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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Fri Nov 20, 2015 11:01 am

Darkamil wrote:
WarriorsLover1011 wrote:(Thank you to everyone who gave me ideas for the last entries!) Also, I'm very sorry about how long this took me >.< I forgot about this
Darkamil wrote:Its already october and nothing...

I know, sorry! I started it on my drive in August, and planned to release it in August, but my email password was changed so I had to wait. I resumed in mid-September when I got it back then forgot all about it about a week later and only remembered recently. I'm so sorry!)



Dear Diary,

Nope, I have already established that you are a Candyland, no need to go back into that.
You are Candyland because we are in Candyland, simple as that.

We had been walking running for our lives for around an hour now.

Hey! Stop! -Riptide
What authority do you have over us, after what you did? -Darka
Well, I suppose that I don't have any authority over you all... -Riptide
HAH HAH SUCKER!- Eleanor
:twisted: BUT KING SALT DOES! -Riptide

At first none of us understood, yeah. Of course he did.

Suddenly a giant chocotopus reared up from the chocolate river! Aaaaand it had King salt on its back. Great. Juuuuuust perfect. -.-

What kind of name is King Salt, anyways? I mean- -Eleanor Oasis
Pokes -Jekyl
Wha? Looks up Ohhhhh -Eleanor Oasis

Riptide still had an evil snear plastered onto his face as he climbed up to join his father.

Gummy bears... ATTACK!!!!!!! -Both

And army of very terrifying gummy bears surrounded us- what? Some of them were PINK!

Are you SURE that she'll cooperate? -Riptide
OF COURSE SHE'LL COOPERATE WE HAVE HER LITTLE SQUIDDIES! -King Salt

Sharon pushed away the gummy bears.

Move it! Mooooove it! -Sharon

Sharon scrambled up the choctopus and sat down next to Riptide and King Salt, the traitor.

LUNA! Get up here! -Sharon

We all watched as Luna pushed through the crowd of gummy bears and went up to join Sharon with the rest of the traitors.

Traitors! -Skyler

Luna stared at her paws, digging her claws into the plush, jello skin of the choctopus.

The last thing that I saw before the gummy bears advanced were the horrific snears on their despicable faces.

Its fine
Epic The End?


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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Fri Nov 20, 2015 2:36 pm

Cool
I suddenly thinked of shipping Darka and Jekyl :P
XD
I read way too many webcomics
Won't say any of 'em, you'll have to guess if you wanna know~<3
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Mon Mar 07, 2016 1:01 pm

THAT MUST BE CANON!

I was pacing around our cell, it was incredibly boring, the only remotely entertaining part being Skyler teaching me new words.
**************************************************************************************************** -Skyler
I have never heard a swear word that long. That is very impressive. HEY DO I HEAR WINGS?! -Eleanor
There is no logical way you could hear wings! We're all gonna die! Traitors! Dragons don't even exist! OHHHH HOLY COW IS THAT TEDDY?!" -Darka

Sure enough, Teddy (a... candy bear) was riding an alicorn (So... much... pink...) and was waving at us through the bars!
Eleanor started hopping around and excitedly squealing at no one.
Woo! We're getting out of here! Yes! I have super hearing or something! YAY!!!!!!! -Eleanor

Skyer proceed to karate chop and break the window

O.o There goes logic -Darka

Teddy flew closer and as we climbed on, the guards stepped into our room to give us some water and food so we wouldn't die, and... saw the alicorn.

GET THEM! -Guards
Later suckers! :P -Eleanor

The guards looked dumbstruck as Teddy few off with us and the alicorn, or maybe they were impressed by Eleanor's raspberries.
After about an hour, Teddy pointed at the ground.
Without Teddy having to explain, we saw King Salt and the traitors giving a speech to the citizen of Chicke Smoothia.
We swooped down, and it all began.


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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Mar 07, 2016 11:24 pm

Awesome! Now, let me see, how long is that swear word, exactly...? Heheh. It sounds like something Skyler would do - teach innocent dogs extra long swear words!
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Tue Mar 08, 2016 11:04 pm

WarriorsLover1011 wrote:THAT MUST BE CANON!

