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Postby hypnowave » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:27 pm

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✧ ━━━━━━━━━━━ // on me, spell, on me // ━━━ ✧

hello ! this is a joint form between me and ta-
kura. for the albino and melanistic vaikis. ;w;

✧ ━━ // you hit me like the sky fell // ━━━━━━ ✧

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the sun goes down

Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:31 pm

melanistic wrote:
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Name ; Bubsie Toreline
Gender ; Male
Occupation ; Reluctant prince
Relationship with Nicodemus ; Twin brother
Basic personality ;
Rebellious - Grumpy - Short-fused - Off-put
albino wrote:
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Name ; Nicodemus Toreline
Gender ; Demiboy
Occupation ; Prince
Relationship with Bubsie ; Twin brother
Basic personality ;
Calm and collected - Crybaby - Emphatic - Spontaneous
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Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:32 pm

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    bubsie's personality
    Busbie, in short, is bitter and cold. He has a strong dislike towards his position as one of the heirs to the throne. Being put on a glorified, leaderly position puts him on edge - He prefers to be left to his own pursuits. Those pursuits can oftentime lead him into troublesome situations, often to the distress of the twins' parents. His reaction time can be slow at points, causing him to not catch statements until a bit of time after they're said. He has a harsh tongue and can give a snappy reaction if pushed enough, but has enough self control to keep himself from insulting those he trusts dearly {such as Nico}. His pushy, rude attitude often puts other Vaikis off, and he gets disgruntled if anyone questions him about his royal status; he'd rather not associate himself with being of royal blood.

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    nico's personality
    nico, for the most part, is good at keeping himself together in situations. despite how rarely his daily life fluctuates, he can still adapt very quickly to certain situations. despite this, nico can be a little bit of a crybaby, but not without reason. he cries whenever he realizes he's missed chances, when he's longing for change or company. he doesn't cry when he can't get what he wants - he thinks that's childish. he's emphatic as well - with his disabilities, he feels rather disadvantaged, but he never brings that up in conversation out of fear that he makes it all about him, but even then, he doesn't feel resentment. he understands, or tries to, if someone ever opens their heart out to him. he is spontaneous as well, reacting rather quickly at times, even when he gives advice. most of what he says is from the heart, but he always means well.
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and all that counts

Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:32 pm

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Nico's Likes:
nico, despite being a prince, doesn't really like luxury - his likes are simple. anything pleasant is okay with him. he loves flowers, cereal and milk, white and dark chocolate, his small bed, and anything space related. his cloak's underside has a galaxy pattern to prove his love for space. nico likes it when vaikis treat him as a friend instead of a prince, as it reduces any awkwardness. he likes any sort of music but country, and he has a black violin with a matching black bow that he plays on occasion. he also likes cats, and hopes to own one.


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    Nico's Disikes:
    nico doesn't enjoy when others bow down to him or put him on a pedestal - it's his number one pet peeves. while he enjoys wearing royal attire, he also doesn't like the shoes that come with it - it makes his feet itch. nico also has a fear of spiders, they make his fur stand on end. dogs, especially large breeds like greyhounds, german shepherds, rottweilers and pitbulls intimidate him too. nico doesn't like raisins and any bread with raisins, either. nico doesn't like country music, and is a little stingy towards any fanfares he hears.

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    Bubsie's Likes:
    Bubsie has a fondness for long novels, as well as quiet time. He uses such time to self indulge, spending hours at a time reading hundred page novels. Whenever he's not reading or being super duper grumpy, he also has taken a liking to baking - although some of his creations turn out horribly burnt. To the {probably} dismay of his brother, he enjoys raisins, often keeping a small box of them on his person on most occasions. He desires to open his own bake shop some day - but he's a little reluctant as his royal status may make things more difficult.

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    Bubsie's Disikes:
    Bubsie has a dislike for extremely loud music, covering his ears whenever it's played in the general vicinity. He also absolutely despises his royal blood being brought up whenever they're conversing with him, tending to snap whenever it's mentioned to him. He also is mildly afraid of terrible weather, especially thunderstorms- storms cause him to cower in fear under his seat. He also doesn't like to eat spinach, despite pressure from both Nico and almost all others to at least TRY it before casting it off as "the world's worst creation, worse than thunderstorms".
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is here and now

Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:33 pm

When the two first hatched as the children of the King and Queen, it had been a quiet winter day. The whole town had held their breaths, awaiting the news of the new heirs. It’d been several hours, but shortly after, the twins came into the world.

The two were vastly different, one having fur that was white like snow, and the other having fur as deep as the shadows of hidden corridors. But they were loved all the same.

Their mother, a grey Vaiki with swirl patterns within her fur, named their white-furred son, giving him the name of Nicodemus. Their father, a deep grey vaiki, was not as great with coming up with names. The black-furred son was thereby named Bubsie (though their father swore it was short for “Beelzebub”). And the two soon took their first steps into being royalty.

