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by lfc1277 » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:00 am
i dont no what this one is called but here it is
one day a girl went to friends house for a sleepover. the girl couldn't sleep because she kept hearing stuff like 10 minutues till 12:00 then when she heard a voice say 5 minutines to 12 she left. later around one she felt bad so she went back.and when she got there on the wall written in blood was glad you wernt here at 12:00 o clock
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by Erille » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:23 am
Um, actually that's not the full story. This is the version I know.
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One day a girl and her friend went to a carnival together. The friend won a porcelain doll that had beautiful red eyes but the dress was slightly ripped. The girl suggested they had a sleepover since it was a weekend and they both agreed. The parents agreed also and at seven, the girl went to her friend's house. Her friend had put her doll in front of a mirrior and soon both girls forgot about it. They watched TV and played Truth or Dare and even prank called a few people and at eleven, both agreed they were super tired.
The friend went to bed first at around eleven-ten but when the girl got in her sleeping bag she wasn't that tired anymore. She just laid there when suddenly there was a noise. It sounded like footsteps but the girl shook it off as the house being old. Her friend's family had owned this house for fifty years, anyway.
The girl tried to go to sleep but again coulnd't so she sat there. She looked at the clock and noticed it was already eleven thirty. Suddenly she heard another noise. It sounded like footsteps again, but heavier and louder. The girl got a little scared since she was sure no one else was awake and it's not like they had giant rats but shook it off. Old house, she reminded herself.
But the footsteps didn't go away this time and they seemed to get closer to the room where her and her friend were sleeping.
The girl tried to fall back asleep but at eleven forty the noises got to her.
She got up quietly then sneaked to her friend's parents room. "Mrs. Johnson? Mr. Johnson?" But they weren't there. The girl got freaked out and then went back to the room. She gathered up all her things then ran out the door.
She hooked her stuff up to her bike and rode home. When she got there her mother was on the phone crying. "What's wrong?" She asked. "In the morning." Her mother said.
The girl, at home just went to bed and dind't ask any more questions. As she got in bed, she looked at her clock. 12:03.
When the girl woke up the next morning, her mother made her get dressed and they got in the car. They went straight to the girl's friend house and the girl gasped as they drove up. Police surrounded the house and her friend's window was open. The girl ran into the house, with permission of the police and ran to her friend's room. She found her friend in her bed with a knofe through her heart. Her parents were in the closet. They had been hanged.
She turned to her friend's mirror and noticed the doll was on the floor. it's smile was now red instead of the purple it had been.
The girl clutched her own heart and started to cry as she read what was written on the mirror in what looked like blood.
"Weren't you glad you weren't here at midnight?"
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by starfighter123 » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:36 am
there was a girl her name is chloe her age is exatly 9 years old and will become 10 on the 8th of march so now the story begins
her grandad died and he had lost a toe her little cousin had a dream the he went to a fortune teller and she told him that he got his toe back and later that day chloes mum told her that in her dream she saw him and he said I got my toe back and chloe said to her mum that her cousin told her basicly the same and she also saw him as a ghost with his toe back and he told her how
I do not know the rest of what happened
true story its not scary i dont think but what about yous
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by Erille » Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:14 am
Okay . . . Here's my own short story.
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Chloe and her friend Annemarie ran throuh the forest away from school, even though teachers chased them. They smiled at each other and Chloe grabbed Annemarie's knife that she held. "We're going to do it?" Chloe asked. Annemarie nodded. "I heard to become a witch you have to stab the largets knife you have into a traitor's grave. While saying the spell of course. You know, being witches would give us so much power. We could finally be popular. No one, even Jake, would be mean to us again" Annemarie gasped for air as she finished her sentence. chloe smiled. Witches, she thought. We could control everything we wanted to.
She nodded and Chloe and Annemarie walked as they saw the town cemetery. "You look over there." Chloe said to Annemarie. She went to the right and Annemarie went to the left.
Chloe looked around on her side.
She groaned. Everyone here was too nice. Suddenly, she gasped. The smallest grave was barely engraved but had a clear name on it. Natas Sevil. Chlole clapped her hands. Such a weird name, all the better. she instantly knew this guy must have been a traitor, since there was no angel above his grave like all the others in this religious town.
"Annemarie! I found one!" Chloe yelled. Her friend ran over to Chloe and she gasped too. "We have to do this one." Annemarie said. Chloe nodded.
"I'll start the spell." Chloe said. She grabbed the knife in her right hand and Annemarie grabbed it in her left. The girls closed their eyes and in unison said the spell they had memorized by heart.
"Dark as a bat. Sly as a wolf.
Let the darkness come, let the light leave.
I welcome you into my eyes. I welcome the moon into the light.
Let light be banished, let the darkness rule.
I call upon thee to give this to us!" Annemarie and Chloe opened their eyes and stabbed the knife into the grave.
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The teacher ran as she heard the girls she had been tracking scream. "Girls! Girls!" She screamed, her voice hoarse. Her dress got snagged on bushes as she tried to reach them as soon as possible. The teacher was full of worry. Had they been hurt? God, no, don't let them get hurt, she thought.
When the forest finally ended and the trees released their grip on her, she was gasping for air in the cemetery. The graves shadows in the sinking sun made eveything seem dark but the teacher could make out two shapes among the graves. She ran towards them and sook Chloe and Annemarie. Their eyes were still closed. The teacher looked at the grave.
It seemed darker then the others. The Traitor's Grave.
