Steven Universe Fanclub {Open!}

[Disgustedorite]

I have a short story about two of my gem OCs that needs some beta readers to help me get to where I can make a perfect final draft...who wants to help out?

I will provide basic background info on the characters to the beta readers after they finish reading, because although it isn't needed to understand the story I want to make sure the hints and foreshadowing are done well and that it doesn't feel like it was written in the middle of an ongoing story.

[Dracologist]

Source

[Disgustedorite]

I designed a corrupted gem! She's a peridot, but not our Peridot.

[epsil]

Username: Annikory
Favorite character: aHHHHH that's hard. Connie, Pearl, or Garnet
Favorite episode: Jailbreak, Too Far
Other: Thank you! I just recently finished the series as of now. c:

[ophanimera]

Username: Annikory
Favorite character: aHHHHH that's hard. Connie, Pearl, or Garnet
Favorite episode: Jailbreak, Too Far
Other: Thank you! I just recently finished the series as of now. c:

Username: Corruptedentities
Favorite character: Amethyst
Favorite episode: Keeping It Together
Other:Amedotamedotamedot PLZ

Accepted you both!
Welcome to the club.

[Totty]

Question: What do you want Peridot to discover next?
Y' know, she's new to Earth n' all?

I definitely want her to discover food!! o3o

[Disgustedorite]

I want Peridot to discover the existence of Stevonnie. And be totally grossed out.

[Seali1]

I was bored and...
viewtopic.php?f=89&t=2859509

[frostykitty]

hey, im drawing a gemsona gift for someone.... come watch ;-;
https://join.me/583-817-960


Cut short, sorry! there will be another tommorow

[soozee]

I'm not sure whether this is a leak, an edit, or a short I missed. Could you guys help me out?