The brothers were awfully close as kids, Bubsie oftentimes helping his brother stop crying or Nico taking Bubsie out on adventures (granted they had permission of course). The twins spent most of their time together, when they weren’t being prodded and poked by members of the castle staff, and they often got in trouble during their adventures (much to Nico’s dismay). They spent the majority of their childhood being taught the gist of being of royal blood.

As the two got older, they began to drift apart - Bubsie beginning to dislike the idea of being of royal blood, while Nico was more accepting of it. As the two began to grow older, they began to argue - sometimes simple, silly fights and other times they grew to full-out yelling - and soon they began to simply hang out by themselves, barely resembling the two princes they had been way back when.

It had been obvious that Bubsie was not happy with being treated as royalty, but he then took it another step by doing something unheard of to the royal line - he burned the items declaring him a prince, and he began to destroy any photos involving his family - but he couldn’t bring himself to fully destroy the pictures for one reason. Nico.
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my universe will never be the same

Postby hypnowave » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:35 pm

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day one
so we got some diaries. i know bubs doesn't like his, which makes me a little sad. anyways, not much else happened today? i guess it's just the usual. mom says i need new glasses. i don't like how i have to face all these symptoms, but what gives? you win some, you lose some. anyways, i guess i'll have to learn to get used to writing in this thing. personally, i like it. i hope nobody else reads this diary. lookin' at you, mom, dad, bubs, if you're reading this. i just want this to be a safe place for me to store anything that i need to say. thanks.

day forty-one
i don't think bubs can hear me writing this. he only just finished writing his entry, and now he's sleeping. i can't blame him for turning into bed early. i took him outside today, we went to see the villages and stuff, and i actually felt like he really really enjoyed it for a while there. we bought some apples - the seller looked really surprised to see the princes of the kingdom shopping for fruits in plain sunlight, but she promised not to speak a word of it to the royal guards as long as we promised to tell her stories about kingdom life... then we got caught.

day ninety-eight
bubsie always skips his days whenever i remind him to write in his diary. i guess it doesn't mean that much to him. today we didn't do too much, actually - i really want to sneak out again. i feel like i owe the apple seller vaiki a story or two. i've never managed to see her again, though i don't think bubs has forgotten about that day either. maybe i'll bring it up to him eventually. we could run outside again, we could have fun again. it's been months. we'll find a way to get out of here, escape our responsibilities for just one day. i know bubs would love that.


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    day one hundred and forty
    i tried to get bubs to go outside with me today. he was really stingy about it, and whenever i tried to remind him of how great it was last time he just told me he didn't want our parents mad at us. he has a point, and i could hear the spite in his voice whenever he told me that. for once, i feel like i should acknowledge how much he dislikes living as a royal. right now, it's nighttime, and i'm not sure if bubs has written anything. i just hope that when he wakes up he'll decide that maybe sneaking outside a second time won't be too bad after all.

    day one hundred and forty-one
    well, i'm going to do it. i'm going to drag his bubsie butt out of this castle. i can't stand being in this room for much longer! my hands are trembling enough as it is. i know he's going to love this. i'll just grab some coins and my hood, and i'll tell bubs i have a plan. i wonder how long it will be before he realizes what i'm going to do? will he start pushing me around again? maybe when he gets a whiff of the fresh air outside, he'll change his mind. i really, really hope he does. well, that's it for now, diary, i promise i'll write more when we're back!

    day one hundred and forty-two
    no no NO NO NO NOT THIS! i'm having trouble writing this and i cant believe its happened i, it didnt go the way i wanted and now bubs is gone and its raining and i dont have much time in this room and i just want to throw this diary across the room or hit my dad with it or something and i cant, i just, i cant stop crying, hes left and i dont know what i want to do, i cant even write straight, my eyesight is all blurry and now i just cant do this! i just can't do this! he's gone and it's all my fault, and it's all gone to naught... bubsie, i'm sorry.
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i'm glad you came

Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:36 pm

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Entry 1
Mom and Dad came to the room I share with Nico and gave us these... Diaries. They said they want us to write our adventures in them, or something. Do they really think we're such children??? This is ridiculous.. I don't like being put up on a pedestal like this, I'd rather just spend time by myself...! I hate being fawned over as the next royal kid, I'd rather just be some regular old brat who causes trouble. Being of royal blood is just tiring and boring. I don't like it.



Entry 40
Today me and Nico went outside without asking our parents. It was actually kind of exciting. We mostly went out adventuring around the villages that are scattered here and there, peeking into shops and talking to the local villagers. We also met a lady who was selling some apples, so we bought a couple. Of course, she brought up our royal blood. But she also promised to keep it a secret as long as we came back to tell her stories about being royal. But then we got caught, and forced back home. I guess that everyone else is just the Fun Police who can't handle a little bit of amusement. I'm going to bed.



