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XVIII

Postby Piefan » Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:24 pm

Sooo...

I'm still not sure what units of time to use here, since there doesn't seem to be any day-night cycle here, but I would say 24 hours or so passed since I last wrote. I don't know. We don't seem to have the normal bodily needs - Zavier actually ran about a hundred laps around a platform without getting tired - meaning we can't just estimate passed time from whether we're hungry or sleepy or whatever.

We'd travelled for some time, with no real end in mind. Just hoping we'd find Kris, somehow, someway.

Khairul had suggested that we actually have a plan, but Arianna didn't agree.

"We need to be flexible. A plan would ruin that - for such a difficult task, if we decide what to do beforehand, we need to take into account all sorts of variables. Kris is unpredictable, possibly even to the universe's best psychologist, and if we hinged on everything going the way we think it will, we would fail." -Arianna

"Well, yeah, if we hinged on it. We could also plan for everything." -Rose

"That would be impossible. Kris would probably just create absurd circumstances of battle or twist the landscape just as a way of spiting you." -Arianna

"Yeeaah, I kinda agree with Arianna." -Zavier

"I'm with Rose." -Fatin

Rose grinned, holding out a paw to the kitten, and they high-pawed. Khairul rolled his eyes.

"I for one say that a plan would be kinda useless. Plus, really boring." -Me

"... Your argument is just that 'it's boring'?" -Khairul

"Well, yeah." -Me

"Well, sorta questionable reasoning aside, I think we have a tie. Arianna, me, and Tha versus Rose, Khairul, and Fatin." -Zavier

"A kitten barely counts." -Arianna

*shrug* "We're a democracy." -Rose

"By her wording, she just decided because she chose to side with her brother and the one person who has consistently acknowledged her existence." -Arianna

"That's how politics work." -Rose

"No, it isn't!" -Arianna

"Do you know my home country enough to say that with absolute certainty?" -Rose

"Of course not. Still, I have visited nearly a thousand in a hundred galaxies, and I doubt yours is the exception." -Arianna

"I studied this, and-" -Khairul

"Shut it, kitty." -Rose

"Guys? I still exist, you know..." -Scarlette

"Oh, yes, you. You are Scarlette, right?" -Khairul

*raised eyebrow* "You know, she's been with us for a ridiculously long time. I thought you'd know everyone here at this point." -Zavier

I noticed a hint of defensiveness in his voice, something that wasn't entirely surprising. I mean, she is his longtime friend, and Khairul basically just accidentally implied that she wasn't significant enough to be remembered.

"Pfft, not the point. Scarlette?" -Rose

*shrug* "I'm with Zavier." -Scarlette

"Ugh! Come on!" -Rose

"This is not the time to argue, Rose. We'll be resting now; though we don't technically need it, I get the feeling that continuing to walk won't exactly do wonders for your morale." -Arianna
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Postby Piefan » Mon Oct 26, 2015 1:03 am

Ashly tapped a nail against the tabletop as she watched the others chatter, resting her head on her other paw. What, exactly, they were discussing, she had no idea. Neither did she particularly care. She had stayed in the same damned room as them for half a week, and at this point, she was fairly sure she already knew what they were talking about.

Seafoam and Elven, probably arguing for some reason or another. Wild, attempting to flirt with Phoenix, who either did not notice or flat-out ignored his advances. Cardi, insisting that there was totally a talking tree in the hallways. Because that was completely plausible.

Spirits, this was pointless.

"In the name of all that is good, can we just get to the point already?" she growled aloud, slamming one paw against the table. The thump echoed throughout the room, attracting the attention of everyone in it.

Frost, from her spot curled up in the corner, was the first to speak up. "What do you mean?"

"I mean that we've literally been sitting around doing nothing for the past..." She paused momentarily, but when she spoke again, it wa1s with just as much conviction as before. "Half a week, probably!"

"Two days and twenty-one hours, as a matter of fact." Seafoam lifted a paw as he corrected her, his words holding the same matter-of-fact, but friendly, tone they always did.

