Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby kamukoma » Sun May 01, 2016 4:34 am

It looks pretty nice overall, but the text in the middle has words that are broken up between lines? Otherwise it looks pretty good. You may be able to change the size/font of the text to make it fit a bit better.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby storm coming. » Sun May 01, 2016 4:36 am

(It's supposed to be like that, haha. I'll just go again so that I can see what needs fixed. c:)

There doesn't seem to be much of a theme, and everything is randomly arranged. Maybe instead, you could find something that you are interested in and do a signature based on that. Everything just seems random. If I were you, I would center it as well.

Edit for the person below; I changed my signature as you were typing that and for now I'm putting bio because it's a wip.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby yare yare daze... » Sun May 01, 2016 10:43 am

it's sort of obvious what i'm gonna say right
maybe replace the "bio" words with you know an actual bio lol
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby talkshow boy » Sun May 08, 2016 12:32 pm

Overall, I quite like your signature. However, everything seems a bit cluttered. Try adding a few borders or something like that. Also, I think the text would go with the image better if you made it a deep blue, similar to the image on the left. Doing so will create more of a color scheme and help pull everything together.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby tamade ♪ » Tue May 10, 2016 10:32 am

I actually like your signature a lot, though I think that it's got a very nice colour scheme, I don't know if the font really works. But overall I think It's very cute~~!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby legendari » Tue May 17, 2016 1:12 pm

i like it, but the bottom of the picture on the left is a bit cut off at the end uvu maybe try fixing that? i can't find anything else i can criticize [:

to the person below me - please include if it's too simple or not! i recently redid it and would like to know what i can do better c: thank you!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby TronnorsPhangirl » Tue May 17, 2016 1:15 pm

I like it, but I do think it's it's a little simple, maybe try adding an image of something enjoy, or something you find empowering or inspirational! But over all, it's really good!!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Tue May 17, 2016 1:46 pm

    @Poppy dog; this is considered spam. please go to the appropriate form for requesting for a free signature, not this one.
    @TronnosPhangirl;
    it's kinda disorganized. the text is all on the left, and the image cuts off, too. consider organizing it by
    putting it into columns and the such! make the text seem more interesting to read, not be 'just there'.
    the image is also lossy quality! consider using reverse image search to find the highest quality image
    so the signature can look better :>
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby verine » Tue May 17, 2016 4:37 pm

The image on the right is a bit blurry. I think you should try to find one with a better quality.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ジョジョ » Tue May 17, 2016 4:41 pm

i think it's really neat how the gif switches between
the two meowstics! the text is a bit bright imo, it's a little hard to read ;_;
the little, quick key words are cute too, im assuming radical face
is the musical act, right? i like it too! (so good taste hehe)















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