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by taffy; » Sat Feb 27, 2016 10:41 am
A small reminder for everyone, please give at
least 2+ sentences criticizing the person's sig. If you can't criticize their
sig, than please wait until you can find someone that you can criticize.
Sorry if I'm being harsh here, I'm just noticing a lot of people giving very
vague critics C:
The borders don't aline, but that doesn't really bother me
too much. The "frens" quote on the bottom of your bio however,
feel weird and out of placed for me. I feel like you should border
the text to make it feel less awkward. I also think it would look
better if you centered it
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by tubla » Sun Feb 28, 2016 12:42 am
You did a good job with the earthy colour scheme, gifs (placement and "smoothness"), and layout in general. Although the "evenness" of everything looks good, personally I'd have the text and in-between content centered as well. The bio and links sections look a bit cramped to me, but I understand not liking big signatures.
To each their own, I suppose ¯\_(•_•)_/¯
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by bina-chan » Sun Feb 28, 2016 4:55 am
The fonts you chose are nice, but, maybe on their own. They don't all really go together, and the first one is a bit difficult for me to read. Also, the large blank space between the two sides and the centre character text seems a bit too much, maybe add something there or push everything to the left/right.
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by Aliria » Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:15 am
It would probably be a lot better if you put in some bio type stuff instead of 'words words words' in Japanese. Also it's a bit wider that the borders around it, which doesn't look great. The up-and-down borders are a bit weird, with how one's wider than the other and fades to white a bit in the middle, it would probably look better if they matched. I'm also not a big fan of the font for the big words, but if definitely could be a lot worse.
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by AtlasHyperion » Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:24 am
I love the dinosaur, but it seems a bit cut off at the tail. The lines dividing the clickable boxes are lower than the boxes themselves, and the text at the top seems out-of-place because it's separated from everything else. There's a lot of space between the bio and the borders too.

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by arabella !! » Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:57 am
The bio box would look a bit more nicer if it could have a colour that matches the GIFs and font image? Like a dark red? The text would look better if it was a size 85 as well. ^^
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by taffy; » Thu Mar 03, 2016 11:25 am
The gif should be bigger, as on my screen
there is a lot of empty space on the bottom.
the text in the split gif should be a bright
color, to make it stand out. Maybe some text borders
on the side would make it look better. C:
if you could please say what I should put
in the empty spaces of my sig, that would
be great!
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by MEAT! » Fri Mar 04, 2016 9:40 am
i do not know if it is just my computer, but where
it says 'my love' and then the '___' underneath it, it
is like one line space off (gosh i am horrible at
explaining but i hope you know what i mean)
the text is a lil small on the side, so its kinda hard
to read
but really, other than that, its looks very nice c:
i also dont think anything should really be added
the small empty spaces make sure its not too
cluttered
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