"Do the specifics even matter?" she snapped, fixing him with the most powerful death glare she could muster. "The point is, we haven't been doing anything! We looked at Yveltal and saw what he was doing; that's it!"

"We also told Arianna about it," Elven pointed out. "I'm sure they can help. Somehow."

Ashly sensed the doubt in her gentle voice, but she didn't bother acknowledging it. "We-"

Something cut her off - a sudden, terrible headache, as if someone were splitting her head open. She trailed off, resisting the urge to clutch her head, and ignored the concerned expressions of the others. She had never had problems with migraines before, but given the conditions she had been living in for the last few days, this did not surprise her. Gritting her teeth, she continued. "I don't know what kind of rainbow, sugar-sparkle world you're living in, but we can't just sit around hoping for people to solve all our problems for us."

"We're not." In spite of her still-sleepy disposition, a hint of irritation tinged Frost's voice. A wisp of ice rose from her throat, and a layer of frost spread across the table, though Ashly's paw didn't budge. "But I guess you're right."

"... Yeah." Wild had been uncharacteristically silent for most of the meeting, but he spoke now. His voice was hoarse, and he coughed a few times before continuing. "I propose we all kill Yveltal. Yay plans."

"Wouldn't that kind of be murder, though?" Elven pointed out.

"You're kidding, right?"

... Meanwhile, Phoenix and Cardi were singing Peanut Butter Jelly Time under their breaths. (What d'ya mean that joke's eleven years out of date?)

Telepathy's a tricky thing in this universe - it isn't just mentally speaking to another person, it's altering their thoughts and senses. (Sometimes in a way that makes it sound like you're mentally speaking to them. Same thing, I guess.) The average dog's mind will subconsciously attempt to deflect it, unless he's purposely ensuring otherwise. This usually results in a huge headache on his part, and no communication. Thus, it's difficult for anyone who uses telepathy to talk to anyone at all.

Unfortunately, telepathy's the only way a tree can speak.

(As a side note, I didn't mention species other than dogs. Cats will instantly detect the person who's using telepathy, and attempt to mentally wrestle them into submission. Equines can do the former, but not the latter.)
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby hxneystorm » Mon Oct 26, 2015 8:21 am

-Oh hey, um... Phoenix was banned...-
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby Piefan » Mon Oct 26, 2015 7:04 pm

... Well, that's unfortunate. D: I noticed that Midnight Moon's account was deactivated, but I assumed it was just temporary/she would return soon.

And I now have no idea what to do with Phoenix. Do I just pretend she never existed? Write her out? Try to inconspicuously just keep her out of the mix?
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby hxneystorm » Mon Oct 26, 2015 7:24 pm

Say she had to move schools...?
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XX {Optimism}

Postby Piefan » Sat Oct 31, 2015 5:01 am

I woke up to Rose in my face.

Admittedly, screaming and attempting to punch her wasn't the best reaction, but I don't react to shock very well. Before my fist made contact with her face, she narrowed her eyes, lifting her own paw to deflect it. When we collided, a sharp pain ran up my arm, and I withdrew, rubbing it. She's a lot stronger than I expected.

"Seriously, this is what I get for waking you up?" -Rose

"Well, you do look kind of creepy when you're all..." -Me

"Ugh, whatever. Come on. Arianna's waiting, and you and Scarlette somehow overslept when we don't even need sleep." -Rose

Standing, I nodded. I'm still not fond of Rose, but that didn't mean she wasn't right. Considering the quest at paw, I could hardly risk the lives of everyone in the whole of a universe just 'cause she's a jerk.

Scarlette and Zavier were talking when I found them, with Arianna occasionally making a sarcastic remark. Rose took her place beside Fatin and Khairul, who were watching the three, the latter with rapt interest.

... Okay, why am I writing in this fancy-schmancy literature way?

