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by kiwi;; » Fri Feb 12, 2016 3:44 am

Story;; your spine shivers as you walk through the dense, dark forest. you haven't seen anyone else in a while, and you are cold and tired. after passing a tree line, you see a small, half lit fire across the overgrown field. a wave of relief hits you as you begin to walk faster. although you can feel that something isn't right, the cold air overwhelms your mind. you keep walking , faster and faster towards the hardly lit fire. as you walk, you glance up at the dark night sky. the moon is just a small slit, giving off no light. you are surprised that you were even able to navigate the forest. by this time, the flame is in complete eye sight. you stop as soon as you can feel the heat radiating from the fire. for a moment, you feel relieved, but you begin to question this area. who started this fire? is anyone around? before you can move, you can feel movement behind you and your heart starts to pound against your chest. a quick flash of wind passes through your hair, and you could hear it's footsteps. do you dare turn around? before you can answer yourself, you hear a soft voice from your right side. it speaks under it's breath, "i have been expecting you." only a few seconds later, a creature emerges from a pitch-black bush. this is like nothing you've seen before, and although your eyes show you a threatening creature, you feel safe. the voice was high-pitched, you can tell "it" is a female. she is tall, and you cannot make out her face before she walks behind the flame. although she is large, she moves swiftly and her footsteps make no noise against the cold dirt ground. another wave of fright passes through your body, and you think to yourself, run! before you can move a muscle, she says, "no, don't run!" whatever your mind tells you a command, she stops you before you can react. she then takes a step forward. by this time, you are stunned. you can now make out their characteristics. she wears a large, terrifying bird-like skull atop her head. a small feathered necklace limply hangs from her neck, gold and red jewelry dangles from all over her body. her accessories blindingly glare off of the warm flame, "you should feel calm." as she speaks, you instantly feel relaxed. you feel as if she is controlling you. i need to leave! you try to move yourself but she quietly says, "don't move, just stay." after multiple times of trying, you can finally blurt out, "who-- who are you? what are you doing to me?!" she slowly walks towards you. for a moment, she stands in front of you, only inches away. although her eyes are not visible under the mask, you know she is looking at you. she lets a slow breath out, and she moves her arms just slightly. you flinch, not knowing what will happen next. she stops and speaks gently, "i'm not going to hurt you." she continues to adjust, and slowly removes her skull helmet. you can see her now. she has a furry canine face, and her beaded tail swings behind her. her eyes are a beautiful shade of brown, and she sits down in front of you. before speaking, she glances up at the sky, and speaks as if she is worried. "i know you will not trust me, but you just need to know this. you see, i knew you were coming here, even before i saw you with my own eyes." her voice is filled with anxiousness, and she speaks fast. you are dumbstruck, and think to yourself, what? that makes no sense. she nods gently, "i feel your confusion, but you will not understand yet." she looked over her shoulder for a moment, before her gaze returns to your face. "i have the 'ability' to know what you, and others, will do before it even happens." you slowly nod, you do not understand her, or what she is doing, but you ask her, "well, what is your name?" before she replies, she holds out her paw. you look down and a small brown feather lays in her palm. she nods towards it. unsure, you slowly take the feather. she smiles, and quietly whispers "Keitha". you open your mouth to speak, but before you can say anything, you hear a loud noise behind you. you quickly turn, and fear returns to you. you are able to move again and you turn back around, "why did you tell m-", your eyes search in front of you, she is gone. the forest is silent, and you only hear the crackling of the flame. you feel a soft wind pass your body, and it carries a faint voice, "see you soon." you hear an unknown noise above you, instinctively, you look up. right before it vanishes behind the trees, you catch glance of a huge bird, it's feathers matching the one in your hand.
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by kiwi;; » Fri Feb 12, 2016 3:51 am

