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Re: Horse Head

Postby Scarlip » Fri Jan 07, 2011 8:37 am

puppieluv12 wrote:W-O-W-...That is extremely good! I think it should be moved to Intermediate. But! I have some crit that might help ;) Make the ear that's farther away a little smaller than the one in front. Again, very nice job on this!

Thanks a lot for the crit, it really helped. ;)
I edited it, and made the ear smaller and I also made the eyecolor a bit darker. ^^



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Re: Horse Head

Postby Hawkguy » Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:08 am

I like it! The muzzle seems a little short for my tastes, but overall very good. The eye also stands out a bit from the picture? Maybe you should add a little dark grey and then smudge it so it looks like the skin around a horse's eye (like so: http://uh.edu/engines/horseeyereflection.jpg)
The ears also seem a little big, like a donkey's. In this picture here (it's a bridle ref, but the ears are nice) the horse's ears are a lot smaller. http://www.communigate.co.uk/ne/equestr ... /phpqsohHK For a different angle, http://equisearch.com/lifestyle/thelife ... to_800.jpg
I think the nostrils as well are a bit too small.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3536/389 ... 0d62cf.jpg
I also noticed around the muzzle the fur color. Usually a bay horse's muzzle will be covered with dark grey/black fur.
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumblarge ... AYL673.jpg
Overall I think it should be moved to intermediate ^^
Hope this helps!
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Re: Horse Head

Postby HWL » Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:50 am

Perfect O.O
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Re: Horse Head

Postby Scarlip » Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:49 am

Thanks for the crit, I'm gonna edit it when I have time. ^^



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Re: Horse Head

Postby Safier » Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:52 am

Wow that's amazing and pretty darn adorable. I agree with Puppie about the ears (funny :D) and this could be intermediate if you made a creative little background to go with it.
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Re: Horse Head

Postby Scarlip » Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:54 am

Thanks ^^
I wish I could do a background, but I have no clue how to use layers ( :oops: ), and it's pretty hard without them...



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Re: Horse Head

Postby Scarlip » Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:41 am

Edited: Made the ears smaller, the muzzle darker and added grey around the eyes. ^^



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Re: Horse Head

Postby Safier » Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:43 am

Nice :D now just a background if you want it or don't. (not being pushy lol)
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Re: Horse Head

Postby Scarlip » Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:44 am

I'll try, it will be hard without layers, though... :lol:



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Re: Horse Head

Postby Safier » Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:45 am

Hmm did you draw that on the background layer?
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