"Come on; I get the feeling there's not going to be trouble for some time. Better take advantage of it." -Rose

"I, for once, agree with Rose." -Arianna

"OH MY GOSH ARIANNA AND ROSE AREN'T ARGUING!" -Me

*gasp* "Pigs will fly." -Zavier

***

But in case you were wondering, they did end up fighting about whether or not social interaction is essential for sanity. Rose insisted that we definitely need it; Arianna disagreed.

Apart from that, there hasn't been much happening. We walked, ran, and jumped, and all's fine around here.

Something's coming.
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XXI {Mirage}

Postby Piefan » Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:33 pm

Please ignore the idiocy of everyone here. It benefits the plot, and I tried to make their trains of thought as convincing as possible. Also, the boringness. If it's any help, though, you could skip over it and you wouldn't miss anything apart from some extra knowledge on the plot. Heck, Thalia won't know about this stuff.

Also, ignore the general bad quality of this, but you're reading this story in the first place, so I'm guessing you won't mind that.

Ow.

When Zavier woke up, his head was throbbing. Though he was no stranger to pain, this seemed... different somehow. Like something was tearing apart his skull from within, causing as much pain as possible in the process. He groaned softly in pain, then rolled over.

At last, it faded, leaving behind a feeling of inner peace. Combined with the comfort his environment granted, he was reluctant to move from his spot, curled up on his bed. Blankets muffled the flames on his back, and—

—wait, bed?

Alarmed, he scrambled off, staring at it as if he had never seen one in his life. Wasn't he... somewhere else... just last night?

(Had it been night?)

The memories came to him in a rush. His friends, his adventures, and the world he was supposed to be saving. He had been in a void, hadn't he? Kris's home? So where was he now?

Then he looked around, and he gasped. Curtains covered small windows, framed by pale blue walls. A brown, wooden table, on which a computer was already switched on, was wedged into a corner. A darker-coloured closet sat at the edge of the room, door slightly ajar, revealing its contents. Hooded jackets and wide-brimmed hats hung from its pegs - all his. This was Zavier's home in all its rustic glory.

How?

He pushed the euphoria from his mind. True, he had never been the voice of reason in his circle of friends, but it was obvious there was something going on - how else would he have suddenly appeared here?

So many questions. He shook his head, clearing it, before striding out of the room. Though he still had no idea what to do, he wasn't about to find out by sitting around and thinking. He needed to take action.

An all too familiar sight greeted him when he pushed open the door - the usual hallway stretching out before him. As he walked through it, he looked around. Photo frames lined the walls. His parents on their honeymoon; the whole of the family, arms draped around one another; him on his thirteenth birthday, with Scarlette smiling beside him.

Everything was in place, as best as he could remember. Every detail, every texture, every scent. Unless Kris had telepathic powers he had used to look through Zavier's memories and find out everything about his home, this couldn't possibly be an illusion.

... Wait. Telepathic powers. He'd never proven himself able to use them, but neither had he proven himself unable to use them, had he?

Zavier sped up, nearly sprinting into the kitchen. The porcelain ground was slippery, and he nearly slipped as he skidded to a halt. His father was standing by the dining table, leaning on both paws.

Tall, bulky, and muscular, the man, to a stranger, was intimidating at best; terrifying at worst. Having known him for all of his life, though, as a devoted, fatherly figure, Zavier had never been afraid of him. The sight of the family he hadn't seen in days brought a smile to his face, and for a few moments, all thoughts of Kris vanished from his mind. "Hey, Dad!" he greeted.

Wordlessly, the man smiled, gesturing for him to sit by his side.

It was their usual morning routine - his mother worked early, leaving his father to help prepare Zavier for school. It wasn't uncommon for the two to have a discussion over tea (neither of them actually liked it, true, but none of his other ideas had been approved) before he left.

Though he was about to comply, he suddenly remembered his situation. Still haven't solved the problem of Kris, I'm pretty sure. Plopping down opposite him, he returned the grin.

"Morning," Dad (okay, should he be calling this man that, when he might very well be an illusion? He wasn't actually sure) said. "You wanted your eggs... sunny side up, is it?"

