Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Sat Feb 13, 2016 3:05 pm

    don't like the smallcaps. i think the feel of the signature would be better
    if it were just normal font. i can't really say anything else, because that signature was commissioned...
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby lopez arguello » Sat Feb 13, 2016 4:36 pm

hmm, this is hard.
the text is all a bit confusing to me, and the image is really out there. other that than, i love it!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby x__x » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:29 am

I love it, because you know it's mel.
The only thing about it is it's a little empty.
It feels like it needs just a bit more...

(Sorry, mine is bad. It's a wip, and I 'm no expert at coding. Still, I would love your opinion!)
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby tamade ♪ » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:31 am

It's nice! I like the simplicity, and I see you are apart of... Alot of fandoms. I also love the way you incorporated the wolf, and love the potato writing
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Postby barbwirebrat » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:35 am

i lovelovelove the galaxy theme! i just
personally dont think the orange really fits
well with it tbh. other than that, its
gorgeous!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:38 am

The layout is nice and the way the colors match is also pleasing. I guess it just feels uneven, like there isn't enough stuff filling the right side compared to the left. I think it looks really good thogh!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby caesou » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:43 am

    there's a bit of a gap at the bottom underneath the bio. the bio also seems a bit cluttered and spilling a little bit out on the side. looks really good otherwise!

    in the post my signature is pushed down, please check my profile
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby x__x » Sun Feb 14, 2016 9:45 am

I love it! There's nothing very bad to say about it. I, too, am in ballet.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Aliria » Sun Feb 14, 2016 10:52 am

Mostly it's pretty good. You could use some borders to separate the different areas. At the end of the first row of the text on the right there's an extra [/size] you should remove.The stamps would probably look better centered, and there are a bit many, might be good to cut a few.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Wed Feb 17, 2016 5:13 am

ahhh I really like yours, but I do have to
to criticize your sig so:
the borders are too bright for the color
scheme of your sig, and I think you should
darken them. the stamps kinda throw off
the color scheme of the sig as well, and
the stars a little too big
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