Brief History;; believe it or not, Keitha was born into human civilization. for the first few years of her life, she lived miserable, slow years with her human owners. words cannot describe how much Keitha disliked living there. the humans were nice to her; they fed her, cleaned her, and took good care of her. but there was just something Keitha hated about that place. she would often look outside the main room's window, which faced the forest. she would see birds, insects, and other wild animals roam freely just feet away. Keitha never felt the feeling of freedom, but she wanted to know what it was like, to feel the wind, to touch the trees. so that's just what she did; leave. she sneaked out of the house, during midnight, and ran. for hours, she just ran. her legs never seemed to get tired until she stopped. at first, Keitha was struck with fear. she knew she had made a mistake. she wanted to go back just then, but she could never find her way back. by this time, Keitha was frightened, and tired. she decided to sleep through the night. her dreams were strange. she dreamed about herself; in the forest, surviving. without any previous knowledge of the forest, throughout her sleep, she learned everything she would need for the forest. after hours of resting, she awoke. many, strange looking, and large objects laid a few feet in front of her, neatly organized and placed on a tree stump. a strange skull, ribbons, beads, bracelets, necklaces. although not knowing where these item came from, Keitha took them with her.
xFavorites;;
Season: Fall
Weather: Foggy, cool
Month: September
Animal: Falcons, Crows
Song:
RenegadesFood: Berries
Fruit: Blackberries
Sound: Rain on leaves
Feeling: Calm, relaxed
Scent: Mint
Color: gold, red
Facts;;
Age: twenty-three
Sexuality: asexual
Pronounces, She, her
Birthday: July 28
Birth Year: 1993
Zodiac: Gemini
Religion: Non-religious
Birthstone: Ruby
Chinese Zodiac: Rooster
Height: 5' 9"
Top Speed: 15 mph
Quirks, Other Facts;;
Keitha has an amazing "talent" where she is able to "read other's minds". to put it simply, Keitha can predict what a creature is going to say or do before it even happens. She doesn't really like her face, so she mostly keeps her head covered. She never takes off her accessories or items. Keitha used to have a fear of fire, because a forest fire nearly took her life. Keitha is strong mentally, not physically. although meets many people, she doesn't enjoy having permanent friends. Keitha was born into the human life, and she doesn't know her mother or siblings.
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by kiwi;; » Fri Feb 12, 2016 3:56 am
Likes & Dislikes;;
Likes: cool nights, full moons, meeting others, being alone, fire,
peaceful creatures, gold and red colors, meaningful music
Dislikes: hot weather, snow, aggressive creatures, intense sunlight,
cold water, purple and green colors, loud music, humans
Hobbies;;
out in the wild, Keitha doesn't have many hobbies. other civilized viscets enjoy painting or photography. Keitha simply cannot do that in the wild. instead of having physical hobbies, she has "mental hobbies". Keitha has an amazing memory, and she is excellent at memorizing names, looks, and personalities of others. so Keitha creates "mental scrapbooks". whenever she wants to, she can just think about the viscets that she's met. she loves remembering the good people that she has met. but Keitha finds ways to keep herself herself occupied in the wilderness. during the fall season, she enjoys collecting leaves and during spring Keitha gathers flowers and feathers.
Personality;;
alert | balanced | charming | dynamic | gentle | humble | intellectual | logical | modest | observant | neat | calm
Keitha has a very unique yet strange personality. because Keitha meets many people in her woodland home, she is always on the lookout for new-comers. even though she has never met any of these people, she is very open and friendly to them. Keitha thinks that if she is nice to them, they will act the same towards her. even though she gets a "bad vibe" from some strangers, she still welcomes them. Keitha knows that everyone has a good side, and she tries to find that with anyone she meets. to make people feel comfortable, she is very quite and humble. she knows that she cannot rush trust, so she tries to take everyone slow, without asking hurtful or personal questions. Keitha loves hearing what other's have to say, and she is always interested in the stories they tell.
About the Items;;
as previously stated, Keitha awoke to these items the day after she ran into the woods.
that night was the most strange scene to occur to me. i had the most odd dream, and the whole time i could hear noises. bird squawks, breaking tree limbs, footsteps on leaves... when i woke, i thought i was still in my dream. the first thing i saw was a gold reflection. moments after lifting my head, a huge bird skull sat a top a tree stump, red and gold beads hung from it. it was clearly put there by someone, for a reason. i still to this day do not know who these strange yet familiar items are from. i decided that i had to take the items with me. i started to love the gold and red jewelry and beads, and quickly began to wear them. i was still not comfortable around the bird skull. i believe it is fake, maybe clay or rock. i have never seen such a huge bird. as the months went on, i met more and more wild viscets. most of which were brutal and savage-like. they would threaten and even injure me often. after observing many of these wild viscets, i realized that they all had one thing in common; they looked threatening. some wore spikes, while others carried knives. many would curse and yell, and almost all wore threatening clothing. as much as i didn't want to, i knew i needed to wear the bird skull. it was heavy, and it took me a while to grow into it. but now i rarely get into trouble with other viscets, and most seem to simply avoid me. the jewels and beads only represent me; such as my personality and likes.
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by kiwi;; » Fri Feb 12, 2016 4:02 am
Relationships;;

