Re: RPW 958

Postby Ill » Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:45 am

Marking to help my friend Daze ouo
>Nonbinary Lesbian with BPD and lots of others but I think I’m pretty nice. I like DnD and OCs. I am an adult also!
>I take a while to reply, please don't rush me...
>PM me for ways to contact me, I check this site for messages occasionally
>Leaving the site. Keeping ALL my characters... if our characters were shipped, either contact me on DA or I’m assuming they’re broke off
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Re: RPW 958

Postby hypnowave » Sun May 01, 2016 10:46 pm

    Username: aviate
    Name: Washington "Wash"
    Gender: male
    No word limits on relationships, 1500-2000 words in extra, 2 art pieces max (200x200 canvas) and up to one extra story for one relationship !

    a ton of relationships
    princeton - bf
    sonny + riz - father figures
    laurens, mulligan and yves - bros
    jericho - best friend
    usnavi - rival
    (i have a ton of wolves tb h time to list them all)

    story w/ princeton
    personality and reason for accessories (he's scared to smile - he has chipped teeth)
    reuse concept tbh

    one art piece is fully shaded pixel with princeton
    another is probably a near symmetrical piece of a front view but. with development somehow
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Re: RPW 958

Postby NE0N-UMBR30N » Sun May 15, 2016 6:15 am

is there any set end date for this ;v;?
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Postby yeena » Sun May 15, 2016 6:20 am

viixen wrote:is there any set end date for this ;v;?



    right about now im thinking ?? june fourth or something around that. its sometime in june thats for sure by now.
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heres your set end date,,, let me go judge things now

Postby yeena » Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:20 am

dave. wrote:

    decided thisll be ending june 16th, midnight EST time !! if you want an extension pm me around the end date.
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Postby yeena » Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:14 pm

Crimoodle wrote:
      Hallo there! This is my rather wip form for RPW #958, ''Arceus''. Before you look at my form, you should know a few things. One, I'm Crimoodle- I go by Crim more often than not, and I've been with RPW's since the beginning. I own some rpws which are included in this story, they can be found here. Secondly, my form is not exactly 'concrete'. You'll be able to tell what I mean as you read through. Three, my computer ended up dying. So I can't upload the final form, but I'll add at least the basics (the most recent uploaded version of the form) and relationships below.

      You may need to go through a few times in order to get all the information. Its suggested for content purposes you look at all the links provided- 'fragments' as I call them, are situated throughout the form. By going through this fragments you'll be able to find the relationships, history, and some other stuff about my form.

      --

      The basis of my form is set around a being named Arceus, a being that lacks gender and who's age is unknown to anyone. They're a destroyer of worlds, trying to create the perfect universe- until Gavin accidentally brought them into the RPW world, and now they can't escape.


      You can view my form here.

      Relationships

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      Igasho's relationship is in the form; the rest who hadn't been added are below

      Gavin - Arceus is surprisingly otherwise indifferent about Gavin. They do enjoy their company and Gavin treats them very well despite Reese, and Gavin is the one who lets Arceus live with them. Gavin is incredibly apologetic about the whole incident and as he cannot transport Arceus back, he treats them very kindly. Arceus relates to Gavin's anger and his fits and after a while the two start to help each other, though it isn't much. The two play video games together a lot whenever his boyfriend isn't around and the two end up eating too much junk food. Arceus speaks to Gavin the most and probably trusts him more out of anyone else they know. However, they're not as mad at Gavin as they probably should be; Gavin is the cause for most of his problems and therefore is otherwise neutral.

      Reese - Arceus doesn't care about Reese. At all. Reese idolizes Arceus; and while most don't recognize the legendary pokewolf, Reese definitely does. They just want to be left alone, but Reese is dating Gavin and there's no escape. Reese annoys them to no end and ends up giving them gifts all the time like it is Christmas every day of the week. Most of the gifts end up getting re-sold and Arceus has no idea where he's getting these gifts. But Reese tries to do absolutely everything with Arceus and has gone as so far to lie in order to make people be jealous or have Arceus admire him. Unfortunately for Reese, Arceus doesn't care in the slightest. He's completely apathetic and ignores him as much as possible, trying to avoid him whenever he can.

