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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:28 am

back on topic one more chance then you get your first warning guys
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:32 am

Invisible Hands
A Nevada Ghost Story

retold by

S. E. Schlosser

A couple of Welsh miners came to Nevada to help mine the Comstock Load. They were quite a pair of tricksters, yes sir! It got so bad that no one would believe anything they said, 'cause if'n they did, the Welshman would make them look like a fool. But they were popular. The miners dearly loved a laugh after a hard day working in the mine.

Now one evening the two Welshman started down the stope of the Baltimore shaft. They were working a late shift, and as they descended they began hearing the sound of hammers striking a drill, punctuated with the sound of voices. Neither man recognized the voices, so they assumed it was some new chaps working the late shift. The men grinned at each other. They liked pulling jokes on newcomers.

The Welshmen followed the sound of the hammers and came into a shaft flickering with the light of a single lantern. The Welshmen were amazed to see two hammers floating in mid-air, striking the head of a rusty old drill that was rotating itself. They could hear a murmur of voices, but could see no one.

Giving a startled yell, the Welshmen beat a hasty retreat. Climbing to the top of the mine, they gasped out the story to a few of their friends. No one would believe them. It was just the sort of practical joke them men had learned to avoid.

Finally, the Welshmen grabbed two of their fellows and dragged them, protesting, down the stope. When the four men entered the shaft, the invisible hands were still hard at work, hammering at the drill as they talked to each other.

"It's the bucca," shouted old Ned, who hailed from Cornwall, England. The bucca (Tommy Knockers) were small imps or spirits who haunted mines. "I'm getting out of here!"

The miners ran out of the shaft and hurried up into the starlight.

The Welshmen were not so quick to play jokes on their friends after this incident. And they stopped investigating mysterious noises

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:34 am

ok now thats creepy alittle but good :thumbup: :thumbup: i give it 2 thumbs up
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:12 am

((sorry I took so long))
Satisfaction ((continued))

We all stared at the dirty, old, crumpled up, cream envelope. Cleo and Mike both looked at me and I picked it up. We couldnt exactly stay in my house, so we went over to Cleos. Her mom didnt mind that we were there, she acculally liked us. We didnt know why exactly, but she was nice. We walked up to her room, and opened the envelope. I read it out loud.

To the 3 children,
Im getting hungry.
I need to be satisfied
The Argoth


Our eyes widened, at the note written by the beast himself! After I put the letter away Mike and Cleo vowed that they would not sleep. I agreed with them, but we were going to stop by the small store to get us some energy drinks in the morning so we dont fall asleep when we are doing our plan tomorrow at school. So, we stayed up all night with the blinds closed, lights on, and out phones ready to dial 911. But that wasnt needed, morning came fast. We got dressed (in different rooms), and we were off. We stopped by as I promised and got our drinks. Then we made it to school

When we were about to go inside I thought that something was wrong. Then I looked at my phone and we missed the bell! I showed Cleo and Mike and we rushed inside to get our scolding. But then I found out that it wasnt the late bell that made me feel weird, it was a lot worse than that...

It was like we walked into a horror film, all of the teachers were dead, lying in their own blood. Mixed with blood from others. Cleo made a run for the bathroom. She has a sensitive stomach. But, I dont blame her, it was too graphic for me. But I could take it. Then something caught my eye, there were all of the students huddled up against the corner. Mike and I made our way over the puddles of blood over to the students. And there was Steven Simpson sitting right in the front of the group. Mike went up to him, "What happened here!?" He asked them.
"T-t-there was t-this thing, a-a-a-and he k-killed all o-o-of the teachers." Steven said shaking like a chuahua. All of the kids were. I thought of the Argoth, and then all of a sudden we heard a slam. And then we saw The Argoth slowly walking down the stairs. The whole school made a run for it out the door and running downhill. I grabbled Cleo and we were off. Cleo, Mike and I were infront of the huge pack of kids with the Argoth chasing us. He walked on two legs, but ran on four...weird. Then I thought of all of the recent events, and how he got here, my eyes widened,

It was our fault that he was here. It was our fault that his hunger needs to be satisfied.It was our fault for everything.


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Cadin Araceli » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:18 am

IDK if this one has been posted, but It really freaks me out!

