Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || Art in Desc.

Postby neiroh » Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:04 am

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Username; Austria*~
Doll Name; Aviv [uh-veev]
Gender; Agender
Shadow Name; Octavia

Personality; Childlike|Friendly|Sorrowful|Innocent

Childlike; Being childlike is both a negative and positive quality. Acting bubbly and cute (though not seeming like it), but not understanding completely the consequences of the ships sinking.

Friendly; They love friends and try to appear kind and gentle, while the ink streams down their face. As creepy as many people see them as, they aren't all that bad.

Sorrowful; When each ship sinks, they cry and cry, until they can't anymore. They forget though because they have gone through this too many times to count.

Innocent; They don't understand the severity of what happens and that it's wrong. The ships sink because of their innocence and want of friendship.







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Story; The year is 1805, March 7th, early spring. Aviv lived in Northern England with their very loving owner. Their owner was a little boy about 8 and he lived with his mother, father, and grandmother in their largish cottage. Their owner's father worked under the crown and apparently from what Aviv had heard, their owner and his family would be going to India on business. For a good two weeks Aviv would hear her owner, Maxwell, talk about how excited he was to go to India. Aviv was excited to even travel with Max. Aviv was a gift to Max on his fourth birth day and from that day, they have been inseparable. Max was home schooled and was a rather shy boy. He barely even spoke to his father without getting nervous. However when it came to Aviv, he told them everything.
Finally, after a few weeks of discussion, the boat had arrived to the shore and Aviv, Max, along with his mother and father, boarded, rattling with excitement about the talked about India. For weeks, Max talked about how he and his father would go on trips to look for jewels and treasures. Aviv had just hoped Max would take them along.
The journey to India was about a two weeks journey, since there were several stops along the way. Max spared no time apart from Aviv, taking them everywhere like to the ship deck and the kitchen, even to see some guests.
Tragedy struck about a week into the journey. A large rock had been sticking out of the water, however it couldn't be seen. The boat had been struck on the side and water had got into the engine room. The hole could not be fixed and the ship had begun to fill with water. Max, being an 8 year old, was fast asleep while his parents were at a dinner party. Aviv had heard the sound of the rock and felt the boat fill with the salty water. Max has jolted out of his bed, only to see his things shifting to one side of the room. He grabbed Aviv and ran out of the titling room to search for his mother and father. People were already abandoning ship and he watched in horror as he clung to Aviv. Tears streamed down his face as he found his mother. His father had went off to get others awake and out of their beds. Then the ship started to tip even more, it was going for sure. He grabbed his mother as the boat hit a thud.
Max fell off the boat still grabbing Aviv. Aviv could do nothing, they were just a doll. Max, again, was only 8 and he could not swim. He held on to Aviv's hand trying to reach the surface of the water. Aviv just drifted down with him until finally their hand was released from the pressure. As Max floated up, Aviv floated down, both lifeless as ever. Aviv tried crying out to their owner as they drifted apart faster and faster. As Aviv sunk deeper and deeper into the darkening pit of the sea, something awakened inside of them.

Aviv's shadow was close to a squid in how it looked. It had tentacles and made Aviv cry ink. In fact their shadow even had a name, Octavia. Now both Aviv and Octavia were lonely creatures who only had each other to love. So when the occasional boat came around, Aviv would go to meet friends on it. Octavia wanted friends too, however Octavia was stronger than both had thought. So they would reach up on the boats to find friends and the weight of there tentacles would make the boats break in half and collapse just like Max's boat. Aviv's destiny was sinking boats and having no friends. They did not sink the boats for revenge because it was not someone who killed Max, it was simply a rock and bad timing. Aviv just wanted to find friends and them being childish, they don't understand how every time their shadow uses its tentacles to reach on boats, it breaks them and causes more pain. Every time Aviv and Octavia sink a boat, more ink is shed from Aviv's eyes, even thicker then the previous time.

Aviv lays in the never ending sea, waiting for the day when they, with a mind of an 8 year old, can finally be a peace and find a new friend to share their life with. Until then, they float aimlessly, remembering the last time they saw Max, leaving a trail of ink everywhere they go.



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"It was an accident Max.
I'm so sorry..please...forgive us"








Thank you forgiving me this oppertunity to try
to adopt this amazing doll. I drew the first two pictures
shown and the last picture I do not own.
Good luck everyone!
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || Art in Desc.

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Nov 08, 2015 9:23 am

Could this competition have an extension?
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || EXTENDED

Postby Slimedog » Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:54 am

    People on this thread and the 'partner' thread have requested a extension for the contest. Mintcat and I have decided to grant a very small one. You now all have until November 9th, at 7PM est to finish your forms. This extension is not meant to be for people who want to throw together an entire form after procrastinating it's for those who need to add in finishing touches.

    Good luck!
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || EXTENDED

Postby frostykitty » Tue Nov 10, 2015 1:10 pm

So this is done now, yes?
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || EXTENDED

Postby Slimedog » Tue Nov 10, 2015 1:12 pm

frostykitty wrote:So this is done now, yes?


yes thats what the front page says. i will be judging this soon but please be patient as i am busy irl and need some time to read everything over.
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || EXTENDED

Postby frostykitty » Wed Nov 11, 2015 9:06 am

Wanted to make sure. Good luck everyone
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || EXTENDED

Postby voittoisa » Tue Nov 17, 2015 3:02 pm

//this is hella late but-\\

Good luck everyone! I saw some really great forms!! <3
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || Open || EXTENDED

Postby frostykitty » Sun Nov 22, 2015 3:32 pm

ahg! i lost this, bump. Take your time with judging, it seems my gif has been removed, oh well it didn't take that long to make anyway.
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Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || WINNER

Postby Slimedog » Wed Dec 02, 2015 1:27 pm

    i'm sorry this took me so long to judge, you guys, but i have the winner now!! all your forms were really great, and i was pleased to see so many really great writers the Dollhouse community has ;w; i can sadly only pick one winner, though since this was an event competition, so without further ado, i'd like to announce the winner.

    danish pastries is the new owner of this doll!! congratulations to them and good luck to everyone else who tries for a doll in the future!
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Re: Adopt 94 || Halloween Event || WINNER

Postby neiroh » Wed Dec 02, 2015 1:35 pm

congrats!
If you'd like my art, you can have it ^^




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