@abeille
yoo, i'm actually so happy to hear that?
i've been stalking your storage for quite
some time myself actually, and i just re
cently bookmarked your new onee! lite
rally eye candy, my eyes are so pleased.
@duckworth
awe that's r sweet, but practice practic
e practice ofc! i remember my fetus co
ding days, and i'd much rather not reme
mber any of it, but it got me where i a
m today.
@affinity
tysm? ? your writing is v nice, awe. def
bookmarking all o' that. i'm significantl
y more of a poetry person than story (fo
r lack of better terms).
your voice is v sweet and soothing. my f
ave was dependency and tiptoe; they l
ined up r well to my style and aesthetics
, haha.
as for criticism, maybe play around with
the visuals of your poetry a little more.
it depends on what you're trying to portr
ay, but in your style of writing, i think m
anipulating your visuals to heighten/am
plify what you're trying to express is goi
ng to go especially well.
apart from that, you can only improve f
rom here on.
yoo, i'm actually so happy to hear that?
i've been stalking your storage for quite
some time myself actually, and i just re
cently bookmarked your new onee! lite
rally eye candy, my eyes are so pleased.
@duckworth
awe that's r sweet, but practice practic
e practice ofc! i remember my fetus co
ding days, and i'd much rather not reme
mber any of it, but it got me where i a
m today.
@affinity
tysm? ? your writing is v nice, awe. def
bookmarking all o' that. i'm significantl
y more of a poetry person than story (fo
r lack of better terms).
your voice is v sweet and soothing. my f
ave was dependency and tiptoe; they l
ined up r well to my style and aesthetics
, haha.
as for criticism, maybe play around with
the visuals of your poetry a little more.
it depends on what you're trying to portr
ay, but in your style of writing, i think m
anipulating your visuals to heighten/am
plify what you're trying to express is goi
ng to go especially well.
apart from that, you can only improve f
rom here on.