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Keitha met Asiza while on a quiet walk through
the forest. because of Asiza's natural colors, Ke-
itha walked straight past her, and saw her after
she moved a bit. Keitha was shocked but she qu-
ickly realized that Asiza was a calm and soothing
viscet, which was perfect for Keitha.


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Fannara was one of Keitha's favorite viscets to meet.
Keitha met Fannara during the first few months of
her woodland life. it was strange for Keitha to meet
such a sweet and open viscet were she was located.
Keitha wasn't very sure about Fannara at first, but
after a few minutes of interacting, Keitha realized
that Fannara was a trustworthy and humble viscet.


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even though Keitha only met with Kirin for a tiny
amount of time, Kirin has been one of the most
important and inspirational viscets she's ever met.
Kirin encouraged her that leaving her human life
was a good idea, and helped her learn important
information about the wild. Kirin let Keitha know
that she could easily live in the wild, and taught
her good lessons about other viscets.


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after Keitha was more comfortable venturing out
into the wild, she met Aluna. because of Aluna's
beautifully bright colors, Keitha noticed her in-
stantly. at the same time, Aluna noticed Keitha.
Both talked for a while, and this is when Keitha
learned that there are many good viscets in the
wild, and there are the same amount of good
and bad viscets roaming the forest.


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out of all the viscets that Keitha has ever met,
Tora is definitely one of her least favorites. She
was loud, obnoxious, and rude to Keitha, and w-
ithout knowing what else to do, Keitha attacked
her. Because of Tora's long, metal claws, Keitha
left with a large tear across her ear. Although Tora
was just trying to intimidate her, Keitha took it
the wrong way, and still to this day has hatred
for Tora.
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by kiwi;; » Fri Feb 12, 2016 4:05 am
Biggest Secret;;
Keitha has met many people throughout her life, but there are few things that she never tells anyone. Keitha has atychiphobia, which is the fear of failure, and the fear of not being good enough. Keitha has no one to compare herself to, since she doesn't create permanent relationships. but nonetheless, she still feels the need to compare herself to others. throughout the years, she has managed to control this phobia, but rarely, she gets extremely anxious because of her fear.
Goals;;
ince Keitha's talent allows to her predict actions by others, she wants to use this ability to help others. or example, if Keitha finds herself predicting something bad for someone else, she could do her best to help those people. although she can only predict for very breif moments, Keitha has already found herself helping others to avoid trouble.
Dreams;;
often, Keitha dreams about what she wants to accomplish throughout her life. she images what good things she can do for herself, and others. she wants to see the ocean during her life time, get close enough to see an eagle or falcon, and she wants to meet another viscet similar to her. one that has the same interests as herself, and thinks like she does. although she doubts that she will ever find another viscet for her, Keitha would love to eventually have a mate, and be able to raise visclings in the peaceful woodlands.
Fears;;
one; forest fires. when Keitha was very new to the forest life, she didn't pay attention much, and almost lost her life because of it. she fell asleep next to her campfire, and awoke to burning bushes and trees around her. a small section of her leg caught flame, and she still has a scar. because of her past life, Keitha highly dislikes humans. she sees them occasionally walking through the woods. often, they yell and scream and she finds them obnoxious.

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