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omg so pretty and yesssssss
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asl;djkldsklaj; YES.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:40 pm

      @raey - OOHHH MYYY GOSSHHHH
      i love the game in the background
      but this piece is just amazing, thank you raebae <3

      @.moments - thank you!!!!
      MY HEART IS PLEASED YET AGAIN
      i appreciate it so much, thank you moments ;w;
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Tue Apr 05, 2016 5:13 am

      you love it?
      I love it <333333
      just as good as your writing^^
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby calliopë » Mon Apr 25, 2016 9:07 am

      **impatiently drums fingers in tune with that annoying clock
      im about to punch.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Aliria » Tue Apr 26, 2016 11:45 am

Why isn't there more I need more of this beauty in my life.

Like seriously how do you write like this.

I have so much trouble with emotion in my writing and somehow you've managed to write an entire story of it.

And the weird thing is I hate romance stories.
I'll send out my soul
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:19 am

      in the next 48 hours, two chapters will be born......

      SO DON'T PUNCH ME PLEASE

      @aliria - oh my goodness how even-
      your praise is seriously way over my head
      thank you so much ali, im glad I managed to make you read this even though you hate romance, GOSHDANG
      MORE SHALL COME
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Postby Asherwy » Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:18 am

sixteen. shield
MARCH (( CASE ))


I entered the school gate, snow squelching under my drab gumboots as I steadily plodded forward.
Days passed seamlessly since Edmund's reminder, and I still hadn't left Valerie, although my somewhat
muted epiphany regarding Lark propitiated my artistic friend. This cowardice of mine, I can't stand it.
Vaguely, I had realised where my true feelings lie, though the mere prospect of understanding this
enigma daunted me. Valerie was enamoured by most, her fleeting optimism and languid yet scorching
aura drew the attention of admirers despite her mildly prodigal habits. Her very presence bereft me the
wretchedness I felt from Lark's delicate, desolate face, and a part of me didn't want to face that agony
again. Is that all? I shook the notion of Valerie's possible façade away. If that were true, she would
be a living travesty. A girl such as herself who offered me heat after the winsome bird flew away and
casted that gust of frigid wind which clawed at my chest - she would never...

"Hey, Case, you'd better go save your girlfriend before she gets hurt."

A insufferably patronising sing-song tone erupted next to my ear like an irritable pimple, belonging to
one of my more well-built friends. Burly, yet unbelievably haughty. He then scurried off like a field
mouse who had found a stash of corn in the middle of a wasteland. Valerie? My strides lengthened,
pace increasing by the second as I rushed after my friend, joined by several other snoops who fervently
waited for drama like this to ensue. How pathological would someone be to lay a finger on her?
Ahead of me, my friend's hefty body stopped along with a crowd of obnoxiously curious students, figures
swaying to and fro in order to seize an adequate glimpse of the scene that was transpiring. I gulped,
swallowing the copious bile scraping its way up my throat in ire. Bundles of coats stepped aside as I
walked towards the centre of the onlooking circle, prepared to trounce whomever had dared commit
violence against a mere sunflower. Bracing myself, I set my eyes on the stage, only to be impaled by
impalpable shock. Crude strands of barbed vines enclosed around my thoughts and tightened all at once,
bursting my delusions as a menagerie of alloyed sunlight seeped out of my wounds.
What a travesty.

"Valerie?"

A strangled whisper crawled out of my throat, coated with bile as it dripped off my tongue. Plucked
feathers flitted before my vision, and the sun whom tore them from its owner halted, her vibrantly
repulsive face turning to gape at my presence. Ignoring Valerie's impertinent squabble of an explanation,
I warily approached the girl who was kneeling on the ground, her cheeks a sore shade of cerise and a
part of her lips swollen. It was as if my flamboyant heart was being wrung by the hands of a grieving
mother, all traces of craven doubt draining away with the sodden snow. Charily in response, she cast a
debilitated gaze, her emerald lanterns portraying a forest after fire as rain pacified the smoke. Minuscule
tears leaked silently from her eyes.

"C-Case, I...she was trying to ruin our relationship...I only-"

Valerie's futile stammers came to an abrupt stop, her mangled thread cut - burned by the sun itself. I
wrapped my arms around the broken bird before me, squeezing her tightly until I could finally feel the
comforting warmth I had desperately yearned for, extinguishing the beguiled heat forced upon me by
Valerie. Her arms returned the favour and an anguished jubilation took hold of my breath, mounting
higher and higher until my scrunched eyelids overflowed with untimely happiness.
My bird had come back.


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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Tue Jun 07, 2016 2:51 am

      aaaaaah
      feels
      feeeeeeeels
      what are you doing to my poor lil heart D:

      *throws to the ground and cries*
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Tue Jun 07, 2016 6:42 am

      lol both of you are cray
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Tue Jun 07, 2016 8:02 pm

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      crazy? me?
      ahahahaha
      maybe
      a bit
      a big bit
      lol

      but no
      serious now
      you like to shatter my heart
      take it and rip into billions if tiny shreds?
      need a new part
      now

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