Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby the crown, » Thu Mar 17, 2016 8:42 am

    i overall really like the sig, but there's a few things i'm not exactly a fan of.

    on the text on the left, i'm not aa huge fan of how they're all different fonts, i'm not sure why, it just seems kinda odd to me idk

    and also the text on the right is kinda hard to read on my screen, but that's about it!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:44 am

    the gif is a bit smushed.
    I recommend you resize to make it more clear
    to see. I feel like the ═ should be bigger to align
    with the biggest quote. Also the image above
    the TRXYE box seems a little off. Maybe remove
    that white that is surrounding it?

    Other than that, a great sig with a great theme!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby rocoboq » Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:35 am

    Overall, I'm a big fan of your signature. However, I, personally, think I would look a bit better if you perhaps tried to incorporate a bit more pink into it (the same shade as in the GIFs). Also, the "It's" text image on the left isn't the same width as the others, and that kinda bugs me. Then again, the cabinet door in my hallway being open bugs me, too, so who knows. xD

    EDIT: Thanks, xoe, I didn't realize they were green; color codes seemed to have been working a bit strangely for me while I was making it. Fixing that error now.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby lopez arguello » Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:41 am

overall, i like your signature but the repetitive 'alright' and 'dead center' make the sig seem a bit boring. the green x's also don't really fit in with the theme of the sig.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Suhø » Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:59 am

The right side is a bit blank to me. Maybe add another small image with a text box. Other than that, that's all.


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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:22 pm

    it's very empty on the right side, and the words aside from 'WOLVES' look a bit bland and are hard to find sandwhiched at the bottom and between gifs. the 'of the' looks off-center, too...
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby sheena » Sat Mar 19, 2016 4:40 am

    the gif to the left is really good quality, and flows well, and i like the border between it and the rest of the signature. however, i do have an issue with that png image -- you can easily tell its been cut in two. i really like the concept you've done with it, but you can see the split, and the image isnt particularly the best quality either (although that might be due to the show's style - i havent seen any of it but screencaps and gifs i have seen have the cloudy sort of style over them). overall, however, it's very nice, and i always love your signatures!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ♛Queen♛ » Sat Mar 19, 2016 8:28 am

I love it, absouletly stunning. The only problem for me is that the right side seems..blank?Try adding something there, like another image possibly? But other than that fantastic coding <3
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Sat Mar 19, 2016 8:33 am

ahhh I love your sig so much but
of course I must criticize:

the links seem a bit out of
place, maybe center them?
the dingbat is blurry, so either
sharpen it or maybe remake it.
the text between the two gifs
feels out of place, maybe put a
border in there instead? Other than
that, amazing job!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby m i s s . s q u i d » Sat Mar 19, 2016 8:36 am

    :) Very well aligned, great use of space, and has good information.
    :? The gifs are a little too repetative/fast, but that's my opinion. Cute, but hard on the eyes to stare at.
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