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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:29 pm

So, he's like... Good?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:31 pm

Yes... Evil is how I wanted him to be interpretid in the Satisfaction story. But now you know it was'nt his fault.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:31 pm

that was cool, so it finally answers how the argoth came to be, im glad jared got killed, i mean, who does that sort of stuff, that was so awesome, and im glad he wants to apollogise, it means hes not evil, its just the way hes been remade, not like he wanted to murder, but because he needed to murder and be satsfied, that was awesome, thanks a bunch for posting that star, you rock
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:34 pm

Awww thanks. I thought you guys would need some more info on The Arg- I mean Lewis. So, there you are. Although I was planing this short story from the begining.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:40 pm

Teacher's Pet, Teacher's Pet

I don't know why, but teachers always hated me. Maybe it was the way I never raised my hand in class or how much I enjoyed using my clique to bully the other kids. Vald, Makala, Nicole and Salamander were all awesome friends. Vald was the enforcer, he carried out my orders. Makala was a second-in-command sort of person. She listened directly to me but could make up whatever she wanted to with my permission of course. Nicole and Salamander were almost like foot soliders, making sure everyone stood in line.
We were in charge and if everyone didn't know already, we were in charge. Me and Makala were always popular. It doesn't take long to seem nice to the popular kids in your current grade them when it seems you're above them in popularity, shove them to the bottom crying. It only took three months of this in third grade and a little reminder in fourth to secure our permanate spot as alpha populars.
Seventh grade came easily, also. We quickly established everyone's places and made sure every new kid who didn't know us did know us, and we made sure they also knew they're places as weaklings at the bottom of the school rankings. Maybe that's why we hated Hannah so much. She followed rules, listened to each and ever teacher and even went as far as tattling on kids that misbehaved. She needed to know her place.
Me and Nicole decided to take up the job. We had watched Hannah for a few days and noticed she walked home past the railroad next to the forest.

Hannah was running home today. She knew we were following. She didn't notice the log, she was so distracted. Her legs fell out from below her and me and Nicole morphed from out of the shadows. "Hello, Hannah." I said, making sure my smooth, silky voice caught her by surprise. "Sorry we came so . . . unexpectedly." I walked forward only a few inches, purple eyes staring into her dull gold.
Nicole's own blue eyes were staring at Hannah's backpack that was bulging with snacks. Nicole lunged and tored at the backpack with her nails. The straps broke free and Hannah yelped. Nicole and I stared at each other then burst out laughing. It turned serious in an instant when I got down to Hannah's level, crouching on my knees with my heels digging into the fresh mud.
"You know we're the Alphas around here, right, hun? Everyone knows that. We've scented the entire state of California and you still came?" Nicole smirked and flexed her newly painted nails. They had a faint scent but it waas invading deep into all three of our noses.
"We will take over. You've been in power too long!" Hannah whispered her hands scraping against the ground. That set both of us off. There was a second of intens epain and then an itch spread over my body and I watched as my hands around Hannah's neck turned into scratching claws and blood streamed. Nicole, when I turned my head, was smiling a wolfish grin as her black paws scraping the ground.

Hannah's wolf form was weakly changing, her thin form changing inbetween human and slim wolf in a matter of milliseconds. I can barely see it. It takes a few seconds but the blue color comes to her face. Her chest goes up once more, and then it's gone. I'm in a thin half wolf, half human state now and I stand on all fours. Nicole grins and I nod with her. Hannah's backpack is full of beef jerky and some raw deer feet. Score!

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:45 pm

Hun? Sorry, that confused me!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:10 pm

The main character and her clique are werewolves. hannah's a werewolf trying to steal their territory. I could see how it's confusing though. I was sort of confuse dmyself. :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby IzumiKitteh » Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:19 am

TRUE! nervous, very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why WILL you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses, not destroyed, not dulled them. Above all was the sense of hearing acute. I heard all things in the heaven and in the earth. I heard many things in hell. How then am I mad? Hearken! and observe how healthily, how calmly, I can tell you the whole story.

It is impossible to say how first the idea entered my brain, but, once conceived, it haunted me day and night. Object there was none. Passion there was none. I loved the old man. He had never wronged me. He had never given me insult. For his gold I had no desire. I think it was his eye! Yes, it was this! One of his eyes resembled that of a vulture -- a pale blue eye with a film over it. Whenever it fell upon me my blood ran cold, and so by degrees, very gradually, I made up my mind to take the life of the old man, and thus rid myself of the eye for ever.

Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmen know nothing. But you should have seen me. You should have seen how wisely I proceeded -- with what caution -- with what foresight, with what dissimulation, I went to work! I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him. And every night about midnight I turned the latch of his door and opened it oh, so gently! And then, when I had made an opening sufficient for my head, I put in a dark lantern all closed, closed so that no light shone out, and then I thrust in my head. Oh, you would have laughed to see how cunningly I thrust it in! I moved it slowly, very, very slowly, so that I might not disturb the old man's sleep. It took me an hour to place my whole head within the opening so far that I could see him as he lay upon his bed. Ha! would a madman have been so wise as this? And then when my head was well in the room I undid the lantern cautiously -- oh, so cautiously -- cautiously (for the hinges creaked), I undid it just so much that a single thin ray fell upon the vulture eye. And this I did for seven long nights, every night just at midnight, but I found the eye always closed, and so it was impossible to do the work, for it was not the old man who vexed me but his Evil Eye. And every morning, when the day broke, I went boldly into the chamber and spoke courageously to him, calling him by name in a hearty tone, and inquiring how he had passed the night. So you see he would have been a very profound old man, indeed , to suspect that every night, just at twelve, I looked in upon him while he slept.

Upon the eighth night I was more than usually cautious in opening the door. A watch's minute hand moves more quickly than did mine. Never before that night had I felt the extent of my own powers, of my sagacity. I could scarcely contain my feelings of triumph. To think that there I was opening the door little by little, and he not even to dream of my secret deeds or thoughts. I fairly chuckled at the idea, and perhaps he heard me, for he moved on the bed suddenly as if startled. Now you may think that I drew back -- but no. His room was as black as pitch with the thick darkness (for the shutters were close fastened through fear of robbers), and so I knew that he could not see the opening of the door, and I kept pushing it on steadily, steadily.

I had my head in, and was about to open the lantern, when my thumb slipped upon the tin fastening , and the old man sprang up in the bed, crying out, "Who's there?"

I kept quite still and said nothing. For a whole hour I did not move a muscle, and in the meantime I did not hear him lie down. He was still sitting up in the bed, listening; just as I have done night after night hearkening to the death watches in the wall.

Presently, I heard a slight groan, and I knew it was the groan of mortal terror. It was not a groan of pain or of grief -- oh, no! It was the low stifled sound that arises from the bottom of the soul when overcharged with awe. I knew the sound well. Many a night, just at midnight, when all the world slept, it has welled up from my own bosom, deepening, with its dreadful echo, the terrors that distracted me. I say I knew it well. I knew what the old man felt, and pitied him although I chuckled at heart. I knew that he had been lying awake ever since the first slight noise when he had turned in the bed. His fears had been ever since growing upon him. He had been trying to fancy them causeless, but could not. He had been saying to himself, "It is nothing but the wind in the chimney, it is only a mouse crossing the floor," or, "It is merely a cricket which has made a single chirp." Yes he has been trying to comfort himself with these suppositions ; but he had found all in vain. ALL IN VAIN, because Death in approaching him had stalked with his black shadow before him and enveloped the victim. And it was the mournful influence of the unperceived shadow that caused him to feel, although he neither saw nor heard, to feel the presence of my head within the room.

When I had waited a long time very patiently without hearing him lie down, I resolved to open a little -- a very, very little crevice in the lantern. So I opened it -- you cannot imagine how stealthily, stealthily -- until at length a single dim ray like the thread of the spider shot out from the crevice and fell upon the vulture eye.

It was open, wide, wide open, and I grew furious as I gazed upon it. I saw it with perfect distinctness -- all a dull blue with a hideous veil over it that chilled the very marrow in my bones, but I could see nothing else of the old man's face or person, for I had directed the ray as if by instinct precisely upon the damned spot.

And now have I not told you that what you mistake for madness is but over-acuteness of the senses? now, I say, there came to my ears a low, dull, quick sound, such as a watch makes when enveloped in cotton. I knew that sound well too. It was the beating of the old man's heart. It increased my fury as the beating of a drum stimulates the soldier into courage.

