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Hope by xFindingHopex

Artist xFindingHopex [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 52 minutes
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Hope

Postby xFindingHopex » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:00 pm

Ok.. this is my first attempt at dog/human creature... I didnt get the shading exactly right, but I dont want to go fix that at the moment... please leave comments and criticism!! Dont only leave criticism if you see a BIIG mistake, leave it for the tiny ones too!! Please comment ^^ I dont want to repost on this 15 times for criticism... :D
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Re: Hope

Postby xFindingHopex » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:08 pm

Meh. PLEASE CRITICIZE!!!
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Re: Hope

Postby ilovebacon » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:18 pm

I like it!!!! Mabye make it a little brighter..... Other than that it's wonderful!!! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:
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Re: Hope

Postby xFindingHopex » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:20 pm

Please comment, I want to judge myself by not only what I think but by what other people think also.
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Re: Hope

Postby yankees324 » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:21 pm

Well, in my opinion, the lines are a littttttttttle to thick, but the airbrush technique in the background is pretty good! :D I like it!
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Oh, this is how it starts,
Lightning strikes the heart,
It goes off like a gun,
Brighter than the sun.
Oh, we could be the stars,
Falling from the sky,
Shining how we want,
Brighter than the sun.


Brighter Than The Sun -Colbie Caillat

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I'm taking a leave off RPs, probably for the next month or so. I'll still be on CS adopting pets and whatnot, but my creativity is drained for some reason and I don't want to give you bad posts, especially since they're all going so well. Sorry for this slight inconvenience, but its for all our benefits.
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Re: Hope

Postby xFindingHopex » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:22 pm

OK! Thank you!!
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