"Yeah," he replied, raising an eyebrow. He always had the same breakfast, day after day, and any need to ask had been eliminated at this point. "Hey, what happened? Wasn't I, um, not here just yesterday?" Admittedly, with his phrasing, he sounded more like some caveman than anything else, but he'd failed his English. That was Rose's turf - sometimes Scarlette, too, but that was mostly to compete with her enemy and kind-of bully.

Dad nodded in acknowledgement, heading for the kitchen counter. "I don't know what you're talking about."

"What?" He resisted the urge to curse, knowing that it would probably just earn him a scolding. The flames on his back flared - flushing dark pink, he tightened his hoodie to subdue them.

(Hey, he hadn't noticed he was wearing it. Nice.)

"You went without sleep a couple nights, practising for some kind of sports event. I don't know; you didn't offer any details beyond that it was going to be hard."

Okay, that was definitely something Zavier would have done.

He discounted the possibility of all of this being some kind of elaborate illusion Kris made up - there had been an international track-and-field contest coming up, and he'd been planning on taking part. He doubted the villain had such plans, and even if he did have telepathic powers, there'd be no reason to dig through his memories on sports. Even so, he wasn't convinced that all was fine.

Besides, that explanation barely helped. He'd gone without sleep before, and last he checked, that didn't usually cause interdimensional teleportation. "And then?"

"I don't know. You kinda collapsed one day, and we didn't wake you up."

"... You... Um... What?"

He laughed merrily. "Yeah, yeah, when I phrase it like that, it does kinda sound a little stupid, doesn't it?"

"No offense, Dad, but I don't think you could make it sound reasonable no matter how you phrase it."

"Challenge accepted. How's this?" He straightened, speaking in a low-pitched, professional voice, as if he were a doctor and Zavier were his patient. "From third February to the tenth of the same month, you, Mr Wildfire, refused to go to sleep, citing the fact that you needed to practise. We - meaning myself and my wife - saw little of you in the house, as you were often out running laps around the school or some such activity."

"Uh, hey, you mind shortening this story a little?" Zavier had the feeling that, without intervention, he'd be sitting around listening for the next five years.

"Of course." He smiled, nuzzling the younger dog. "So, fast forward. You were constantly drowsy and lethargic. One day, you came home, and you just fainted in the doorway. You seemed healthy enough, apart from the sleep deprivation, so we just threw you on your bed. Didn't even remove your hoodie - since you wear it all the time, I figured you'd want it. So you're unconscious for three days, and all the while, I'm pretty sure you're dreaming."

"So, what you're telling me is..."

"Whatever you think happened, it was all a dream."

"Nope," he muttered under his breath. Not a dream. It could never have been - the memories were too vivid. The pain he'd felt as Kris stabbed him in their fight, the creeping horror when he realised he was trapped in that stupid void.

And yet, what other explanation could there be? How else could he have suddenly appeared here?

(Did he even want the alternative? That everyone was still in danger, while he was here, somehow tricked by Kris? Sure, Zavier'd never been the kind of guy to blame himself for everything, but, dang if that didn't make him feel... somehow guilty.)

Dad raised an eyebrow. "Is there something wrong, Z?"

He realised, again, that his flames were sputtering, and he quelled the rush of emotion that surged through him. "No... I'm gonna... Hey, wait, what date is it?"

"13th of February. Still enough to train for your tourney, if that's what you're worried about. You're exempted from school for the time being, too."

He nodded. "I'm going back to my room now, I guess."

"Alright."

***

He still had the scars.

Before appearing here, he'd asked - the fight with Kris had left each of the group, save for Arianna, with cuts, barely missing their vital areas. He was no different. Having not bothered bandaging or treating them - hey, it seemed like a good idea at the time - they hadn't healed just yet.

So, if everything had been a dream, why were they still there? Sure, they could've been cuts he'd gotten flailing around in his sleep, but what were the odds that there happened to be some pointy thing just beside his chest? He wasn't sure, but he figured it was pretty low. His father hadn't offered any more details on the matter, and he didn't bother pressing him.

