 3am to drive to Disneyland.... the struggles.

But I will stay up, to write the remake just for you Dove! <3
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by dove. » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:34 pm
Yay <3 I really want their happily ever after!
Also it's fiction, it's kinda of a clique but I don't care really. I'm gonna give it a bit of a deeper meaning then just any old clique.

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by anxious ghost » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:35 pm
Mexi you and I are in the same time zone XD
How long do you guys usually make your chapters? Do you go by pages, or by events?
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by Krenko » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:37 pm
Møriarty x. wrote:Nooooo you guys can't go to bed. I'm finally awake!
Oh well. Maybe I'll actually get back to writing now, lol.
Krenko, I'm gonna start calling you Jeff.
it's like after midnight XD
And sure. May I ask
why? XD
if you're feeling like you're being to nice. make one of them get kidnapped and held for ransom
THEN KILL THEM

Chapters? I go for pages, because I myself don't like super short chapters XD. Speaking of, pages length wise, how long are your chapters normally?
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by L.V.L » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:38 pm
Møriarty x. wrote:Mexi you and I are in the same time zone XD
How long do you guys usually make your chapters? Do you go by pages, or by events?
\[^0^]/ Time Zone Buddies!! \[^0^]/
I only made 1 chapter book, and I went with by events.
But my other short stories, I just keep writing and writing. Never having chapters in them.
Edit: I'm off to write, no one bother me. Even though I'll most likely go back and forth. <3
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by dove. » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:40 pm
I'm in the same time zone as you guys too.
Also My chapters are usually short because I like to fit in little cliffhangers in between sometimes.
also my story isn't that dark XD I may have a few well, deaths by not ransom, like sickness or a accident. Or personal preference of the character wanting to leave. You know what I mean. I'm not kidnapping my characters for chapters so I can hold them for ransom at the moment. Maybe in another story LOL
Okie sorry bout that

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by anxious ghost » Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:41 pm
Krenko wrote:Møriarty x. wrote:Nooooo you guys can't go to bed. I'm finally awake!
Oh well. Maybe I'll actually get back to writing now, lol.
Krenko, I'm gonna start calling you Jeff.
it's like after midnight XD
And sure. May I ask
why? XD
if you're feeling like you're being to nice. make one of them get kidnapped and held for ransom
THEN KILL THEM
8-)
Chapters? I go for pages, because I myself don't like super short chapters XD. Speaking of, pages length wise, how long are your chapters normally?
No, you may not, Jeff XD
I've never really worked with chapters much, so not very long lol.
L.V.L wrote:Møriarty x. wrote:Mexi you and I are in the same time zone XD
How long do you guys usually make your chapters? Do you go by pages, or by events?
\[^0^]/ Time Zone Buddies!! \[^0^]/
I only made 1 chapter book, and I went with by events.
But my other short stories, I just keep writing and writing. Never having chapters in them.
That's what I've been thinking of doing, going by events.
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