I was pacing around our cell, it was incredibly boring, the only remotely entertaining part being Skyler teaching me new words.
**************************************************************************************************** -Skyler
I have never heard a swear word that long. That is very impressive. HEY DO I HEAR WINGS?! -Eleanor
There is no logical way you could hear wings! We're all gonna die! Traitors! Dragons don't even exist! OHHHH HOLY COW IS THAT TEDDY?!" -Darka

Sure enough, Teddy (a... candy bear) was riding an alicorn (So... much... pink...) and was waving at us through the bars!
Eleanor started hopping around and excitedly squealing at no one.
Woo! We're getting out of here! Yes! I have super hearing or something! YAY!!!!!!! -Eleanor

Skyer proceed to karate chop and break the window

O.o There goes logic -Darka

Teddy flew closer and as we climbed on, the guards stepped into our room to give us some water and food so we wouldn't die, and... saw the alicorn.

GET THEM! -Guards
Later suckers! :P -Eleanor

The guards looked dumbstruck as Teddy few off with us and the alicorn, or maybe they were impressed by Eleanor's raspberries.
After about an hour, Teddy pointed at the ground.
Without Teddy having to explain, we saw King Salt and the traitors giving a speech to the citizen of Chicke Smoothia.
We swooped down, and it all began.


I'm sorry about the length- or lack of it, especially after such a long wait!

lel
XD :lol:
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Wed Jun 29, 2016 3:11 am

The wind whipped our fur as we flew down. It whistled in my ears, but we could all still hear Eleanor humming the tune to Mission Impossible.
Would you please stop that?! -Darka
Too bad! It's too fun! -Eleanor
...Not amused -Darka
:cry: -Eleanor
Would you two please stop goofing off? -Teddy
Eleanor's the goof -Darka
Yay! I'm a goof! :D -Eleanor

I sighed. Eleanor could be sort of annoying sometimes, but I supposed it was better than being all somber, like Darka.
I can read what you're writing, you know -Darka
hdfgtfdtsdtsu -Me
INCOMING! -Skyler

Teddy jerked the reins and we narrowly avoided a dat e with the dirt, though we did spill out.

Get off of me, Eleanor -Darka
Sorry! -Eleanor

Teddy scrambled off first, and sighed.

See, this is why you don't distract the driver! -Teddy
WHAT?! -???

We turned around to see a white dog, a candy scythe at his side.
King Salt.

WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?! -King Salt

Why should you care? Besides, you should know. -Teddy
The king's face became even whiter, and whiter still at Teddy's cry.
ATTACK! -Teddy
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Wed Jun 29, 2016 3:45 am

King Salt stumbled back in surprise as out small rebellion leapt.
Skyler and Eleanor were the craziest, swiping at his face until specks of red dotted the white.

I must admit. You caught me by surprise, teddy bear. I didn't think you had a war cry -King Salt
You don't know a lot about me -Teddy
:what: -King Salt

We should have taken the chance to attack, but we didn't. Instead, everyone stood still, muscles tense.
Unfortunately, King Salt recovered first.
Surprise after surprise, huh, teddy bear? I have surprises of my own! -King Salt

That didn't help with how tense we were- quite the opposite, actually, and then he spoke again.
ATTACK! -King Salt

That shot us into action, but it also shot the king's army into action. It was mainly gummy bears, but I caught few others among the crowd.


You guys hungry? -Eleanor
Starving -Skyler

I beamed at them, though we didn't eat anyone. Eleanor looked close a couple times, but we mainly just took them out.
YOU TOO! Luna, give us a hand! -Sharon

A growl came from all of out throats at the mere sight of the two.
Why would I do that? -Luna

A look of confusion appeared on all of our faces, but Sharon flinched.
I'm done being your puppet. I'm am myself, not. You. I make my own choices, and one of those is my friends. My friends need my help. -Luna

She turned and started leaving the choctoupus, ready to leap off, but Sharon snarled.
Get back here! -Sharon

Luna turned back to the traitor, eyes blazing. A moment of silence hung in the air, but Luna broke it all by throwing herself forwards, slamming into Sharon.

The traitorous dog fell backwards, falling down the choctopous to rest on the ground. Her chest still rose and fell, but she wouldn't be bugging us anytime soon.

One last snarl escaped Luna's throat, then she bounded down to us.