Dad was probably wrong, then. Emphasis on probably; Zavier still wasn't convinced. There was still the possibility that Arianna'd solved everything and just poofed him back home without explanation. He wouldn't put such a thing past her.

Still, the nagging feeling that he should really be doing something to revoke—or confirm—his suspicions never left him. And yet, what was he supposed to do? He'd Googled information on Kris Beta and Worldhoppers, but all he'd gotten was some kind of weird equine mythology about the apocalypse.

(Okay, wow, he was beginning to appreciate that stuff a lot more. The horses and ponies had no mention of the Six Spirits in their mythos, but they had a whole lot of info on the Worldhoppers.)

Worry lingered at the edge of his mind, preventing true enjoyment of anything he did. He'd found his iPaw still in his pocket, and spent a few hours fiddling with it - checking for any friends online, playing Flappy Bird, whatever he else he hadn't really had the time for back at the void.

At last, he began to get frustrated. He'd been trying to play video games for way too much time, but he constantly lost, not even managing to get a decent score in the process. His hesrt wasn't in it; he knew that much. Stupid distractions.

Screw this. If he ended up failing brutally trying to investigate, then he'd fail brutally trying to investigate. If not, everything would be alright again. In a way.

He paced out of his room, running straight into the bulky build of his father.

"Ow." He was saying that a lot lately, wasn't he? Reeling back, he took a few moments to regain his composure - all that muscle was harder than he'd expected. "Hey, Dad."

"Afternoon," he replied plainly. "Wait, we already had this conversation."

Zavier chuckled. "Yeah. Is Mom home yet?"

"Nope. Just a few more hours 'till she is, though, if you wanna talk to her."

He nodded in reply, and as Zavier's father walked down the hallways, towards the dining room, he followed. "I kinda have a... school project about... memories," he said. "You mind answering a couple questions?" Earlier, he'd had that headache when he woke up. Taking a leap of logic, if that was some side effect of mind control, then he'd feel it again as Kris tried to get the answers. Probably not the best method he could use, but whatever - he couldn't think of anything better.

Turning to him, Dad narrowed his eyes almost imperceptibly, but quickly regained his earlier smile. "I'd be glad to. What do you wanna know?"

"... Um..." He paused for a few moments, trying to recall something in his distant past. "At my seventh birthday party, what was the theme?"

"Space, if I remember correctly."

... Yeah, that's accurate. He continued: "Who did I invite?"

Dad raised an eyebrow, but recited a list of names regardless. It was incomplete, with several points where he paused as if unsure, but that was normal. There were about twenty guests, most of which he barely spoke to anymore.

Excluding Scarlette. She was there, and he'd never forget her.

And so, the interview continued, with Zavier asking whatever obscure things he could remember, and his father answering to the best of his ability. It carried on for several minutes, and logically, he should be satisfied at this point, but his conscience seemed to be screaming at him not to stop.

"What was the last argument I had with you?"

"It was over your exams. You failed Maths, I was pissed off. Fighting ensued."

"And how'd you feel then?"

"... What?" Dad cocked his head in confusion, as if he'd just been asked an exceedingly difficult question.

"Disappointed? Sad? That stuff." Though they rarely confided their feelings in each other, Zavier knew his own family enough to tell exactly how they'd have felt at that moment.

A long, awkward silence ensued, and Zavier shifted his paws impatiently. "If you can't answer-"

Then he screamed as a pain shot through him. His vision flashed red, and he scrambled backwards, fueled by fear. Around him, his home melted away, revealing rhe darkness of the void. It's an illusion, he realised belatedly. Standing on his hind legs, he looked around for a feasible weapon, but found none.

... Yeah, he was gonna die.

Next regular-narrative post will be told by Scarlette or Arianna, since Zavier has now officially gotten his time in the limelight, and then some. This is, like, a thousand words. Before that, though, a fair amount of actual diary stuff, since that's probably what you came expecting.

