Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:19 am

It feels a bit unbalanced. The blank space on the right image is distracting. Also, there are a lot of words, too many for a signature. Otherwise, though, it's great.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Aliria » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:42 am

There's a lot of empty space in the middle, maybe put a quote there or something? I would also suggest removing/replacing the warning about your sister, as mods don't actually care about those at all. Also, it would look a bit better if the gifs were the same size, but I get gif resizing can be difficult and they look alright like this.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:18 am

I can't take that info about my sister away because otherwise we'll both be banned because the mods will think it's one person with 2 accounts on the same computer. Yours is great, but more symmetry would be nice, and more symbols/borders.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ryuunosuke » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:26 am

    ah, you can include that info about your sister in your 'interests' tab. mods don't particularly care about that kind of information, and you can clear it up with them if they PM you about it? technically what Aliria said.

    hm, the middle feels like it's missing something, but i don't know what. try making a border? other than that everything is nicely organized.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby cosmos.; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:29 am

I feel the ◤s don't really fit in with the signature style. I also feel like it's a little too squashed, so maybe try expanding it a little?

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby .normal.human. » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:32 am

The images on the right are a little pixelated maybe make the bottom quote flush with the bottom of the pictures.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby dorkasaurus » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:35 am

    i quite like your signature overall, so there isn't much that i dislike except
    for minor things. i get how the "thank you for your" goes along with the
    blue in the gif, but it's a bit too bright for me and hurts my eyes. also,
    the part of the ear and hair that made it to the other side does bother
    me a tad bit, but it's understandable if there wasn't anywhere else of
    a good place to split it. i also notice that you changed the text box
    type. personally, i would keep it consistent, but you do you. it's very
    well done otherwise.


    ah, the first thing that i notice is that your borders are pretty busy.
    i would tone it down a bit with all the text and patterns and images,
    especially since there are other factors like upside down text. it's a
    bit overwhelming in my opinion. plus, i feel that the right border is
    done a bit sloppily with the lattice and images underneath. that isn't
    to say that it's a bad signature; just a little much to take in at once.
    maybe try balancing out the everything by putting some of the things
    in the middle rather than cramming it into the borders. nice job otherwise.


    your signature doesn't fit for me on forum. the right image is pushed down,
    and the image on the far right in the bottom row doesn't really show up
    at all. getting it to fit would be a start. and also, although all the images
    are nice, i guess there's not much that stands out to me since they all
    look fairly similar to me. so maybe have something you want to stand out
    more/highlight in your sig? nice job, though.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby taffy; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:44 am

The quote on the bottom of your bio is a bit pushed down. Try making the bio a teensy bit smaller to fix that.
The DICE is a bit blurry, maybe sharpen up the edges?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby AtlasHyperion » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:53 am

Yours is great, but maybe change the borders so it's either all ━ or all ═ instead of a mixture of the two. Also, having the pictures on the left side and writing on the right for both columns isn't quite symmetrical, maybe switch it so all words are in the middle or something like that?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby cosmos.; » Tue Jan 19, 2016 8:00 am

I love the borders for yours (around the text), but I feel like you should resize the gifs (use ezgif.com) to make them the same size. I think you should do something to make the quotes stand out from the bio.
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