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My gallery · by **jayco** » Thu Dec 24, 2015 10:03 pm

Bump!
What do you think? What should the rogues names be?

My gallery · by **jayco** » Tue Dec 29, 2015 4:27 pm

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My gallery · by **jayco** » Fri Jan 08, 2016 2:04 pm

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My gallery · by **jayco** » Sat Mar 05, 2016 11:05 am

Edited it, removed mistakes.

My gallery · by **jayco** » Sat Apr 23, 2016 10:29 am

Edited a bit
Added 'although the breath was rattled, gasped out as if it was painful to just inhale. Oh, but it was, it was intolerable, like you would never dream, every breath feeling as though it was slicing open it’s side and drawing blood, closing as the being exhaled but a re-opened wound at every breath.'

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