The idea was that everyone under the illusion would be given his/her own version of the perfect world, so they wouldn't feel any need to think, "Hey, what about Kris?" Incidentally, Zavier's not a very ambitious person, so he's just at home, living a regular life. Each of them had a separate one, and this is Zavier's.

(Also, as you can see, Kris isn't the best of strategists.)
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Postby Piefan » Sun Nov 15, 2015 8:19 pm

Ha! I knew something was coming!

Okay, yeah, sorry. I just really needed to get that out of my system. I would've yelled it at Arianna, but she probably wouldn't have listened. From the time I woke up, she was sitting opposite me, eyes scrunched in concentration.

I just kinda assumed she was meditating, at first. I mean, I've never seen her do it, but she looks like the type of person who would meditate a bunch.

When she opened an eye to glare at me, I decided it would be best not to bother her. Turning away, I looked for the rest.

I found only empty space.

"Uh, hey, Ari." -Me

"My name is Arianna." -Arianna

"Well, yeah, but it's so... long." -Me

"... Four syllables. It is four syllables. It would take less than a second to add 'Anna' to your nickname." -Arianna

"So then I'll call you Anna?" -Me

"... No. Kindly shut up." -Arianna

She shut her eyes again, continuing to ignore me. I waved my hand in front of her, shoved her, but she didn't respond. At last, I spoke.

"So where did the rest go?" -Me

"From what I know, Kris did something. Most likely, he threw them through a portal to a post-apocalyptic land." -Arianna

"... Oh. How can I help?" -Me

"You can't. Shush, so I can concentrate on solving this." -Arianna

"You can solve this by sitting here and closing your eyes?" -Me

"That's how magic works, yes." -Arianna

I chose not to argue with her; it seemed like she would just ignore me, anyway. Around me was the average landscape - an expanse of darkness, neverending and unchanging.

I stood, then began to wander away.

Or, well, not wander: that kinda implies that I had no idea where I was going. And per se, I didn't. I just wanted to leave, and heading in a single direction seemed like the best way. (Why, yes, I did spend five minutes rephrasing that statement so I wouldn't have to say "one direction".)

I ran through the platforms and leaped over the gaps between them, fueled by the compulsion to leave. It was unreasonable, probably, but who cares? Arianna didn't, and without anyone else here, I couldn't really say that there was somebody who would give a damn.

At last, my energy ran out, and I realised I had no idea where I was, in relative position to her. That didn't bother me as much as it should have. If she wanted to find me, she probably knew how. Otherwise, she didn't need me.

A blur of dark brown flashed past me.

I jumped back, nearly falling over in the process. Frantic, I scrambled forward in an attempt to keep my balance, before the same blur appeared again and I was standing steadily on all fours.

"Uh, who was that?" -Me

Silence.

"Come on! Show yourself!" -Me

Again.

"Whoever the ham-" -Me

A slender brown tail reached up from under the platform, waving around as if trying to get my attention. For a brief moment, I stared at it, utterly dumbfounded, before I walked in its direction. Crouching on all fours, I looked down.

Khairul hung in an awkward position from the platform, claws dug into it to keep from falling. Despite his obvious attempts to look neutral, he was plainly terrified. I couldn't blame him, really. Without a second thought, I offered him a paw. It took a few seconds for him to accept it - he seemed reluctant to move, in case he lost his grip.

(What would happen if he did, anyway? We don't need to sleep or breathe, so I'd assume that would apply to all body processes, and it'd be nearly impossible to die. The air pressure might... Ugh, my head hurts.)

At last, he swung up, landing less than gracefully beside me.