The teacher started to cry. She looked down at the knife and tried to pull it out. Hysteria took over and the teacher sat on the grass, a crying mess. Through her tears she looked down at the grass again and saw a mirror. She frowned slightly. It hadn't been their before.
The teacher got onto her knees and swept her hair to the side. She gasped as she read what was in the mirror. The mirror reflected the grave and the teacher cried again as she read the engravement.
Satan lives.
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by KumyaKuma » Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:14 am
Erille wrote:Okay . . . Here's my own short story.
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Chloe and her friend Annemarie ran throuh the forest away from school, even though teachers chased them. They smiled at each other and Chloe grabbed Annemarie's knife that she held. "We're going to do it?" Chloe asked. Annemarie nodded. "I heard to become a witch you have to stab the largets knife you have into a traitor's grave. While saying the spell of course. You know, being witches would give us so much power. We could finally be popular. No one, even Jake, would be mean to us again" Annemarie gasped for air as she finished her sentence. chloe smiled. Witches, she thought. We could control everything we wanted to.
She nodded and Chloe and Annemarie walked as they saw the town cemetery. "You look over there." Chloe said to Annemarie. She went to the right and Annemarie went to the left.
Chloe looked around on her side.
She groaned. Everyone here was too nice. Suddenly, she gasped. The smallest grave was barely engraved but had a clear name on it. Natas Sevil. Chlole clapped her hands. Such a weird name, all the better. she instantly knew this guy must have been a traitor, since there was no angel above his grave like all the others in this religious town.
"Annemarie! I found one!" Chloe yelled. Her friend ran over to Chloe and she gasped too. "We have to do this one." Annemarie said. Chloe nodded.
"I'll start the spell." Chloe said. She grabbed the knife in her right hand and Annemarie grabbed it in her left. The girls closed their eyes and in unison said the spell they had memorized by heart.
"Dark as a bat. Sly as a wolf.
Let the darkness come, let the light leave.
I welcome you into my eyes. I welcome the moon into the light.
Let light be banished, let the darkness rule.
I call upon thee to give this to us!" Annemarie and Chloe opened their eyes and stabbed the knife into the grave.
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The teacher ran as she heard the girls she had been tracking scream. "Girls! Girls!" She screamed, her voice hoarse. Her dress got snagged on bushes as she tried to reach them as soon as possible. The teacher was full of worry. Had they been hurt? God, no, don't let them get hurt, she thought.
When the forest finally ended and the trees released their grip on her, she was gasping for air in the cemetery. The graves shadows in the sinking sun made eveything seem dark but the teacher could make out two shapes among the graves. She ran towards them and sook Chloe and Annemarie. Their eyes were still closed. The teacher looked at the grave.
It seemed darker then the others. The Traitor's Grave.
The teacher started to cry. She looked down at the knife and tried to pull it out. Hysteria took over and the teacher sat on the grass, a crying mess. Through her tears she looked down at the grass again and saw a mirror. She frowned slightly. It hadn't been their before.
The teacher got onto her knees and swept her hair to the side. She gasped as she read what was in the mirror. The mirror reflected the grave and the teacher cried again as she read the engravement.
Satan lives.
Holly cow that one
really scared me *shivers*
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by starfighter123 » Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:50 am
there was a girl named alice costello who died in my school,so they named the school after her.the roomer is is that she haunts the school.i have been going to that school for nine years and nothing has ever happened---up until recently ,that is.my friend kris was sitting by a door in the science room,where my teacher always puts his papers.the closet that kept all the papers was locked and suddenly it opened.and whenever she tried to close it and lock it,it kept opening!finnaly me and my friend went out of the room for a minute and then we came back in when we weren't so freaked out.to our amazement when we went back in papers were flying!we ran out of the room in a flash and every science period we skipped for a way long time.finally when we decided to come back we were sitting in out chair all of a sudden a mao thats been hung up for 12 years fell like nothing was holding it up...my science teacher ran to it and looked in amazement.somehow the nail that was holding it up just came out of the wall!also me and my friend renee were in the library checking out books and every single book fell off the shelf and knocked us over!i wonder if this is just a coicidince and alice is just a myth or shes haunting me!
2.once when i was walking on the sidewalk,i saw a couple about the age of eighteen walking across the road.i passed then and said,"hello!",but they didn't reply.about four weeks later,i saw the same couple and greetet them with a "hello" again.this time they replied,saying,"hi sweetie!".after about a month,i read an article about two teenagers who were beaten to death at a barber shop right next to the sidewalk.pictured in the article was the couple i met on the sidewalk.at about 9:30 at night one day later i got mail and when i opened it all it said was"hi sweetie!"
3.one day a young women,lets call her vivica had a wonderful wedding.after the wedding they played hide and seek because it was one of the families silly traditions.well vivica lived at her parents scary house and you couldnt doubt that there were many unknown places in the house.well the bride decided to find a good hiding spot where no one would find her.she found a hidden door in the attic and opened it up.inside was a large treasure chest.vivica looked around to see if anyone was watching her,there wasnt.she quickly unlocked the tresure chest with the lock she found and closed it she was holding it up so it wouldnt close but suddenly she lost her grip and let go.she tried getting out but there was no way.finally an hour later no one found her so they thought she flaked and they went home.the women died of starvation and not enough air 2 days later.20 years later her sister she never met had a party at the same house.since it was a tradition they played hide and seek.she found the same door and opened it.inside was a treasure chest.thinking it was the best hiding place ever she opened it up and jumped in without looking.suddenly she felt moldy and boney.she looked down and saw what was left of her sister in the chest.she ran out but she hit the chest door and it closed in on her.neither were ever seen!
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