~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

[Viiperfang]

Your welcome <3

I got a pm:

"U CN RP WIT MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " That's what they said. O.o

[moira]

Holy crap, I thought you were seriously saying that... *huge sigh of relief*
*cough*smiley abuse*cough*

[Viiperfang]

Holy crap, I thought you were seriously saying that... *huge sigh of relief*
*cough*smiley abuse*cough*

I know.....

[Erille]

I think that annoys me most is smiley abuse.

Also when people RP with this. This isn't a real one, I'm too lazy to look.

WaterCat smiled at SunCat . Then she got mad as SunCat started talking to WindCat. She rolled her eyes, telling herself it was nothing. She laughed at herself. SunCat would never leave her. Watercat felt so silly.

If you are a good enough writer you could ditch the smilies. In fact that sentence is okay except for the smilies. Well except for the fact it's power-play and the sentence has no structure. I really dislike it when people write sentences like, "She got mad at her friend then got over it. Her friend wouldn't fight for long. Then her friend scowled at her and she felt mad again."

No one changed emotions that quickly and for one, those sentences have no flow.

[moira]

Yeah or when people RP in first person.
"I walk up to __insert name here__. I ask him what he's doing. He responds to me."
That's confusing. And only works if you have one character.

[Erille]

I hate that too. Unless they put their character's name before the post I'm always like "what?"

Roleplay is roleplay for a reason. Who aren't playing yourself. So unless you are your werewolf character I don't you think you should be saying "I ate a rabbit whole. I attacked it first."

That brings on another annoyance. People not talking in chronological order. When you say "I just ate a ice cream cone." Then later in the paragraph you post "I went to the store to get it before I could eat it." I don't understand it. At all.

[moira]

Confusing...Dx
BAM! Boredom Oekaki.

[Viiperfang]

I hate when people power play and don't even do it right. I was in a rp and this is what the person said:

"Stone walked over to june. "Hey, june. i'm ginna kll u nw." Hshe said as he killed her"

Edit;
Hey, did you put my picture up yet Greenie?

[moira]

Not cool, man!
Greenie walks over to Stone. "I keel you!" She yells like Achmed the dead Terrorist, bonking his head with a boulder.

Edit, sorry! I was distracted by Glee and my new siggie.

[Erille]

ACHMED! Was that person playing all three characters.

"Hey, I kill you now." What is June doing in all this?'

Hshe: "I kill you now, June!"
June: *licks ice cream* "Wait, what?"