I can summon up all of out emotions right here: :shock:
I never doubted you -Eleanor

Luna beamed and stood with us, glaring up at King Salt and the others. Riptide was visibly shaken, and only became more shaken by Luna's next words.

You're a filthy traitor. You acted like out friend, then turned your back on us. I wouldn't be able to live with myself, which is why I made the decision I made. It's almost too late, Riptide, but you can still join us. -Luna Nightshade


Never! -Riptide
He leaped down, and... missed. His forelegs slammed into the ground, and pain briefly flashed in his eyes before he stumbled back.
...Weakling. Well, if you want something down, you'll have to do it yourself -King Salt

The king leaped down, and we all pleaded his would miss. But it wasn't that easy. He landed on the ground softly, and strode towards us.
Together -Teddy

We understood. Everyone stepped up, forming a tiny wall. To our surprise, some of the crowd members, who had previously been shocked and oblivious, stepped up to make the wall bigger. Even better, some of the candy colors were dissapearing from them.

King Salt growled, and the silence that hung in the air was incredibly eerie.

Then, finally, he leaped.

Madness.
claws slashed, fangs bit, and butterfly wolves lifted enemies into the air to throw them. Our numbers dwindled, and other moved the injured out of the way, but the same was happening on the opposing side.

Finally, it was down to the originals. Our army had backed off, but King Salt's army had dwindled considerably, and even those left were looking worried.

Good will prevail -Teddy
We'd accepted the teddy bear as our de facto leader, and he broke the silence.
Where there is light, there will always be darkness -King Salt

Of course! Without darkness, where would us stars be? -Me

That seemed to shock him. This time, we didn't. Our little rebellion group leaped, but so did King Salt's. We collided in mid-air, and though my head an everything else throbbed, the battle continued.

After what seemed like hours, I was puled off and thrown to the side. White and red spots flashed in my vision, and just I was slipping into unconciousness, I heard the perfect sound.

Police sirens.

---

As it turned out, Teddy was part of the non-corrupt police force, and had called them. sneaky guy.
King Salt's army was in horrible shape, but so was ours. King Salt's army was brought back to health, along with us, then thrown right into the slammer.

Now that I think back on it, this entire thing wasn't very logical -Darka

Everyone laughed, and slowly, a smile grew onto Darka's face, and she laughed too.
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Wed Jun 29, 2016 3:59 am

Everything was normal. Sure, we had been sent back to high school after we were better, but that was... fun, dare I say it.

On of these perfect days began with a prank.
Skyler held a bucket of mud, following Sunshine around. She was too busy gossiping to notice, but I knew what was happening.
Finally, she leaped, and dmped the mud on the dog's head.

Sunshine jumped back with a yelp, then turned to see Skyler, who was laughing so hard she hadn't moved.

WHY YOU LITTLE- -Sunshine

Skyler continued laughing, and flew around in a frenzy, zooming out of Sunshine's reach. She was so absorbed in her prank that she didn;t notice Sunshine nearing her until Eleanor yelled.

Skyler yipped and flew out of reach again. Eleanor left, but she returned with a larger bucket of mud.

Skyler understood right away, and flew down to help.
Together, they drenched Sunshine yet again, and this time got out of the way, leaving Sunshine running around looking for someone who wasn't there.

Psst... Jeykl -Teddy

I turned to the teddy bear and walked up. We'd become friends over the months, but his face was somber.
What is it? Has the king escaped? -Me
A small smile crossed his face.
No, I doubt he ever will. The prison is no longer made of candy rocks. -Teddy

I nodded. That's good. Why'd you call me over, then? -Me
For a warning. Your next adventure is coming soon, and it may be very hectic. -Teddy
??? -Me

Before I could demand answers, I heard the beating of wings. I expected Teddy's alicorn, but instead a dragon flew into view.

It still had several peppermint swirled scales, and we all jumped back. Sunshine ran to Skyler and Eleanor, who had stumbled out of their hiding places, but before she could lay a paw on them, the candy dragon picked them up,and did the same to all of us.

Oh boy -Darka
Here we go again -Me


Here you go! Three in less than an hour,as an apology for taking so long with the others >.< It's over now, but expect the next around the time the next summer event is released!
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