But even yet I refrained and kept still. I scarcely breathed. I held the lantern motionless. I tried how steadily I could maintain the ray upon the eye. Meantime the hellish tattoo of the heart increased. It grew quicker and quicker, and louder and louder, every instant. The old man's terror must have been extreme! It grew louder, I say, louder every moment! -- do you mark me well? I have told you that I am nervous: so I am. And now at the dead hour of the night, amid the dreadful silence of that old house, so strange a noise as this excited me to uncontrollable terror. Yet, for some minutes longer I refrained and stood still. But the beating grew louder, louder! I thought the heart must burst. And now a new anxiety seized me -- the sound would be heard by a neighbour! The old man's hour had come! With a loud yell, I threw open the lantern and leaped into the room. He shrieked once -- once only. In an instant I dragged him to the floor, and pulled the heavy bed over him. I then smiled gaily, to find the deed so far done. But for many minutes the heart beat on with a muffled sound. This, however, did not vex me; it would not be heard through the wall. At length it ceased. The old man was dead. I removed the bed and examined the corpse. Yes, he was stone, stone dead. I placed my hand upon the heart and held it there many minutes. There was no pulsation. He was stone dead. His eye would trouble me no more.

If still you think me mad, you will think so no longer when I describe the wise precautions I took for the concealment of the body. The night waned, and I worked hastily, but in silence.

I took up three planks from the flooring of the chamber, and deposited all between the scantlings. I then replaced the boards so cleverly so cunningly, that no human eye -- not even his -- could have detected anything wrong. There was nothing to wash out -- no stain of any kind -- no blood-spot whatever. I had been too wary for that.

When I had made an end of these labours, it was four o'clock -- still dark as midnight. As the bell sounded the hour, there came a knocking at the street door. I went down to open it with a light heart, -- for what had I now to fear? There entered three men, who introduced themselves, with perfect suavity, as officers of the police. A shriek had been heard by a neighbour during the night; suspicion of foul play had been aroused; information had been lodged at the police office, and they (the officers) had been deputed to search the premises.

I smiled, -- for what had I to fear? I bade the gentlemen welcome. The shriek, I said, was my own in a dream. The old man, I mentioned, was absent in the country. I took my visitors all over the house. I bade them search -- search well. I led them, at length, to his chamber. I showed them his treasures, secure, undisturbed. In the enthusiasm of my confidence, I brought chairs into the room, and desired them here to rest from their fatigues, while I myself, in the wild audacity of my perfect triumph, placed my own seat upon the very spot beneath which reposed the corpse of the victim.

The officers were satisfied. My MANNER had convinced them. I was singularly at ease. They sat and while I answered cheerily, they chatted of familiar things. But, ere long, I felt myself getting pale and wished them gone. My head ached, and I fancied a ringing in my ears; but still they sat, and still chatted. The ringing became more distinct : I talked more freely to get rid of the feeling: but it continued and gained definitiveness -- until, at length, I found that the noise was NOT within my ears.

No doubt I now grew VERY pale; but I talked more fluently, and with a heightened voice. Yet the sound increased -- and what could I do? It was A LOW, DULL, QUICK SOUND -- MUCH SUCH A SOUND AS A WATCH MAKES WHEN ENVELOPED IN COTTON. I gasped for breath, and yet the officers heard it not. I talked more quickly, more vehemently but the noise steadily increased. I arose and argued about trifles, in a high key and with violent gesticulations; but the noise steadily increased. Why WOULD they not be gone? I paced the floor to and fro with heavy strides, as if excited to fury by the observations of the men, but the noise steadily increased. O God! what COULD I do? I foamed -- I raved -- I swore! I swung the chair upon which I had been sitting, and grated it upon the boards, but the noise arose over all and continually increased. It grew louder -- louder -- louder! And still the men chatted pleasantly , and smiled. Was it possible they heard not? Almighty God! -- no, no? They heard! -- they suspected! -- they KNEW! -- they were making a mockery of my horror! -- this I thought, and this I think. But anything was better than this agony! Anything was more tolerable than this derision! I could bear those hypocritical smiles no longer! I felt that I must scream or die! -- and now -- again -- hark! louder! louder! louder! LOUDER! --

"Villains!" I shrieked, "dissemble no more! I admit the deed! -- tear up the planks! -- here, here! -- it is the beating of his hideous heart!"



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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Gigi23 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:27 am

I read that story in my class
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby tbow. » Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:50 am

i know a creepy one that I'll post later but im bookmarking this XD i love scary stories :)
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