Entry 96
I hate being stuck in this house. It's stuffy and cramped, and there's nothing to do. I don't wanna spend all my time writing in this cluster of pages, and Nico bugging me about it isn't of any help. But while I've been bored, I've been thinking about the last time we went out. About the apple seller. I wonder how she's been doing, and I feel kinda sorry that we haven't given her any stories. But it's not our fault, really - it's not our fault that our parents are keeping us here to be the next Big Royal Leaders. I'm so bored...




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Entry 132
Nico tried to get me to go outside with him today. I told him that I'd rather not get in trouble with our parents like last time, but he persisted. I'm kind of... Tired of being held up in this house, being pushed to do this or that and to "live up to the royal blood" like our parents demand. It's enough stress to keel me over, but I act like I care - better to be caught for being a liar than to be punished to hell and back for sneaking out again. I'm going to bed now.



Entry 135
Nico's been acting shifty lately. He's been dodgy about what he's up to when I've asked, and it's come to the conclusion that he's hiding something from me. I'm.. kinda sick and tired of everyone hiding things from me or forcing me to do stuff I don't want. I just want to be kinda... free from this hellish nightmare of being of royal blood. I'm going to escape someday. Some day soon. Even if it results in being disowned as the prince of this land. But I can dream.



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I'M SICK OF THIS! I'm done. I don't even CARE ANYMORE. Sorry, Nico. I'm sick and tired of being treated like a CHILD and being FORCED to follow stupid royal orders just to keep my "perfect little prince" image believable to everyone in the town. By the time this stupid book is found it'll be by smoldering ashes and the remnants of my stupid royal garments. I don't care about being royal anymore. I don't c-
The remnants of the page are torn, the rest can't be read.
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Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:39 pm

Bubsie's relationships


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Bram is one that Bubsie is... a little unsettled. The fluffy plumerian certainly seems to be one to throw others off, but he has something against Bubsie- he just can't figure out what. He hopes it isn't something.. violent.



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Bubsie always enjoys teasing Denver about his shorter-than-normal legs. He shouldn't be surprised when he gets a rock to the face. ...Ouch. Better learn to not be such a mean prick then, Bubsie.





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Bubsie has.. A little bit of an issue with the vaiki known as Grisbane. Despite having a dislike for being called royalty, he shows obvious discomfort when Grisbane calls himself the "Purple Prince" - despite him not being of any actual royal descent. Either that or he's just a whiny baby.




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Bubsie is... Honestly, a bit intrigued by Melrakki. The fact that she works in a circus is astounding, and he's kinda surprised on how she hasn't died yet from the various accidents that've happened during the time of her troupe.


Nico's relationships


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Arcus is a sort of distant friend to Nico. He's an odd plumerian who has a love for plants that Nico has never understood but strongly appreciates. Sometimes, he visits Nico, though it's hard to get past the guards. He usually gives Nico some sort of plant from his garden and tells Nico to care for it well. It's like handing over a child to the vaiki, according to Arcus, and Nico always feels honored by the act. He has made an effort to take care of the plants, despite his inability to water them in plain sunlight.



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Although Nico doesn't really know Denali well, the two have often met. The so-called 'Bananalord' is a rather strange person to be with, but Nico doesn't mind. They only meet because both of them are princes, really, and Denali has occasionally vented about not being the one to take the throne, but then reveals that he doesn't really mind. What a strange vaiki.





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Nico, in all honesty, sees Dante as what he is to vaikis as Arcus is to plumerians. Both are fond of plants and growing things, and Nico wonders why the two haven't met - they would be great friends! Anyways, Denali has mentioned Dante to Nico once or twice, until Nico himself got to meet the little rabbit vaiki. As far as he's concerned, Nico thinks Dante is a sweetie.




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Being with Kalari is emotionally draining for Nico. While she's a great pal and all, she's very exhausting to entertain, although as a teenager she's a lot nicer. They knew each other as kids, but Nico finds teenage Kalari a nicer company than the energetic child she was. Now she's mellowed out and actually makes for a good friend for Nico to confide in during hard times.
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stay with me so i can make

Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:39 pm

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    Heyo, I'm Takura and I'm trying for the melanistic Vaiki. I'm currently the owner of 8 precious Vaikis. I'm not used to impress mes, if I'm being honest - I'm not really used to building up forms and making them pretty. Entering these contests are really fun for me, even if I lose, because it helps me get better with writing. I'll probably add more later ;v;



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    hello, i'm aviate ! i'm trying for the albino vaiki. i'm the owner of six vaikis at the moment - dante, genos, denali, kodi, axel and rex. i traditionally sketch my characters a lot, and tend to make lots of headcanons with them, especially regarding my vaikis. i'm quite used to impress mes as opposed to my partner takuregg, but i'll still try to give my all for this competition ;v;


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Postby mal du pays » Sun Jan 10, 2016 4:40 pm

Thank you for taking the time to read this form, and I hope you enjoyed it! We've been working hard the whole month and we hope you found it just as fun as we did while working on it. nvn

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