Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

[beauty thief.]

8/10- i really like the colours, but the patches just seem.. off to me? i can't really describe it, but they look kind of awkward on the wings.

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jasmine? please rate on design rather then character.
i would love if you could give me more suggestions for her design, i feel like she's bland ^^"
edit: the art is mine, haha

[Exoneration]

5/10
The design is a bit unoriginal and bland. And the lightest color doesn't seem to match the rest of the pallet. It's a bit too dull while the rest of her design is bright pastels. Perhaps give her accessories to go with her back story?

What about Xenophon?

He's the joker who always takes the prank too far. "It's just a prank" Is his favorite excuse when something goes wrong. He's cruel and a bit heartless, not understanding that his 'jokes' can actually hurt someone. He's rather protective, however, of those he cares about. Although there are not many people he can stand.



His wings are useless and are a bit of a sore spot. If you want to anger Xeno, mention his wings or how he can't use them for anything. His larger pair of eyes sees in color only while the smaller set is a sort of night vision/black and white. And as such, he has great depth perception and eyesight. He's very observant and likes to people watch when he relaxes.

Art is not by me, I'm not sure who the orgional artist is, he was a gift.

[sheena]

the simple colour palette is easy on the eye and i like that the little bit of colour is just in the mouth, it works well. i like simple designs, and this one is really pleasing to the eye. maybe add an accessory or two? 9/10.



vivienne (vivi)? by me. she's supposed to look relatively natural. suggestions around accessories are welcome.

she's part of a pirate group of ocs between me and my girlfriend. she's a little prissy, and before joining the crew, led more of a prissy life. joining the pirates brought her very down to earth, but she tends to show a bit of a holier than thou attitude on occasion, and needs to be put back in her place.

[widow.]

9/10. I'm a sucker for natural colors, and you've made one of the prettiest natural color OCS i've seen in a while. And being a pirate kitty! That's adorable. I love the accessories, especially the sand dollar necklace. Overall an adorable character.



This is Paradise, my main OC. The art is from a friend on Skype who I don't know would like her deviantart shared or not. Anyways, her species fluctuates between where I want her to RP. Most of the time she's a RainWing, which is a species from Wings of Fire. Other times she's a Skydancer, a Flight Rising breed of dragon; which is why the pic looks like a skydancer.

[ProjectIcarus]

?/10
I like the idea, but it's not a full body, so I don't have much to go off of.

(alternate markings. What do you guys think?)
Unnamed? Design, art, and species all by me. All Orange parts on him glow in the dark (blood, tongue and pawpads all glow orange as well) Barbed wire halo/bracelet are part of him, not an accessory. His center eye can see into a person's soul. looking for name suggestions and marking critique!
(I'm sorry I've been using him so much D: he's new and I just want to know how to make him the best he can be!)

[skellaton]

10/10 I rlly like it! I have seen some ppl giving u a hard time about the purple and orange together, but I think they go nicely together :)

Galactia? all by me :D

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@ραяα∂ιѕє: Please follow the rules and post a fullbody ref each time. You have been PM'd c:

@redpandaluvrz166: 8/10: Though it looks a little plain with nothing to break up the blue, the galaxy is used really well <3

Aurelien? Lines by Kainaa - Coloured by Kitty-of-Doom524
Looking for personality ideas c:

[lex]

7/10 - A bit too simple for my tastes, however, it is recognizable despite the simplicity, which is always a wonderful thing!

Chio Charlie Jarvis, my fursona. It's a big image but it is a really full reference aha (art & design both by myself!)

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[sibylline,]

8/10
i do like their design, but I feel as though the heterochromia doesn't fit. It may be the colours, but I feel the black and yellow really don't fit. Its very offsetting.
-also, side note that doesn't affect the rating: the ref is also extremely all over the place and difficult to follow-
My Rin? I feel like her name doesn't fit so if you have any other suggestions i'd love to hear them.
Design by me, Lines are here, by Pachoopi

Side note; the stripes on her legs will soon be modified to something more like tiger stripes.