Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

[Ancunín]

8/10 : the character's palette is lovely, however she seems a bit plain, maybe some more body markings. Or a couple of accessories would boost her design!

Yuyu?

Base by tealea, unknown design/edits artist

[LaurelLeaf]

9/10

I really love the design. It looks like it's volcano themed. The only thing I'm not sure is that the the tail looks weird (maybe make the yellow on the underside)

Russel is a mage in a medieval setting.

Art and design by LaurelLeaf

[Elfie]

8/10
The pink pelt and lighter markings go well with the darker hair and blue eyes. Very nice for a simple character and I can't spot a fault.

Quaint?

Design by me
Lines by unknown.

[☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s]

8|10
Ooh I love the shade of green you used for him, green is my absolute favorite color <3 I really like his little yellow-green tattoos(?) on his back too, they go with his design well. The only thing that doesn't quite fit is his eyes. Also I love the name Quaint, because he is quite odd, in a good way!

How about my precious little S'more, Coquina? <3

Everything by me.

Her backstory is a bit long ^^; if you don't want to read it, just rate her design.
Coquina is type of rock composed of seashells, hence her pattern and her collar

Coquina was born to a nice family, but she never knew her parents because she was sold to a new family about 4 weeks afterward. She was a kittypet for some time and she lived with two very nice housefolk. Though she was quite bored most of the time, she never dared to step outside, for she lived in a city unlike others. A large government of cats who called themselves the Mis-aggregation, controlled the alleyways and the streets, and treated stray or wondering cats as slaves, though they didn't bother the humans or the kittypets who stayed inside. However, Coquina was always curious about what it was like out there. Coquina's good friend, Nox-a stray snowshoe Siamese cat, who was an associate of another group of cats called The Division- always came to visit her, but they only talked through one of the glass windows. Eventually, Coquina succumbed to her curious nature, and stepped outside from the safety of her home. The air was so fresh, and the grass felt wonderful under her paws! She couldn't help but linger outside a bit longer. A few moments after, she payed dearly for her decision. She was attacked by a few members of the Misaggregation, held against her will and forced into slavery.
Nox traveled to her house the next day, only to find she had disappeared. Coquina had never left her home, so Nox immediately knew something was wrong. He searched for her all over, but he couldn't find her anywhere. Disappointed and worried, Nox went back to his own correlation, The Division. Some days later, he agreed to work undercover in the Misaggregation, as a spy. He unexpectedly crossed paths with Coquina there, having no clue she had been captured. Coquina looked frail and week, her ribs were showing beneath her pelt and her usually enthusiastic blue eyes were filled with scorn; she didn't look like her usual self at all. This is because Coquina had never learned to properly hunt, and the Misaggregation regularly took half, or all of the prey she managed to catch. She was starving and losing strength. Nox couldn't bare to see her like this, and he promised her he would free her one day. Coquina watched silently from the slaves quarters as Nox began to grow more and more close to Envy, a real member of the Misaggregation. Coquina didn't like the fact Nox had fallen for the enemy, but she still didn't confront him, though she was slightly jealous. All she ever wanted was for Nox to love her like he loved Envy, but she knew it would never happen, Nox only thought of her as a good friend of his and nothing more. There's a lot more to the story, but I'll just skip on ahead-
Nox eventually gets Coquina out of the dreaded place, where he helps her seek refuge in the sewers where his camp was hiden. Coquina was accepted into The Division; there she is taught how to fight and how to hunt, and becomes a very respected member of the correlation. Some time afterward, Coquina is wondering through the sewers, and she catches a highly respected, and ranked tom named Blade from the Misaggregation, snooping around to gather information for her group. Coquina tackles him after he refuses to leave, and the two cats tussle. During the fight, both cats fall over the edge of the sewer, into the water. Blade tears Coquina's collar off while they are struggling under water, and it floats to the surface. A while after, both Coquina and Blade drown. Nox is devastated as he spots her collar, but not her. The cats of The Division drag Blade's body out of the water, but Coquina's is no where to be found. A few days later, Coquina's body is found further up the sewers, and a proper vigil is held for her. Coquina still watched Nox together with Envy from the heavens, dreading the thought that she was dead and silently sobbing inside. But even though the thought of never being able to be Nox's equal depressed her, she was happy for Nox.

[sel]

7/10
The greens used aren't a palette I would've picked out, but they seem to work nonetheless. I like the green and yellow together. The eyes seem to stand out in an odd way, though. Some accessories might be nice as well

10/10
Yess I've always wanted to rate this bab, and now my time has come!
I love everything about it! The backstory, the colors and design, the name, the accessory. Lovely! Everything about this character draws your in in just the right way and I love it!



Javelline?
he's a Featherling (closed species made up by me)

everything (including species) by me

[Pipsquawk]

8/10

I love the colors, horn and the idea, EVERYTHING

My Zane, all by me

[Ancunín]

6/10 the neon is a bit much, and the design is rather simple. The tail and mane/hair is adorable though!

My Petit Aviateur?

Art and design by me!

They are based on Le Petit Prince. They are a fox, with a snake on their tail(not sure if it should be a living snake or just design any thoughts?). This is a slight wip character.

[friday!]

8/10! i really like this design but a couple things throw me off a bit tbh. while i love love love the color palette (i love primary colors in palettes), the gradient on the snake tail is distracting since the yellow markings are usually solid when they get on blue, and i feel like the fact that it's a snake doesn't really make sense? it's a trend and it is a pretty cool idea, but it doesn't fit with the theme of the character that much. also while i like the color of their hair, the fact that it covers one of their eyes bugs me (and it's kind of impractical with the way you have the goggles). I really love their star markings though, and they're just a really cute character overall <3

my redesign of sweeney todd? it's a wip, so the clothing is super simple while i'm getting other stuff worked out! i didn't really like the design for johnny depp's todd (he did a good job though) so I tried to do my own version? all the art is by me, but the character itself is based off of Stephen Sondheim's character in the musical (which is also based off of Victorian urban legends/penny dreadfuls). here's a close-up of his face

[pigeon3456]

8/10 man i always love victorian/historical characters in general, and this is really pretty cool ; but the red cravat really throws me off?? maybe it's the bright colour of it, but it doesn't seem to fit with the duller colours of the other clothes. i'd agree that it's simple, but since it's a wip im not gonna really take points off for that. also i'm not really sure when sweeney todd is set (like what decade or w/e) so i won't be able to say much in that department rip edit: looked it up, 1840s;i don't know much off the top of my head for that era; i do know a bit about the 1830's, though, but i don't want to give advice that you didnt ask for so ill just contain this to a paragraph im sorry i get really excited about historical fashion ill leave

[Ancunín]

9/10 i'm not normally a fan of human characters, but i really like him? The outfit is fitting and i feel compliments him, also the hair is p great

My Petit Aviateur?

Art and design by me!

They are based on Le Petit Prince. They are a fox, with a snake on their tail(not sure if it should be a living snake or just design any thoughts?). This is a slight wip character.