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It was nine o'clock in the evening. Everybody was sitting on the couch in front of the TV. There were Richard, Brian, Jenny and Doreen, the babysitter.
The telephone rang.
"Maybe it's your mother," said Doreen. She picked up the phone. Before she could say a word, a man laughed hysterically and hung up.
"Who was it?" asked Richard.
"Some nut," said Doreen. "What did I miss?"

At nine-thirty the telephone rang again. Doreen answered it. It was the man who had called before. "I'll be there soon," he said, and he laughed and hung up.
"Who was it?" the children asked.
"Some crazy person," she said.
About ten o'clock the phone rang again. Jenny got it first.
"Hello," she said.
It was the same man. "One more hour," he said, and he laughed and hung up.
"He said, 'One more hour.' What did he mean?" asked Jenny.
"Don't worry," said Doreen. "It's somebody fooling around."
"I'm scared," said Jenny.
About ten-thirty the telephone rang once more. When Doreen picked it up, the man said, "Pretty soon now," and he laughed.
"Why are you doing this?" Doreen screamed, and he hung up.
"Was it that guy again?" asked Brian.
"Yes," said Doreen. "I'm going to call the operator and complain."
The operator told her to call back if it happened again, and she would try to trace the call.

At eleven o'clock the telephone rang again. Doreen answered it. "Very soon now," the man said, and he laughed and hung up.
Doreen called the operator. Almost at once she called back. "That person is calling from a telephone upstairs," she said. "You'd better leave. I'll get the police."
Just then a door upstairs opened. A man they had never seen before started down the stairs towards them. As they ran from the house, he was smiling in a very strange way. A few minutes later, the police found him there and arrested him.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:19 am

ive read all those books they have strange pictures
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Cadin Araceli » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:22 am

i know! Some of the stories are scary, but all the pictures are just freaky!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby IzumiKitteh » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:36 am

o.o wicked.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:37 am

Starfighter123 wrote:((sorry I took so long))
Satisfaction ((continued))

We all stared at the dirty, old, crumpled up, cream envelope. Cleo and Mike both looked at me and I picked it up. We couldnt exactly stay in my house, so we went over to Cleos. Her mom didnt mind that we were there, she acculally liked us. We didnt know why exactly, but she was nice. We walked up to her room, and opened the envelope. I read it out loud.

To the 3 children,
Im getting hungry.
I need to be satisfied
The Argoth


Our eyes widened, at the note written by the beast himself! After I put the letter away Mike and Cleo vowed that they would not sleep. I agreed with them, but we were going to stop by the small store to get us some energy drinks in the morning so we dont fall asleep when we are doing our plan tomorrow at school. So, we stayed up all night with the blinds closed, lights on, and out phones ready to dial 911. But that wasnt needed, morning came fast. We got dressed (in different rooms), and we were off. We stopped by as I promised and got our drinks. Then we made it to school

When we were about to go inside I thought that something was wrong. Then I looked at my phone and we missed the bell! I showed Cleo and Mike and we rushed inside to get our scolding. But then I found out that it wasnt the late bell that made me feel weird, it was a lot worse than that...

It was like we walked into a horror film, all of the teachers were dead, lying in their own blood. Mixed with blood from others. Cleo made a run for the bathroom. She has a sensitive stomach. But, I dont blame her, it was too graphic for me. But I could take it. Then something caught my eye, there were all of the students huddled up against the corner. Mike and I made our way over the puddles of blood over to the students. And there was Steven Simpson sitting right in the front of the group. Mike went up to him, "What happened here!?" He asked them.
"T-t-there was t-this thing, a-a-a-and he k-killed all o-o-of the teachers." Steven said shaking like a chuahua. All of the kids were. I thought of the Argoth, and then all of a sudden we heard a slam. And then we saw The Argoth slowly walking down the stairs. The whole school made a run for it out the door and running downhill. I grabbled Cleo and we were off. Cleo, Mike and I were infront of the huge pack of kids with the Argoth chasing us. He walked on two legs, but ran on four...weird. Then I thought of all of the recent events, and how he got here, my eyes widened,

It was our fault that he was here. It was our fault that his hunger needs to be satisfied.It was our fault for everything.


((WIP))


*Gasp* Hoorah! It's still as fantastic as always. I love it!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:40 am

I am getting SERIOUSLY excited for the next satisfaction piece, it's so exciting, YAY
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