Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Sun Jan 24, 2016 4:39 am

The yellow and your pink chat bubbles looks too bright for the rest of your color scheme. The stamps also make the sig look a little weird. It's beautiful though.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Cayla » Sun Jan 24, 2016 4:44 am

      I would remove the lines on the right image and change the font in the middle to fit better. Perhaps use differnt types of fonts or incorporate color?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Autumnlp99 » Sun Jan 24, 2016 4:47 am

It's a nice signature but I personally would make it bigger, the bottom part isn't in line with the top, and the black plant kind of looks awkward to me. c:
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby paopu » Sun Jan 24, 2016 6:13 am

Overall, I love the signature! My biggest critique is that some people (not me, I love spiders ^^) are pretty wigged out by spiders and having the tarantula pic has the potential to be a little triggery. That being said, as spiders are adoptable here, I wouldn't think that's a huge issue, just something to think about *shrugs*
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Sun Jan 24, 2016 6:31 am

Yours is great, but rather small and kind of empty. Consider re-sizing the gifs and adding more words/symbols/colors to it. It would look great with colors, borders, and symbols. Overall, it is aesthetically pleasing, however.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby eyeless » Mon Jan 25, 2016 9:51 am

i feel like the squiggly green things in your signature are really weird and don't fit
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby planetesimal » Mon Jan 25, 2016 9:56 am

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I like it over all, and am totally with you on the bands.

The thing I don't like is that the center two lines aren't exactly centered, which is bothersome.
Also, the text isn't grammatically correct. I would change that in order to add to the classy overall look of the signature. c:
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Mon Jan 25, 2016 9:57 am

    it's simple, a little overwhelmingly so. the oval shape appears a bit fuzzy/pixelly on the edges of the gif. i feel like a flower png would balance it out?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Mon Jan 25, 2016 11:39 am

The quote on the top of the mirror picture looks a little awkward there. Also the pumpkin looks too out of place with the rest of the sig. It's still a great sig though!

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .cat » Mon Jan 25, 2016 11:49 am

i like it! bonus points for it being a su sig!
i think the font of the black text doesn't fit
the theme very well. also, i don't like how the
quote widens the middle area so much, and
doesn't fit to the height of the entire sig.

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