"What were you doing there?" -Me

"Well, you see, on this particular day-" -Khairul

"Wait, is this gonna be one of those things where you spend six hours talking about something which could be said within ten minutes?" -Me

"I am not that long-winded." -Khairul

"Maybe. I don't know. Where are the rest?" -Me

"I have not a clue." -Khairul

"... How?" -Me

"Again: not a clue. To summarise as briefly as possible, I can only assume that the monotony and conditions of this place led to vivid hallucinations. When they faded..." -Khairul

"... You found yourself there. You're sure it couldn't have been illusions of some kind?" -Me

"Everything I told you is based upon educated guesses. I am not sure of anything." -Khairul

"Oh." -Me

Again, an awkward silence ensued. They seem to happen a lot when in Khairul's presence.
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby frankie (dup) » Mon Nov 16, 2015 1:47 pm

I'm kind of late but you nailed Ashly in the pawchat entry! :) Excited for the next post!
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Postby Piefan » Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:32 pm

"Do you hear that?" -Me

"Hear what?" -Khairul

"That." -Me

He glared at me - that admittedly wasn't a very helpful answer - but I ignored him. The noise had caught my attention. It was soft and distant, to the point where I wasn't even sure I was hearing it, but it stood out against the almost utter silence I'd gotten used to by this point.

Besides, I'd been doing nothing for the group the whole time. I was kinda hoping to make up for that.

"It's coming from... over there." -Me

"Wait. Thalia, are you sur-" -Khairul

"Honestly? No." -Me

"Then-" -Khairul

"Come on." -Me

He scowled at me, but followed anyway as I scampered off. I doubt it was so much because he trusted me as because he had no choice - he had no idea where Arianna was - and yet, I didn't care. There might be danger, and I was gonna find out about it.

A flash of pale brown blurred past me. I looked at where it'd gone, only to see Khairul.

"Wait, Khairul, was that you again?" -Me

"... What?" -Khairul

"You know, that... thing." -Me

"???" -Khairul

He'd never been the most expressive of cats - believe me, that's saying a lot; Clawri's the nearest land dominated by them, and most of its residents are stoic as all ham - but even I could see he was confused. Smiling weakly, I turned back and continued where I'd been heading at first. Cranberries, am I hallucinating now?

Anxiety made me impatient, and I found myself speeding up. Khairul followed behind me, not as quick, but twice as swift. His paw pads didn't make any noise, even when he was running. How do these people even stomp their feet?

In my haste, I tripped, nearly falling into the abyss below. Before I could, though, Khairul grabbed me by the tail, yanking me back. He's actually pretty weak, but I was already trying to scramble backwards, and the force of his pull helped me regain balance.

"Thanks." -Me

Again, he said nothing. I'm sensing a pattern here.

Still, I couldn't really complain about that, seeing as I was trying to listen for something here, and it was hard enough to hear without other voices talking over it.

I've never really been comfortable with long periods of silence, though. After a while, when I had already figured which direction to go in for sure, I decided I might as well make some conversation.

"How was your day?" -Me

"... Are you asking that seriously?" -Khairul

"Uh, yeah, you're right. Dumb question." -Me

"Naturally. On another note, do you think the others are still alive?" -Khairul

"Yes." -Me

"And what makes you so confident?" -Khairul

"I like to call it hope." -Me

"I prefer the term 'foolishness'." -Khairul

I bit my lip, tooth digging into fur, until I realised I'd apparently managed to pierce through skin, and a sharp pain shot through my mouth. How do I even manage to mess up like that?

Not that I had much time to dwell on that, because right then, I spotted Scarlette in the distance.

*subtly slips worldbuilding into story* Clawri roughly translates to, um, "Claw Place" (they aren't very good namers) in the language of the cats. Clawrians aren't very peaceful, as you may have guessed. At the same time, though, they aren't very war-oriented either. They're, uh... Okay, I don't know. Let's just say they're all magical... shamans...? Yeah. Shamans.

Though Khairul and Fatin have Arabic names, not all cats do. They come from the province of Alinia - which, needless to say, is different from Clawri. Alinian cats, in this 'verse (note: this is an entirely different universe from the Lychee, if you read that), are usually more cheerful and expressive than the stoic guys Thalia describes Clawri citizens as.

*flies out of window*
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