      Davey - For some reason, they really like Davey. It doesn't make sense and it confuses everyone, but for some reason Davey is just really cool with Arceus (some people think its because Davey is actually terrified of them but they both beg to differ from that) and the two end up hanging out on the beach quite a bit. Arceus doesn't like the water so they don't surf, but they offer tips to Davey and end up recording most of their vines or videos that Davey tries to do about his 'elite surfing'. They don't understand the whole big ordeal about everything, but they appreciate Davey's company and would definitely consider him one of his friends, even if someone's he's a downright jerk to everyone.

      Jake + John - The pranksters; Arceus ends up being a scapegoat for quite a bit of their jokes and pranks. Arceus is amused by them, however, and further throughout their progression they end up really taking a liking to them, going as far as to help them in some of their pranks and jokes. When this 'stage' comes around, these three end up causing pure havoc. Arceus can manipulate time, which helps tremendously in most of their pranks and they become the bane to all the very, very unfortunate victims of these pranks. Jake and John could further be seen hanging around or lingering around Arceus and once you see them all together, you just know they're up to absolutely no good.

      Harley - Unlike his fathers, Harley is absolutely disliked by Arceus. Seen as an overly optimistic goody-two-shoes, they really hate their attitude and positivity about everything. They find it annoying, revolting, and ridiculous. They think its all an act on Harley's part and end up scaring the daylights out of him moreso than anyone else.

      Dave - Being a master of irony, its Dave who set Arceus up with their current job (marriage officiate). Dave and Arceus don't really speak, but their relationship could be described as 'cool'. They're not really friends but they're definitely not enemies; they sort of have a mutual relationship and can somewhat relate with Dave being a knight of time and Arceus being the creator of time, and occasionally the two toss off tips or helping factors to the other.

      Illidan - Arceus adores Illidan with all their heart. Illidan collects bandanas and sells them to Arceus, and this is probably the most positive relationship Arceus has ever had. Illidan doesn't judge and somehow manages to find the right style, the right flair for them and they are very happy to be able to know them.




      Motivation for my form and afternotes

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      Personally, I think that the most thought out characters are the villains in any story. My concept is based off of a destroyer of worlds- Arceus is meant to be originally disliked, for the arrogance they hold and the lack of caring they possess. They're judgemental and live around material things, and for the most part until being brought into the RPW world and losing most of their abilities (and height) they stay that way.

      I suppose this character would be considered a very personal one- its all or nothing, as this concept is for this character and this character only. They represent something I think some people strive to achieve or do- perfection. Except, they have the power and the control to do what they want; so they remake all the 'failure' worlds they made. However, they suffer from crippling personal consequences and seek for validation from the actions they make. Once that power is taken from them by Gavin, they have to learn what it is like to no longer be in control, to learn that mistakes are okay.

      A villain always has a story behind them. The reasons why they commit crimes, why taunt our heroes- except, the only thing fighting against this 'villain' is their own self. The main reasoning behind my form is the relationship they have with themself.

      And personally, I think that is the most important relationship of them all.




    welp i didn't have much to really judge form wise,, but congrats to Crimoodle !!
    all of the other forms,, viixen and sky-lines i mean,, , , they were great starting
    forms- or well, sky, yours was but both of them had been missing something ?? nd
    i cant tell if it was something development wise or what but,, eh. i did feel like
    there were a lot of loopholes in all of the forms i judged in various ways but we,,
    wont get into that. theres always questions to be asked + answered about ones
    character. i did find it quite fulfilling to see a job occupation mentioned in your
    form, Crim, and there were some other things i won't mention. but hey there,, ,,
    congrats again. if anyone else with forms (finished or not,,) and you want some ?
    crit i guess i could try to give some,, just pm me.
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