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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:57 am

: nerdy aqua : wrote:I need help again

oh noes

I need ideas, most of my ideas can't happen so early, and I need an idea on a sort of filler, or a better way to put it, ideas for a new part of the story. I've collected some ideas so far, but other than that, I'm kinda stuck.


hmm, I have a couple of starter ideas.

- school journey to a foreign country?
- baking challenge/something to do with food? It's called the pumpkin pie, so why not?
- some type of competition in school?
- criminal student on the loose?

basically anything to tell us more about the school
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby retroaqua » Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:59 am

@ lait
well, i am quite determined by your tips
even though i already had two of your ideas, and i'm using one right now
the hidden door..
and you can guess the other :^)
but i was wandering if it was too early?? oh well, i'll just continue writing

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HOW HAVE BOTH OF YOU HAD AT LEAST TWO OF MY IDEAS I AM SO CONFUSED

there will be a journey later on in the story, but again, i thought it was too early. but hey, whatever you lovelies want.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:03 am

: nerdy aqua : wrote:@ lait
well, i am quite determined by your tips
even though i already had two of your ideas, and i'm using one right now
the hidden door..
and you can guess the other :^)
but i was wandering if it was too early?? oh well, i'll just continue writing

the use of many tabs

@ S p L i t

HOW HAVE BOTH OF YOU HAD AT LEAST TWO OF MY IDEAS I AM SO CONFUSED

there will be a journey later on in the story, but again, i thought it was too early. but hey, whatever you lovelies want.

huhuhuhue
Hidden door sounds nice.
it would be funny if it led to undertale since you seem to love that
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby rocoboq » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:04 am

: nerdy aqua : wrote:I need help again

oh noes

I need ideas, most of my ideas can't happen so early, and I need an idea on a sort of filler, or a better way to put it, ideas for a new part of the story. I've collected some ideas so far, but other than that, I'm kinda stuck.

    //Casually slides in

    Perhaps a student dies and there's a funeral where everyone's invited, but at the school there's a representative from each caste that says something about them in an assembly? I haven't read the Pumpkin Pie, so I'm just assuming there's some sort of caste system.
    Or maybe there's some sort of competition school-wide! We do these at our school. The most memorable one we do we call the "Tiger Olympics" and basically each grade is a team, and for each game a select number of students is chosen from each grade to participate. There's also prizes handed out to the winning grade/team after each game and to random students throughout the event.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:06 am

@nerdy aqua
Well, maybe it's because we can see right through you. *stares into your soul*
Hmm... More ideas...
Someone else falls for Soul and tries to flirt with him. Food fight. *throws a pie at you* The gang hang out and play video games.

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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:10 am

20lait1 wrote:@nerdy aqua
Well, maybe it's because we can see right through you. *stares into your soul*
Hmm... More ideas...
Someone else falls for Soul and tries to flirt with him. Food fight. *throws a pie at you* The gang hang out and play video games.

@Split
OH YES UNDERTALE


or they play undertale
Undertale. Undertale. Undertale.

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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby retroaqua » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:23 am

actually, the hidden chamber would lead to something darker than the genocide route

i'm writing it right now

WAIT THIS IS AMAZING ' Someone else falls for Soul and tries to flirt with him. '

i am so using this in the future

it'll be rachelle, because she's a meany

or irisia, if anyone remembers her from the monument

was she from the monument? i forgot
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:25 am

: nerdy aqua : wrote:actually, the hidden chamber would lead to something darker than the genocide route

i'm writing it right now

WAIT THIS IS AMAZING ' Someone else falls for Soul and tries to flirt with him. '

i am so using this in the future

it'll be rachelle, because she's a meany

or irisia, if anyone remembers her from the monument

was she from the monument? i forgot

darker than genocide? yay

Hyped for next entry. Also, you might want to listen to Undertale music while writing it. Helps :)
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby retroaqua » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:28 am

p a r a в a т a ι. wrote:
    //Casually slides in

    Perhaps a student dies and there's a funeral where everyone's invited, but at the school there's a representative from each caste that says something about them in an assembly? I haven't read the Pumpkin Pie, so I'm just assuming there's some sort of caste system.
    Or maybe there's some sort of competition school-wide! We do these at our school. The most memorable one we do we call the "Tiger Olympics" and basically each grade is a team, and for each game a select number of students is chosen from each grade to participate. There's also prizes handed out to the winning grade/team after each game and to random students throughout the event.


i will do that once a member of the school is on a rampage of murder

also

why do i think the boarding school is like malory towers and harry potter?

if you've read malory towers, of course, you'll know it's an all round female boarding school

and harry potter, you should all know that you scrubs

~ S p L i T ~ wrote:Hyped for next entry. Also, you might want to listen to Undertale music while writing it. Helps :)


megalovania, spider dance, hopes and dreams, and possibly dummy!

all of those are great for hyped entries

but, hey, listening to song of storms dubstep is cool too

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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:34 am

: nerdy aqua : wrote:
p a r a в a т a ι. wrote:
    //Casually slides in

    Perhaps a student dies and there's a funeral where everyone's invited, but at the school there's a representative from each caste that says something about them in an assembly? I haven't read the Pumpkin Pie, so I'm just assuming there's some sort of caste system.
    Or maybe there's some sort of competition school-wide! We do these at our school. The most memorable one we do we call the "Tiger Olympics" and basically each grade is a team, and for each game a select number of students is chosen from each grade to participate. There's also prizes handed out to the winning grade/team after each game and to random students throughout the event.


i will do that once a member of the school is on a rampage of murder

also

why do i think the boarding school is like malory towers and harry potter?

if you've read malory towers, of course, you'll know it's an all round female boarding school

and harry potter, you should all know that you scrubs

~ S p L i T ~ wrote:Hyped for next entry. Also, you might want to listen to Undertale music while writing it. Helps :)


megalovania, spider dance, hopes and dreams, and possibly dummy!

all of those are great for hyped entries

but, hey, listening to song of storms dubstep is cool too

oo, and one piece!

berguntrucking is probably my favorite (yes, more than Meglovania).
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